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For ~Whitey~ by welcome to carnival.

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For ~Whitey~

Postby welcome to carnival. » Wed Feb 27, 2013 2:32 am

sorry this was the best i could manage... x]
i'm not happy with this...
if you want changes just say!! i can also remove the ball of wool if you want ^^
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Re: For ~Whitey~

Postby Lickalicious » Wed Feb 27, 2013 2:37 am

Just some critique..

THe ball of yarn is nice, keep it, I would say. The tail is kind of iffy, though.. It needs to be positioned a little more down and wavy.. That's it. :3 Good job otherwise however.
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I know it's late. I know you're weary.
I know your plans don't include me. Still here we are, both of us lonely.
Longing for shelter from all that we see.
Why should we worry? No one will care girl.
Look at the stars now, so far away.. We've got tonight. -KLAINE-

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Re: For ~Whitey~

Postby welcome to carnival. » Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:33 am

thank you for the ctitism!!! (and otherwise too ^^) <33
i changed the tail and now it looks like a snake..... x]
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Re: For ~Whitey~

Postby Lickalicious » Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:37 am

Ha it's okay :3

I like it, though. ^^
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I know it's late. I know you're weary.
I know your plans don't include me. Still here we are, both of us lonely.
Longing for shelter from all that we see.
Why should we worry? No one will care girl.
Look at the stars now, so far away.. We've got tonight. -KLAINE-

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Re: For ~Whitey~

Postby welcome to carnival. » Wed Feb 27, 2013 8:30 am

ok ^^ thank you! :3 <33 :D
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Re: For ~Whitey~

Postby ~Whitey~ » Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:22 pm

This is really pretty! Thank you so much!! - hugglez -
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Re: For ~Whitey~

Postby welcome to carnival. » Thu Feb 28, 2013 12:58 am

glad you like it ^^ x] :D
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