Hello lionblaze<3
(:
Sorry for long reply, I can't decide what to do with your entry. Obvioulsy, your art is good enough, that is. And I like your information about yourself, but all your horses seems to be a bit unfinished, right? I'm looking at them in the little window, and I like them, but when I open it to see normal size, I like them less than it need. This one
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=1917205is the best looking for me.
Look at this horse
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/oekaki/image/image.php?id=1619251&size=large&format=auto&rev=1375352609, just coloring, little details, some spots, different shades, do you understand what I mean?
If you want, I could offer to you, to make one more entry. Just one, to see how it will turns. Take this horse
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/123/9/b/rusty_silver_dapple_colt_1_by_venomxbaby-d4yffoh.jpg as reference, and make please it minimal reverse type(Just one blaze, nothing more). Just try to create coat as possible close to the reference.