[4kcuo]

sorry i noticed some things in there and just asfghjk
my advice to you; i'm not an awesome artist so don't take me too seriously xDD this is in my style, so you can edit stuff to suit yours. i would make your body shorter; legs maybe a bit thicker. i dunno. but i usually draw the shoulders much higher than you did; when lining, a long neck can look a bit awkward ;^;

[ElementStar]

Thanks, Ara <3

Yeah, I tend to make bodies too long, have you seen my fursona's ref? |3

I think I will try to do a mix of our styles, though trying to use your anatomy.
This is a lot of help Ara c:

[4kcuo]

pfffffft what anatomy

hey hey no problem ;o; i really want you to win cause you deserve an awesome bby like her<33
i'm glad i could help in any way i could ;u;

[ElementStar]

ppffftt

Awwww... thanks <3
I'm actually really surprised by how much I want her, seeing as I don't have much of a connection to the character she is based off of... but, I just do ;3;

You did more than help, you saved me ;u; /fails at anatomy so bad

[Koryu]

You should make an editable c: Id color it like, fifty times cx