[Gvvdgrief]

(lazy Title is lazy T-T)

okay, this was just mainly going to be a practice but I really liked how it looked and I made it into something =P

yes I know, the lines are a little messy but that's because.. and I don't know where I went wrong...but somewhere in the middle my lines just kinda freaked out >.<

besides that... I hope you like xD I'd love to have some crit, it helps me a lot ^-^

[CarriedAway]

The only problems I really see is that the midsection is skinnier than it's neck and the eye is missing some details-once you fix those you'll be golden!

[Gvvdgrief]

ahh yes, thank you C: I had the eye detailed but I guess when I was using Burn tool it darkened too much to see.. thanks!