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How can i improve by Amymay99

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How can i improve

Postby Amymay99 » Tue Feb 14, 2012 11:15 am

Please tell me what i can improve on as I want to know how to make my drawings better I have attached a few that I drew on Paint thanks
Chase isn't one of my best
patch is my best dog
and Blossom my best horse
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Re: How can i improve

Postby Roonil Wazlib » Tue Feb 14, 2012 11:19 am

I love it! :D Maybe you could add some shading with the blending tool...and smooth out the lines. I'm not the best artist on the computer, but I'd say you're pretty good! :)
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Re: How can i improve

Postby Amymay99 » Tue Feb 14, 2012 11:40 am

Thanks i will try the shading tool next drawing
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Re: How can i improve

Postby muskox » Tue Feb 14, 2012 11:53 am

To improve I'd try shading and fur detail otherwise I'm not a expert on horses, but the anatomy looks pretty good.
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Re: How can i improve

Postby GhostlyOreo » Tue Feb 14, 2012 3:51 pm

Not intermediate advice is add shading use alpha lock, thinner brush color the whole horse in and the eyes could be repositioned to the right a bit. But the anatomy is really nice all you really need to do it touch it up and u could get featured!
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Re: How can i improve

Postby AuroraBeast » Tue Feb 14, 2012 4:10 pm

Hmm the Only thing I can think of is to make the jaw a bit wider, and/or move it a bit closer to the mouth, maybe make the top of the back leg rounder/thicker. Other than that it's perfect!
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Re: How can i improve

Postby Amymay99 » Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:52 am

Thanks guys
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