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Explosive - WiP by Siriro

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Explosive - WiP

Postby Siriro » Sat Nov 16, 2013 11:08 pm

So, here's the deal; I'm attempting to draw something realistic, something I'm not terribly good at.
So I decided to post this as a sketch, and if you see anything that looks off, could you please tell me?
So I can change it, make it look better, before actually finishing cos that'll probably take a while and it's quite horrible to be honest to finish and then find out that you have this major mistake staring you in the face.

I also want it to look explosive, which it doesn't really do now >_>

So, if you see anything I could change, please post! <3
Thank you <3 c:

So yeah, as usual, no stealing my art, thank you very much!
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Re: Explosive - WiP

Postby . : cry : . » Sun Nov 17, 2013 2:14 am

The front leg looks a little off, just the angle it's bent at. Maybe stretch it out a little more so its pawpads are facing forward?
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Re: Explosive - WiP

Postby Siriro » Sun Nov 17, 2013 3:14 am

Thanks c: Will do
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Re: Explosive - WiP

Postby ty_tay » Thu Nov 28, 2013 9:33 am

I'm afraid that I would have to agree with cry on the front legs. It almost looks like you added in a joint where there shouldn't be one... I think you should try extending the upper portions of the legs a bit and then shortening the lower portions. Other than that I think it looks great :D
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