The redline itself took less than a few minutes. I have notes below of what I think you need to correct. But remember, take these things with a grain of sand. It's my own personal style, and as such, it may not be perfect x3
- Set the ears forward more, with a more distinct shape and curve.
Of course the position would change, but the base needs to be closer to the back of the skull and the tips more forward for a general pose ^^ Also, round them off more, and the inside of the ear isn't so large.
Smaller nose, with an indentation into the jaw to show the mouth.
Put an indentation into the jaw to show that the mouth is there. Keep this when connecting the mouth to the outer jaw, but make it less prominent. It helps shape the features of the face ^^ Make your nose smaller, also.
Eyes are closer to the top of the skull.
They aren't set into the cheeks, but more of a side forehead. ^^
Arched back, plus fur EVERYWHERE
It isn't so much a level back, but arched and it doesn't slope downwards naturally. It is more of an arc, before rounding of into the butt. Don't be afraid to add fur! The neck needs to be fluffier, and the chest only slightly more so, plus a fluffy but and stomach. Of course, though, you can add fluff anywhere necessary x3
Larger, more defined paws.
The paws need to be large enough to balance the wolf. Also, make them longer and more blockier, as although round paws are nice in chibi form, realistically they aren't so ^^;
And that's all I can think of right now. Remember this is my style. It may not work so well for you ;u; Hope this helps! <3
