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Redline for Labra <3 by Blitz.

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Redline for Labra <3

Postby Blitz. » Mon Nov 18, 2013 4:01 pm

Alrighty, I am no good at advice, but I'll try and explain what I can of anything I changed. c:
And remember, to anyone--- I am a style based artist, so my anatomy is in no way perfect, these are all opinons.
I tried my best to look at the original lines to form my opinions, of course.

In all honesty you did great! I only had to make a few changes really. vuv

1. You did very well! Just make the snout a little less dipped.

2. All you need to do here is watch the sizing and placing of the ear. (Size mostly depends on the type of JBD though.)

3. Define the neck a little more, and the direction of the fur. (I added blue lines to kinda give an idea of how I think the neck might look.)

4. Nothing much to add here, just define the cheeks a bit more.

I hope I don't come off as blunt or rude, these are all just kinda opinions. You did excellent! I hope this is useful. ;w;

Honestly I kinda messed up around the bottom jaw on my sketch. OTL
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Re: Redline for Labra <3

Postby Clive » Mon Nov 18, 2013 6:06 pm

GORgeous as always
I do adore the way you draw their eyes son
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Re: Redline for Labra <3

Postby labradude » Tue Nov 19, 2013 12:57 am

This is wonderful!

Thank you for the advice, I really appreciate it. ;v;
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