[Kitteh]

Yeah, I've finally decided on a name for my new species - vél köttur (veil koh-tour), meaning 'machine cat' in Icelandic.

Anywho, these are possible lines for the 'big' Kotturs - still a WIP, and I'll be doing some anatomy fixes. But I like it okay so far. p:

There's something -really- bothering me about this xD If anybody would be willing to redline it for me if you happen to catch my mistake, I'd really appreciate it. ^^

- live in one large group in South America
- ranking system is strict
-females are underprivileged
- genetically passed-down robotic enhancements
- 'hair' and human accesories
- mostly natural bases, although dull unnatural colors aren't out of question
- paint faces to identify individual, symbol on chest/paint color to identify rank.
- For each rule broken, a scar is made upon a kottur's chest. Three scars = hunted to be killed.
-Thee species - 'stór ('big'), 'hratt' ('fast'), 'falinn' ('hidden')
-'Stór' are in charge of the muscle jobs, including fighting, punishing, and killing.
- 'Hratt' are in charge of speed jobs, including relaying messages, scouting, and tracking
- 'Falinn" are in charge of stealth jobs, including spying, stalking, and assassination.

Stór - 'Modern' big cats infused with the genes of ancient saber cats, for strength.
Hratt - Cheetah DNA mixed with that of falcons, for flight.
Falinn - 'Small' cat DNA combined with the DNA of color-changing animals like octopuses and chameleons, for camouflage.

- Must be natural (or dull unnatural) colored bases - any color markings. Falinn are an exception.
- Each design must have a unique hairstyle and at least three unique accessories.
- Face paint and rank tattoo on chest are necessary.
- Edits are encouraged, as this is a genetically unstable species prone to mutations.
- Robotic parts are rare - only one in ten Kottur have them.

Hooray for concepts! Sooo many ideas for these guys, but I think I would bore you all if I listed every single one. xD

[JoJosuke]

This is coming out amazing! Keep it up!

[dizzy hurricane.]

Gorgeous! <3

I would love to get my hands on one. *u*

[Kitteh]

Wow, that was fast response xD Thanks guys <3
And don't worry, you'll have your chance. |D I'll be starting the adoptables once I have all three sets of lines done and a header page set up. :3

[LOCW_Bluestarwarrior]

I think I see your problem (It's the only one I see) The stomach is rather flat, when cats have a chest, then a skinnier waist. Is that it? (Correct me if I'm wrong)

[StarHorse]

Um... I think that its the head, and the snout, and maby a littly body build.... but mostly the snout. too pointed- looks like dimented coyote. No offense, really, this is amazing drawing, just needs different head <3

[Shiko Hayashi]

I would love to redline Kitteh.
Also, love the name. Nicely done, with adding Kottur to it.
^_^

[Solarizing]

This looks great Kit! :3 I'm jealous of the legs/paws; you're so good! I agree with what StarHorse said though, the muzzle looks a bit odd. Can I redline? c:

[SubtleBurn03]

Wow it's really good! I can't wait for them to become adoptable ^^ And the only thing I can think of to change is the length of the snout. Maybe a tinsy tiny bit shorter.

[Kitteh]

Thank you guys so much for your opinions, and I think I see how to fix the muzzle now :3 Sure thing Sola & Shiko, I'll add you guys as soon as I make a few quick fixes to the lines. ^^