[. ME]

Foxfoot is a dark ginger tom with white paws and forest green eyes.

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[Car.]

Username:livykitty
New Name(Optional):leave it
Back-Story(One of the major things that will determine whether you get the cat or not!):begins with a battle between ThunderClan and RiverClan over Sunningrocks, a strip of land. ThunderClan is outnumbered and their deputy, FoxFoot, calls a retreat. In ThunderClan territory, the medicine cat, Spottedleaf receives a prophecy from the spirits of their ancestors, StarClan: "Fire alone can save our Clan." The leader, Bluestar says that it is impossible, because fire is feared by all the cats
Rusty, a house cat, runs into a ThunderClan apprentice, Graypaw, in his backyard. Rusty, however, does not run away, but fights back. Soon Bluestar and Lionheart, Graypaw's mentor, having watched the whole thing, invite Rusty to join ThunderClan. Rusty accepts the next day, but is unwelcomed by most of the Clan. Rusty loses his collar after a fight with Longtail, and Bluestar gives Rusty a new name: Firepaw. He forms a strong bond with Graypaw and Ravenpaw, but Firepaw finds out that Tigerclaw, an ambitious member of the Clan, murdered Redtail, and will stop at nothing to attain his goal of becoming Clan leader. Tigerclaw realizes that Ravenpaw might spill his secret, having watched Tigerclaw kill FoxFoot, so he plans to kill Ravenpaw. To prevent this from happening, Firepaw and Graypaw lead Ravenpaw to a barn where he would be safe and have company, living with a loner named Barley.
Tigerclaw realizes Firepaw knows his secret, but is still trusted by the Clan. ThunderClan gets in a battle with ShadowClan, and ThunderClan is victorious. Having won because of Firepaw, Bluestar gives him his warrior name, Fireheart, along with making Graypaw a warrior, giving him the name Graystripe.
Your Use?:fusa

[. ME]

Yes shouldn't be in your use. It should be something like "character" or "fursona".

[. ME]

....
You basically just copied the real story for the back-story...
And the deputy of ThunderClan at that time was Redtail...

[Car.]

yes but i reslly want this pet

[. ME]

You need to make your OWN story. Not steal the whole plot from the real first series.

[Car.]

Fox foot went up the hill there was a battle rubyclan had attacked featherClan his clan over a piece of territory he was battling the deputy of rubyclan jaywing he threw him and he landed in a fox trap it sank into his thoat killing him his leader redstar saw and and called a retreat foxfoot came home and saw the medicine cat,leafheart coming out of the nursery coming over too him she said your mate,lovepelt,has just had 3 kittens

[. ME]

I mean one for like...There past-Not a short story. Like...How did he end up here?
That is what back-story means, basically.

[Car.]

kk


FoxFoot born as a riverclan warrior and one day met a kittypet the kittypet took him to his twolegs who captured him and sold him to a nice little girl(me)