[MapleNeko]

if ya read warriors then ya know this part of the series.
I really hope this is intermediate worthy, feed back and critic is very welcome

[LOCW_Bluestarwarrior]

Not really intermediate worthy, but good!

And it reminds me of Flamefur's death, but he's orange.. Or is it just the water? XD

[Segie]

I think its really good. c: I think its fine in intermediate.

[MapleNeko]

Not really intermediate worthy, but good!

And it reminds me of Flamefur's death, but he's orange.. Or is it just the water? XD

We'll thanks for your feed back :3, and this is bluestars death

I think its really good. c: I think its fine in intermediate.

thankie