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Redline? by .sweetypie.

Artist .sweetypie. [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 1 minute
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Redline?

Postby .sweetypie. » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:03 am

My first realistic, eh? If you hadn't already guessed, I need some help with the nose, so... Post if you can redline for me! <3
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Re: Redline?

Postby slothly » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:18 am

I could maybe help with the nose (I'm not that great at noses either :S)
The main thing here is that there isn't much of a forehead or chin, with too much space for the nose. I always used to do this too, i was always focusing on the eyes too much! ^^
You've got the features really well, just not in the right proportions :)
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Re: Redline?

Postby Little-Chibi » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:22 am

Amazing!! I love the hair especially.
Chip the glasses and crack the plates!
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Blunt the knives and bend the forks!
That's what Bilbo Baggins hates
Smash the bottles and
burn the corks!

Cut the cloth
and tread on the fat!
Pour the milk on the pantry floor!
Leave the bones on the bedroom mat!
Splash the wine on every door!
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Dump the crocks in a boiling bowl:
Pound them up with a thumping pole.
And when you've finished if any are whole,
send them down the hall to roll!

That's what Bilbo Baggins hates!
So carefully!
Carefully with the plates! ~J.R.R Tolkien (The Hobbit)
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Re: Redline?

Postby Blockbeap » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:23 am

This is really good! Id love to help if you would like.
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Re: Redline?

Postby foxxbreath » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:24 am

I'm good at noses on paper, I coul give it a try! :3
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Re: Redline?

Postby .sweetypie. » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:28 am

♞Grell Sutcliffe wrote:
I'm good at noses on paper, I coul give it a try! :3

Thanks!

Blockbeap wrote:This is really good! Id love to help if you would like.

Thank you so much, that would be great!

Slothly wrote:I could maybe help with the nose (I'm not that great at noses either :S)
The main thing here is that there isn't much of a forehead or chin, with too much space for the nose. I always used to do this too, i was always focusing on the eyes too much! ^^
You've got the features really well, just not in the right proportions :)

I will edit the proportions now, thanks for the advise!

Little-Chibi wrote:Amazing!! I love the hair especially.

Thank you! I've always had trouble with hair XD
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Re: Redline?

Postby .sweetypie. » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:31 am

Do the proportions look any better?
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Re: Redline?

Postby Blockbeap » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:35 am

Sweetypie978 wrote:
Blockbeap wrote:This is really good! Id love to help if you would like.

Thank you so much, that would be great!

Okay cool just add my name and i can start.
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Re: Redline?

Postby .sweetypie. » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:37 am

Blockbeap wrote:
Sweetypie978 wrote:
Blockbeap wrote:This is really good! Id love to help if you would like.

Thank you so much, that would be great!

Okay cool just add my name and i can start.

Okay, all added ^^
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Re: Redline?

Postby Acidic » Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:29 am

I can redline <3
I've done quite a few human faces on paper; so i'm not inexperienced with them. ;3
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