Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

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Postby deathbell » Sun Dec 17, 2017 12:28 pm

    7/10
    I don't like human accessories on feral characters so it throws me off a little, especially when you're using such a natural-looking design. I really enjoy the simplicity of the character and I love the brownish-grey colors you chose, but I feel like there just needs to be a little more added in order to really make him pop and stand out. I'd also like to know at least a little about his personality other than just "laid-back" since that's kind of vague. Other than that, I think he's pretty cute!

    Vincenzo?
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    Vincenzo, or Vincent, is a mysterious creature who is a contortionist, a magician, and has a strong interest in black magic. He is absolutely obsessed with the circus he works and lives at. He acts like it's the only thing he's ever known, and that's pretty much true considering he acts so mysterious and avoids any questions involving his past, where he came from, when he joined the circus, etc. He is very dramatic and incredibly hysterical. Pretty much the only thing he seems to care about is the circus. He can remove his head from his body, and his eyes can also very randomly change colors (both scleras and pupils, it's always some combination of white, red, yellow, and black).
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Rooster Cult » Sun Dec 17, 2017 12:59 pm

10/10
I love these designs, he looks so cool!
So for accessories I would suggest a top hat with horns to poke through, a bow tie, and maybe a cape? I could see him pulling that off

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Windwolf0097 » Sun Dec 17, 2017 1:11 pm

9/10

I love her fashion and hairstyle! Gotta take a point off for her having no backstory, but all in all she and Wolf and lovely!

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby sketcheii » Sun Dec 17, 2017 1:20 pm

9/10

I love the story, so unique and interesting. I truly love his character personality, and the reasoning behind his accessories. All I must say is, I see far too much of "even through the pain, he smiles." kind of characters. Maybe instead of that, he could have some off days where he'll be "berserk" but any time other than that, he always shakes his head when he feels pain.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby kittykore » Sun Dec 17, 2017 5:55 pm

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Elfie » Sun Dec 17, 2017 6:16 pm

    8/10
    Nice anthro design, cute colours and an overall pleasing aesthetic. The light blue eyes tie the palette together and the freckling of his fur are simple enough not to be cluttered but complex enough not to be plain. Plus the dude reminds me of that one Angel from Supernatural ^^

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Spacepvp » Mon Dec 18, 2017 12:16 am

    Hello! Please keep in mind that the text down there is just my opinion and I don't want to offend you in any form or shape! Please don't be angry or mad at me or rate my characters lower because I rated yours low. If you like your character the way it is, it's completley fine, I don't want you to change anything! I'm just making suggestions. Thank you for your understanding <3
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    To be honest I do not like the hair / eye color combination, it just doesn't work for me. And also there is a little bit too much brown in this design for me but that's really it! I do like the hair she has in general, the white parts are a really nice touch! I especially like the hair when it's in a ponytail, looks really great! The outfits are also nice even though I prefer the left one! The necklace is pretty cool and I adore her boots! The little bows on there look like little mustaches -adorable!! So all in all this is a really cool and cute character! Just not my cup of tea <3
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby cyrevan » Mon Dec 18, 2017 12:33 am

10/10
She's so adorable! Her colors are perfect, so pleasing to look at. I like that she's a police student, it's quite unexpected for how she looks but that adds an interesting aspect to her! The info is really cute as well, love the carrot plush.
My only nitpick is that the name seems really generic, I like the first name but personally I wouldn't use "Carrot" as the last name.
Other than that I love her. Solid 10/10.
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Tricksters » Mon Dec 18, 2017 4:53 am

      (please take all my ratings with a grain of salt, thank you)

      7/10
      i really love the unique markings she has, and the shine on her tail, but nothing about her color wise really stands out, or really appeals to me, i'm sorry :'0 i think a highlight color would really help bring a focus point to the design, or maybe making the grey's darker so the white becomes the focus point would look nice?

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Postby deathbell » Mon Dec 18, 2017 5:31 am

    8/10
    tbh I like the design how it is. I love the colors a lot, they all work together very nicely and I absolutely love that he has this crystal growth. I'm not exactly sure what you'd be looking for in a redesign, but maybe either stick to lighter colors to match the crystals or darker colors like the brown shade. I'm also really curious about this character's backstory, if he has one. It'd be really interesting to know if he was born with these crystals or if he somehow obtained them. I think he's super cool and personally wouldn't change anything about his design.

    Vincenzo?
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    New character so he's still being developed. I'm not really looking to change the design but I'd love some suggestions for some sort of accessory!

    Vincenzo, or Vincent, is a mysterious creature who is a contortionist, a magician, and has a strong interest in black magic. He is absolutely obsessed with the circus he works and lives at. He acts like it's the only thing he's ever known, and that's pretty much true considering he acts so mysterious and avoids any questions involving his past, where he came from, when he joined the circus, etc. He is very dramatic and incredibly hysterical. Pretty much the only thing he seems to care about is the circus. He can remove his head from his body, and his eyes can also very randomly change colors (both scleras and pupils, it's always some combination of white, red, yellow, and black).
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