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Betrayal and Deciet by rem sleep

Artist rem sleep [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 9 minutes
Drawing sessions 1
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Betrayal and Deciet

Postby rem sleep » Mon Dec 10, 2012 3:56 pm

Everyone, meet Hoax.
I was pretty much drawing a vent art and it turned out actually a bit more complicated than I planned.
I'd LOVE some critique if you could, and I'm aware the anatomy's off. xD
IT'S HARD SHADING ON A BLACK CHARACTER. xP
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Re: Betrayal and Deciet

Postby ojoku » Mon Dec 10, 2012 3:57 pm

Oh my God this is amazing! Am I really in beginner's art, because this really shouldn't be.
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Re: Betrayal and Deciet

Postby JesusFreak03801 » Mon Dec 10, 2012 4:30 pm

*GASP* Oh. My. Gosh. It's beautiful! Well done!!! I especially love how you did the wings! *faints from the epicness*
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Re: Betrayal and Deciet

Postby ,,,, » Mon Dec 10, 2012 5:09 pm

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Re: Betrayal and Deciet

Postby Heaven the Terrible » Tue Dec 11, 2012 2:32 pm

That's so awesome. I like the two-wolf effect. And the eyes/wings. Very...steamy...
I could go on and on, ahh, everybody's vent art is always so cool! O: (Even though you obviously have to suffer a little before you make it.)
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Re: Betrayal and Deciet

Postby Peaceful_Chaos » Tue Dec 11, 2012 2:46 pm

Uh oh.
YYYOOOUUUU ASKED FOR CRITICS
Well what stands out most is that wolves' necks are a bit longer and tails aren't that long. But the tail things probably just your style so that does not matter HURRAH
then if you staaaaaare
very cloooosely
The hind leg is too thick, try more of a rounded-in bone. I guessies.
The paws kind of look really small. The hind right paw is pretty much great but the front left paw looks a bit toooo flat. Like he's got a bunch o' toes sticking out of his leg X3. Imagine the back right paw roooootaaaaaating; the paw. finger. things. go out a little further.
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