As she tumbled over the side of the magestic ship her heart started to pound beneath her dress, her legs hit the water, a surge of icy liquid filled her body. her hair flapped around her and her arms flailed pathetically, she knew that her end was nere. The water got darker and darker,her lungs were screaming for air. untill her eyes closed and darkness consumed her...
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