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I'm Just on a Roll, Aren't I? by troblsomtwins829

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I'm Just on a Roll, Aren't I?

Postby troblsomtwins829 » Sun May 12, 2013 11:51 am

Okay, a few thumb ups:

    1. Fairly accurate anatomy
    2. followed basic structure
    3. made room for merged "edges"

A few downs,
    1.Legs were too short
    2. Ribs were sticking out
    3. the head is lopsided
    4. you didn't start with head
    5. multiple layers???

Don't take the downs as super bad though, they're pointers for improvement.
For a body structure this detailed, I had to use my 'special sketching' technique allowing for as much accuracy as possible.

Firstly, ALWAYS start with the circle on the head, it provides more than just location, but also size, balance, and a good general starting point. moving down the neck, if your arms are anywhere period, especially up like that, it's always best to map out the collar bones, they move with your shoulders and are excellent reference points.
Arms are okay
your hips were fine, a little sharp and wide, but fine.
Thighs are okay, they were both the same length and approx. width
Always allow room for the legs. if you're doing a full body shot, ALWAYS allow enough room for the legs. move it up if you have to, but not moving the sketch to make room will leave them short, stubbed and generally out of proportion to the rest of the the body.
I hate drawing toes, but I did provide those as well.

Hopes this helps you out, if you need more references or help let me know, but otherwise I do have another tutorial with the basic structure of a person located here: viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1678922&hilit=human
along with some others in the sketches section of my gallery.

hopes this helps and good luck with more human drawings :)

Oh, and try to keep your sketches on the same layer, mine was on two, but that's because it helps separate the mess beneath from the neater one above.
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Re: I'm Just on a Roll, Aren't I?

Postby the.kitsune.prince » Mon May 13, 2013 12:29 am

Thank you ^u^
And I used multiple layers just in case it dont look right whilst I'm drawing XDD <3
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Re: I'm Just on a Roll, Aren't I?

Postby troblsomtwins829 » Mon May 13, 2013 1:54 am

I kinda got that ^^ and I understand, lots of people do that now and then, but it makes it rather confusing at times. just remember that when sketching, you use the smallest pen size possible at half opacity.
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