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Wolf Lineart by Shiyomi

Artist Shiyomi [gallery]
Time spent 3 hours, 2 minutes
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Wolf Lineart

Postby Shiyomi » Wed Feb 03, 2010 5:53 am

Ive been practicing my anatomy and lineart, and I think Im getting better but I still cant seem to get the other legs to look like Id like and its really bothering me. If someone could help me out and maybe redline in the things I need to work on/cant finish I would really appreciate it... I dont really know if Im allowed to do this or not, but I didnt think it would hurt to try.

Finished now, thanks for everyones help!
Last edited by Shiyomi on Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Anatomy Help?

Postby Burning Tears » Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:37 am

i did some suggests for you. i'm not the best artist, but i think it would look better if you followed some of my suggests. you can improvise my suggests if you want. you don't have to do it, though. like i said, it's just some suggests. ;)
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Re: Anatomy Help?

Postby Shiyomi » Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:41 am

Thanks, I think I might be able to do the back leg now thanks to everyones suggestions.
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Re: Anatomy Help?

Postby Lock » Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:06 am

I did a redline as well... By the way, it would look more realistic with four toes showing on the feet facing us. Just a tip. :3
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Re: Anatomy Help?

Postby Shiyomi » Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:54 am

I think Im just going to find a new position for that leg. It was just awkward for me to begin with.
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Re: Wolf Lineart

Postby ToxicMango » Thu Feb 04, 2010 12:43 pm

i like the legs! and i colored one! viewtopic.php?f=32&t=103957
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Re: Wolf Lineart

Postby Shiyomi » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:13 pm

Thank you! This is one of my better linearts and Im really proud of it ^_^
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Re: Wolf Lineart

Postby Balan » Fri Feb 05, 2010 1:54 pm

:D Cool! It looks great, and the paw IS correct. The foot has a curve in it when relaxed. Like cats. When cats are relaxed, their paws curve outward.
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Re: Wolf Lineart

Postby Shiyomi » Fri Feb 05, 2010 1:55 pm

It actually looked a lot worse until I got some help from people. Im still practicing my anatomy.
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Re: Wolf Lineart

Postby shibe » Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:07 pm

YES. YAY~! ♥

You did four toes on each paw! :lol: I hate it when people do three toes, I get so angry... Because wolves have four toes like dogs. xD I'm not sure why it makes me mad, but yeah.
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