Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby cosmos.; » Fri Jan 22, 2016 8:39 am

Yours is set out fairly well, and I like the T, but it might be a bit too large. Apart from that, I really like your signature!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .normal.human. » Fri Jan 22, 2016 9:15 am

The image is a little blurry and nothing really sticks out. Nothing else really...
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby dorkasaurus » Fri Jan 22, 2016 3:34 pm

    your signature is a bit too tall for my screen! it's cut off a bit
    at the bottom, but it isn't too severe. i think it might look a
    tad tidier if you experimented a bit with the organization. i
    feel that the images on the left are light while the images on
    the right have darker pigmentation. a little bit of imbalance,
    but not really that big of a deal. perhaps start with trying to
    condense your text in the middle or give it a text box? ^^
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ryuunosuke » Fri Jan 22, 2016 3:37 pm

    ah, dorkasaurus! your signature is great.
    however, on the leftmost gif, the blonde guy's skin is all fuzzy! it's kinda pixely, you know? i think you can correct that by adding a sharp shadow or making the overlay a gif.
    also, the way the quote is arranged is kinda strange to me? i think it would flow smoother as:
    'i threw stones at
    my only (different font)ally."
    but that's just my opinion!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:11 am

It's all great, but the more realistic flowers feels a little weird. It's transparent, but it doesn't really blend in with the sig. I can't find anything else about the sig to be honest.

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby gods » Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:45 am

    the "m" in "my shot" is a bit hard to read with that font, but other than that, the font you chose is lookin really awesome! for the far right text boxes, i would add another one, or just something to fill the space, since theres an empty area at the bottom and it looks out of place and maybe extend the middle text boxes so they line up with "im not throwing away"? definitely not necessary, but it might make less blank space & match with the other side. its lookin pretty good so far tho! cant wait to see it finished c:
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Lillybear » Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:50 am

      It's very nice, just a few things.

      I think you made a spelling/grammar mistake. It says "it spread like a fever ahead"" instead of "it spreads like a fever ahead."

      Or maybe it's supposed to be like that? Idk.

      Also, the two "ts" overlapping each other looks a little strange.

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby northy. » Sat Jan 23, 2016 5:52 am

I really like this signature

But the colour is a bit too light for me to read easily, I have to get really close to the screen to differentiate the white from the blue.

The link that says 'this' sticks out a lot, maybe make it the same colour as the rest of the signature.

Other than that I do really love how small and simple it is and it is difficult to make a good signature without images.

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .normal.human. » Sat Jan 23, 2016 7:57 am

It is organized neatly, but lots of blank space (baby). The image on the left wasn't trimmed well, and the image on the right is really small.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .cat » Sat Jan 23, 2016 2:07 pm

i like your sig! bonus points for it being pmmm related :3 i think it
is a bit much, but that's only because i am a fan of simpler sigs. i'd
narrow it down to maybe one or two pictures on each side. also, i see
some of that is unofficial art...do you have permission for all of those
pieces? i've always been uneducated in all that art permissions area,
so forgive me if i'm wrong about that stuff X3

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