Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby ELDER » Wed Dec 20, 2017 11:13 am

dude, 10/10.

some might think her white pelt is very plain, but in my eyes i think it makes her stand out. i love her lore and the gas mask concept is very nice dude. i think the brown/green accessories complement each other nicely, and doesnt make anything seem off.

I think her red eyes are very pretty, and i think its special that her eyes are different from her white/green/brown colors.

overall, i see nothing wrong here at all! if you put her in a large group of misc. characters, it would be easy to identify her. the name is PERFECT, has to be one of the most cutest and original names ive ever heard of. (i also love how she's afraid of unfiltered air, that is so adorable haha) but yeah, really awesome character dude! (can i also add i love your art? i love your dA gallery, good stuff)


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alright, i obviously need some ideas on how to make him stand out more, but im looking for simple designs (as if it wasnt simple enough lol but yeah) that won't make him look too over-the-top yknow? some ideas for accessories would be great also.
i'm mainly looking for designs i could put on his legs maybe? his colors were based off of this: https://imgur.com/a/wo3R0

anyhow, i dont really incorporate stories into my characters, but i do think of personalities- Thrain enjoys his solitude very much, unless he is with close friends. he enjoys studying bugs/other creepy crawlies and exploring. he doesn't sugar-coat things much, and usually says things without thinking about it beforehand. but he does has emotions, and he cares about his very few friends a lot. he's just a bit of a mess when it comes to being careful about his tone- it's also something he gets angry at himself for.
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby bear » Wed Dec 20, 2017 11:16 am

    I really like the design! Personally I don't think you need to add anything onto him.
    I love the simplicity and the brown, blue, red and cream colour go together really well (i love this combo)! I can't find anything I don't like about him!
    10/10

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby cornspurrd. » Wed Dec 20, 2017 1:35 pm

Aaaaaa OMG I love Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa The colors, And The Overall look Gaaaaa
10/10!!!

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Postby deathbell » Wed Dec 20, 2017 1:39 pm

    9/10
    I don't really have much critique for this character. The colors are simple and nice, the design is recognizable but not over-the-top. I'd just like to know the character's personality. Other than that, really cute!

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby snubbulls » Wed Dec 20, 2017 4:05 pm

9/10 even though I'm not a fan of the usual grey/red/black combo I think that he pulls it off rather well. I like how long his legs are, as they make it so that I can actually see him being a contortionist. The whole idea behind him is really rad too. I especially like that he can take off his head.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby zelos » Wed Dec 20, 2017 5:38 pm

      8/10 ;; Currently, his physical design is too simple for me. I think, if he's a witch, he should have witchy accessories maybe? Like a cape or some charms on a necklace/bracelet. I do like his concept, however, and I love dobermans.

      My new girl? Her tentative name is Lyric, but it might change. She's a sorceress who is really into stargazing, astronomy, and space in general and practices nature magic or something? She feels a deep connection to the stars and is able to, in a sense, predict the future by reading them? Not down to every last detail, but she can sense when something bad may happen, when a calamity is near or something. She likes to seclude herself from society, though she likes small woodland creatures.
      (If you've ever played Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Red or Blue, she's a little like Xatu.)
      She still needs to be fleshed out, so any ideas are appreciated!

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Asa Willow » Wed Dec 20, 2017 6:27 pm

10/10

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First of all, the design is plain beautiful. I adore the very natural color palette that also manages to stand out. The green adds a perfect touch to the nice red-brown color, and the accessories are very nice as well.
I also like her brief description, and I feel like there's a lot of potential for future development.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby hotel breakfast » Wed Dec 20, 2017 10:23 pm

10/10
honestly i love her description/personality! she seems like a really cool character, and the combination of the gold jewelry and the kind of abstractness(?) of the markings really gives her a strong and commanding presence that a goddess would have. the palette is very nice as well, and i like how the variations in the red keep the design interesting and fit with the fire theme.

this welsh springer spaniel(? mix) girl? (all by me)
no name or personality to share yet sorry! design is still really w.i.p. too so any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. (one thing in particular i'm wondering about is which colors look better for the ears? how it is on the side view or on the front/back views? or something else?)
thanks in advance for the rate and comment!
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Muggywort » Thu Dec 21, 2017 5:09 am

    7/10
    First off, I love natural looking dogs with a slightly unnatural coloration. She look so soft and sweet! I do really love her eye color and I really do adore her ears and personally think those colors go well with the design. Maybe if you added those colors elsewhere on her design it would balance it out more? Also possibly giving her freckles and dots size variation would give them more detail. The pink snout, elbows and stomach look kind of stark against their base coat. Maybe try making the pink more of a purple hue or make it less saturated to blend better with her design. Take my character,
    Evan for example. I am no proffesional designer so take my suggestions with a grain of salt.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby pigeon3456 » Thu Dec 21, 2017 12:12 pm

9/10 something about this character I really like. The design is very easy on the eyes, the color palette is really nice to look at. The design of the creature's anatomy is good too, there's something appealing about it. Her personality is very nice and i also love her backstory, it's interesting and adds a lot to the character.

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