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blue line by Yazhi

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Postby Yazhi » Mon Oct 29, 2012 11:53 pm

hope this helps. i cant draw paws. its a fail and i could do 10 times better!
i listened to troublemaker atloy when i drew this fully on love that song!!!!
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Re: blue line

Postby W o l f ;; » Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:20 am

There are some things you could improve, like the month needs to be a little bit lower and the chin needs to go a bit to the right
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I am a wolf,
running through the trees.
Following the scents
on the midnight breeze.
I am a wolf,
standing with my beautiful mate.
We must stand strong and ]brave
and face any callenges sent by fate.
I am a wolf,
hunting with my pack.
With the young and old wolves waiting
for meat to be brought back.
I am a wolf,
wild, fierce and free.
Living in forests and mountains
s t r e t c h i n g as far as the eye can see.
I am a wolf,
I'd never want to be anything more.
And I hope that even after I'm gone,
there will be wolves forevermore.

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Re: blue line

Postby Yazhi » Tue Oct 30, 2012 3:37 am

tank you for the crutasims but as i said i can do 10 times better.
imprrovents for you
*the body dosent slope
*its not that thin
*behnd legs are placed wrong,
*heads to bug for the body
*hind legs need to be longer
*ears too thin and pointy
*eye is jsut wrong
and theres a dew more but i cant remenber
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Re: blue line

Postby W o l f ;; » Tue Oct 30, 2012 3:41 am

Like I said, I can do a thosand times better._.
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I am a wolf,
running through the trees.
Following the scents
on the midnight breeze.
I am a wolf,
standing with my beautiful mate.
We must stand strong and ]brave
and face any callenges sent by fate.
I am a wolf,
hunting with my pack.
With the young and old wolves waiting
for meat to be brought back.
I am a wolf,
wild, fierce and free.
Living in forests and mountains
s t r e t c h i n g as far as the eye can see.
I am a wolf,
I'd never want to be anything more.
And I hope that even after I'm gone,
there will be wolves forevermore.

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Re: blue line

Postby Yazhi » Tue Oct 30, 2012 3:43 am

ummm i dont think you ever said that. and ummmm ok......
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Re: blue line

Postby Yazhi » Tue Oct 30, 2012 3:45 am

would you like to prrove it to me when that you can do 1000 times better?
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Re: blue line

Postby W o l f ;; » Tue Oct 30, 2012 10:35 pm

Like I said, my anatomy is better.
viewtopic.php?t=1447034
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I am a wolf,
running through the trees.
Following the scents
on the midnight breeze.
I am a wolf,
standing with my beautiful mate.
We must stand strong and ]brave
and face any callenges sent by fate.
I am a wolf,
hunting with my pack.
With the young and old wolves waiting
for meat to be brought back.
I am a wolf,
wild, fierce and free.
Living in forests and mountains
s t r e t c h i n g as far as the eye can see.
I am a wolf,
I'd never want to be anything more.
And I hope that even after I'm gone,
there will be wolves forevermore.

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Re: blue line

Postby Yazhi » Tue Oct 30, 2012 10:43 pm

GangnamStyle wrote:Like I said, my anatomy is better.
viewtopic.php?t=1447034


youve really upset me now im sitting here crying becaise of what youve said
and i csn still see alot wrong with that.
*body too long and thin
*the nose dosent curve at the end
*head should be bigger to accomedate the mussle
*the front legs arnt that shape
*necks too long
*tail dosent curve like that
the front leg at the back should be more foward
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Re: blue line

Postby Yazhi » Tue Oct 30, 2012 10:45 pm

you should be more polite when dont say your better than othere people because thats just not nice
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Re: blue line

Postby W o l f ;; » Tue Oct 30, 2012 10:47 pm

FreeWolf wrote:
GangnamStyle wrote:Like I said, my anatomy is better.
viewtopic.php?t=1447034


youve really upset me now im sitting here crying becaise of what youve said
and i csn still see alot wrong with that.
*body too long and thin
*the nose dosent curve at the end
*head should be bigger to accomedate the mussle
*the front legs arnt that shape
*necks too long
*tail dosent curve like that
the front leg at the back should be more foward

You are really getting on my nearves now. Thiis is my opinion, but my anatomy is better than yoours. I see you are giving me crit that you could too improrve on yourself. Also the top bit of what you said is spam ._.
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I am a wolf,
running through the trees.
Following the scents
on the midnight breeze.
I am a wolf,
standing with my beautiful mate.
We must stand strong and ]brave
and face any callenges sent by fate.
I am a wolf,
hunting with my pack.
With the young and old wolves waiting
for meat to be brought back.
I am a wolf,
wild, fierce and free.
Living in forests and mountains
s t r e t c h i n g as far as the eye can see.
I am a wolf,
I'd never want to be anything more.
And I hope that even after I'm gone,
there will be wolves forevermore.

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