[∅blivi∅n]

↳ heheh. OK so I was bored and while trying to get my friend into homestuck i sent him a bunch of random little quizzes and he kept asking me what I got on them so I had to retake them and I got knight of doom on this test.

↳ And then I decided to draw me as the knight of doom going back to check out the quest bed. (And I drew in a little purple newt-y thing as a consort because I could) So yeah!! (No glowy stuff this time!! I'm improving!!) Land of Rivers and Bridges (LORAB) just incase anyone was wondering. So those things that look like paths are actually poorly drawn rivers (yay!)

↳ But in all seriousness, I would love some constructive criticism.

-->Clockwork Monster (a.k.a. Oblivion)

[tawnypelt3]

I'm not near so good with pixel art as you are, but I can try to give a little crit. ^^

I think you could have used just a tad more contrast with the green shades of the environment (the clothing is fine).
There's that funny little notch by the newt-thing's head, not something you need to improve so much as just a tiny mistake.
Your curved lines are really nice, around the paths and mountain but most noticeably on the body.
I think you could use a little less contrast between the path color and the grey environment color. With no glowy stuff, I think it should blend a little more, look more foggy and ethereal (depending on what world you're in, I suppose).
Your person is perfect. Shaping, shading, proportion, everything is perfect. Except the eyes. They sorta creep me out. A little too big (though that's totally normally for Homestuck), and the gradient and lack of definitive pupil just give it an inhuman look.

I congratulate you on making that teeny tiny portal. It looks great. 8)

[SquiddyPanda]

ASDFGHJKL this is amazing akskjfhdg homestuck <3 x3

[kirill]

;O; Obliv y u so amazing
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[∅blivi∅n]

↳ @Tawnypelt3 Thank you so much for all of this! You are totally right, my contrast does need to be adjusted . I'm not very good at color choices. Thank you for pointing out the odd little notch, i didn't notice it before, either. And the things that look like paths are just poorly drawn rivers I just couldn't figure out how to make them look like water... thank you again for your critiques! (Thank you so much for the comment about the portal oh my god that thing was a pain, i'm glad to hear it paid off!)

↳ @Mituna! Hehe, thank you <3

↳ @Kat daww thank you <3

-->Clockwork Monster (a.k.a. Oblivion)