[kleinerdrache]

Well, I decided to try and do at least a decent Oekaki today ^^
My first experience of doing one that wasn't rushed with my tablet, and I'm pretty satisfied with how it turned out.

This is Katniss Everdeen, from the books The Hunger Games.

Didn't turn out exactly as I had hoped, but I am satisfied with m result :)

CONSTRUCTIVE Criticism is appreciated ^^

[RavenclawHobbit]

Nice!! I'm super-excited for to see this movie, I've read the books several times each. Really neat drawing

[kleinerdrache]

Thanks! Yeah, I wish I would be able to see it on opening night, but they aren't having one here. Have fun!

[kleinerdrache]

Anybody? I really want someone who can tell me / suggest how I can improve my online art xD

[cswolf.]

Were you going for the cartoon effect?

[kleinerdrache]

Were you going for the cartoon effect?

I was for this first Oekaki, because I haven't ever done a human before. ^^

[cswolf.]

It looks nice then :3

[kleinerdrache]

It looks nice then :3

Thanks! ^^

[Ploegy]

This is very nice for a first time, but I think the lips are a bit too small. Maybe work on the sizes of the facial features and you'll get a better likeness of the person. I hope this helped a bit. I also hope you don't take this in a mean way. I don't mean to be mean at all. You have a good start to it :]

[kleinerdrache]

This is very nice for a first time, but I think the lips are a bit too small. Maybe work on the sizes of the facial features and you'll get a better likeness of the person. I hope this helped a bit. I also hope you don't take this in a mean way. I don't mean to be mean at all. You have a good start to it :]

Oh no, thank you so much! I really appreciate it ^^