[Chii-sai]

Well, I'm not a HUGE MLP:FIM fan, but my boyfriend makes me watch it with him every once in a while... he's such a Brony... Anyway, I decided to make my own pony, and made a family from that.

*Tangled Mane - Dark yellow stallion ; father.
*Curly Qu - Light pink mare ; mother.
*Nilla Bee - Dark pink foal ; sister.
*Key Note - Light yellow foal ; sister.
*Racing Storm - Light brown foal ; brother.

Tangled and Curly had three children, two of which were pegasi, but one was a normal earth pony, which is quite odd.

I'd LOVE some feedback on how I did because this is probably... eh, my second try at hooved animals. Ever. I don't really like drawing them.. but they turned out alright this time.

Comments and crit always welcome!

~Chii-sai

{NO STEALING. I own these characters!}

[Chii-sai]

Crit please?

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This a wonderful drawing! I really love it.

I think the adult's wings look a bit small. c:

[Chii-sai]

Thanks! Just the critique I was looking for!