Just a little fun for when you have time to kill
by shortstop » Wed May 25, 2016 9:49 am
10/10: I love everything about this oml
The amount of fluff is just right so it's not overwhelming, the colour scheme and markings are completely on point, and the scarf/feather accessory just fits perfectly <3
Nori? Art by unknown, if anyone knows and could tell me I would be so grateful ;v;

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by ☼ ℓ ʋ м σ s » Wed May 25, 2016 11:22 am
5.5/10I really, really like the pastel orange, purple, yellow and pink together, they compliment each other beautifully. However, there is just way too much going on with this character's design, way too many colored accessories that clash. Frankly, I'm not a big fan of the overal species itself but that's just me. I'm also not too fond of the flower crown, but I admit they are cute.
How about Tinder?
Lines by Spottedfire23 on DA + design by MoonXKitty on DA His backstory is pretty long, if you don't want to read it just rate his design!
Tinder is a soldier in a savage rogue pack call The Misaggregation.
Tinder can come off as many things from first glance, and he can be very deceptive. Though, when you get to know him you'll unfortunatly find he's quite manipulative, strict and clever. Tinder is always finding his own solutions to conflicts he's stuck in, and he enjoys being the one in charge. If you somehow become very close to him, he does have a soft-spot and is as loyal of a friend you can possibly get. Tinder is very pessimistic, brave, and skeptical. He can easily see through a lie, and can almost always tell what a cat is thinking just by looking at them. If a cat is disregarding the rules or orders, he will often raise his voice at them. Despite all this, Tinder can be very sweet and is at times considerate of other's feelings. He has a little brother named Chinno,(deceased) and a little sister named Adder.(living) His mother's name is Kindle(deceased), his father's, Jengo(deceased).
Tinder's parents died when he was very young. His mother had heart-disease for many months before finally just dropping dead while scavenging for food with her kits. Tinder, Adder, and Chinno all ran to her side, crying out for help. Jengo heard the cry and rushed his kits' aid as fast as he could, devastated as he found out about what had happened to his mate. Jengo explained that she wasn't coming back, and that he would be taking care of them now. But alas, Jengo didn't stay around too long either. The four cats found a nice, completely empty, deserted building to live in and only went out to hunt and such. One morning Jengo woke up to the building's destruction. Two-leg vehicles were tearing it apart, and more and more of it was collapsing by the minute. All of the windows were boarded up as well as the door, except for one glass window. Jengo quickly grabbed the kits, not bothering to wake them up, and crashed through the glass window with the kit's in his jaws, making it out just before the building collapsed completely. Jengo landed clumsily, dropping the kits. Dispite them making it out alive, during the process Jengo had unfortunatly been pierced by several glass pieces. Knowing he couldn't defend them any longer, Jengo told Chinno, Adder, and Tinder to get out of there and to run as far from this place as they could. The three siblings were reluctant to leave, but eventually listened to their father's order, and ran away while he slowly bled out. After that, the kits were for a while, traumatized.
About three months later, Adder, Chinno, and Tinder were all accustomed to surviving, taking on the big city each day. The three littermates were savaging for prey one day, searching along the curbs for a trash bin to rummage through. Chinno found one, and leaped into it, exclaiming he had hit the "jack-pot." Tinder and Adder told Chinno they would be right back, and to call for help if he was in danger, leaving their brother to gather whatever food was in there while they walked into the alleyway nearby to search there. While they were looking in the alley way, they heard a cry for help. The two cats quickly raced out to find Chinno was still in the trash bin while it was being snatched up by a massive monster(vechicle). They yowled at him, telling him to get out of there, but Chinno was too afraid to jump from that height. Tinder offered to catch him, but Chinno made his decision too late; the young kitten was thrown in with the rest of the trash, and crushed just the same.
After that, Adder yowled at Tinder, claiming Chinno's death was his fault since he was the one who had suggested to look somewhere else and leave Chinno alone. Tinder and Adder had a long argument before each of them split, and went their separate ways. Tinder became very depressed after his brother's death and hadn't seen Adder for moons. He was comforted by a short-haired flame-point she-cat named Merah when she found him sobbing in a pipe. Merah and Tinder developed feelings for each other, and eventually became mates. He and Merah were strolling through the city one day, when they bumped into a hungry, thin, sickly looking smoke tabby cat named Sable. Merah asked if he needed help, and the weak tom accepted their assistance. Soon enough, Sable was in good health. Tinder grew very close to the tom, nearly thinking of him as a second brother. Though, Sable grew especially close to Merah and Tinder began to grow cautious of this, and eventually Sable's affection for Merah got to the point in which Tinder had to ask the tom to leave. Sable refused and instead attacked Tinder. Tinder was injured badly and left on the side of a curb to die while Sable forcefully took Merah away. Tinder hasn't seen her since and doesn't know anything about her whereabouts. While on the verge of death, a young cat named Badger found him later that day, and took him to a strange-looking apartment building with a variety of cats thriving there; it was called The Misaggregation. Tinder soon found out that his sister, Adder was also there. Adder had been starving herself ever since Chinno's tragic death, and the Misaggregation helped her out too. Tinder learned to adapt to the association's ways and follows the leader, Badger, who became the leader after the previous one, Robin died. Tinder doesn't believe in true love or love at first sight, he models himself after Badger(the leader)/looks up to him, he hates talking about his past, and he believes he is doing the right thing by following Badger. Tinder is now a proud member of the Misaggregation, along with his sister Adder, though he still never talks to her.
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by Keilime » Wed May 25, 2016 11:58 am
[10/10]
The personality plays a major part in this character's role. I absolutely love his design
as well- it's simple and not too overpowering, and very nice on the eyes. Overall, he's beautiful. ♥

My Skerp Dragon, Jayce? He's meant to stick to a simple palette.
I would love suggestions on accessories, but I'm open to anything. ^^
Character information: Jayce is a sarcastic, snobby, and impatient creature. He is very stubborn and distrusting,
and getting him to warm up to you is a big accomplishment on its own. He is a hoarder of stolen items he has
collected over the years, especially his collection of various accessories such as bracelets, rings,
and various necklaces- his favorite being bandanas.
[[ Art by: #bazinga (DA in watermark) || Species concept/ref (click) by: _adoptarolls_ (IG) ]]
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by bear » Wed May 25, 2016 12:37 pm
7/10
the colours are really soft and nice! I'm a fan of mostly blue characters, but the little diamond shape on the shoulder throws me off a bit? and also with the brighter green on the bandanna, it kinda off balances the subtle colours for me.
Flore?
design by me, species by fumi-lex on devart!

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by ☼ ℓ ʋ м σ s » Wed May 25, 2016 12:42 pm
10/10I love everything everything about him ahh! The gradient of the colors creates a beautiful design, and I personally love the color orange next to purple. His eyes are really interesting too, as well as the species! The little speckles all over his body adds a nice touch to the overal palette <3
How about Tinder?
Lines by Spottedfire23 on DA + design by MoonXKitty on DA His backstory is pretty long, if you don't want to read it just rate his design!
Tinder is a soldier in a savage rogue pack call The Misaggregation.
Tinder can come off as many things from first glance, and he can be very deceptive. Though, when you get to know him you'll unfortunatly find he's quite manipulative, strict and clever. Tinder is always finding his own solutions to conflicts he's stuck in, and he enjoys being the one in charge. If you somehow become very close to him, he does have a soft-spot and is as loyal of a friend you can possibly get. Tinder is very pessimistic, brave, and skeptical. He can easily see through a lie, and can almost always tell what a cat is thinking just by looking at them. If a cat is disregarding the rules or orders, he will often raise his voice at them. Despite all this, Tinder can be very sweet and is at times considerate of other's feelings. He has a little brother named Chinno,(deceased) and a little sister named Adder.(living) His mother's name is Kindle(deceased), his father's, Jengo(deceased).
Tinder's parents died when he was very young. His mother had heart-disease for many months before finally just dropping dead while scavenging for food with her kits. Tinder, Adder, and Chinno all ran to her side, crying out for help. Jengo heard the cry and rushed his kits' aid as fast as he could, devastated as he found out about what had happened to his mate. Jengo explained that she wasn't coming back, and that he would be taking care of them now. But alas, Jengo didn't stay around too long either. The four cats found a nice, completely empty, deserted building to live in and only went out to hunt and such. One morning Jengo woke up to the building's destruction. Two-leg vehicles were tearing it apart, and more and more of it was collapsing by the minute. All of the windows were boarded up as well as the door, except for one glass window. Jengo quickly grabbed the kits, not bothering to wake them up, and crashed through the glass window with the kit's in his jaws, making it out just before the building collapsed completely. Jengo landed clumsily, dropping the kits. Dispite them making it out alive, during the process Jengo had unfortunatly been pierced by several glass pieces. Knowing he couldn't defend them any longer, Jengo told Chinno, Adder, and Tinder to get out of there and to run as far from this place as they could. The three siblings were reluctant to leave, but eventually listened to their father's order, and ran away while he slowly bled out. After that, the kits were for a while, traumatized.
About three months later, Adder, Chinno, and Tinder were all accustomed to surviving, taking on the big city each day. The three littermates were savaging for prey one day, searching along the curbs for a trash bin to rummage through. Chinno found one, and leaped into it, exclaiming he had hit the "jack-pot." Tinder and Adder told Chinno they would be right back, and to call for help if he was in danger, leaving their brother to gather whatever food was in there while they walked into the alleyway nearby to search there. While they were looking in the alley way, they heard a cry for help. The two cats quickly raced out to find Chinno was still in the trash bin while it was being snatched up by a massive monster(vechicle). They yowled at him, telling him to get out of there, but Chinno was too afraid to jump from that height. Tinder offered to catch him, but Chinno made his decision too late; the young kitten was thrown in with the rest of the trash, and crushed just the same.
After that, Adder yowled at Tinder, claiming Chinno's death was his fault since he was the one who had suggested to look somewhere else and leave Chinno alone. Tinder and Adder had a long argument before each of them split, and went their separate ways. Tinder became very depressed after his brother's death and hadn't seen Adder for moons. He was comforted by a short-haired flame-point she-cat named Merah when she found him sobbing in a pipe. Merah and Tinder developed feelings for each other, and eventually became mates. He and Merah were strolling through the city one day, when they bumped into a hungry, thin, sickly looking smoke tabby cat named Sable. Merah asked if he needed help, and the weak tom accepted their assistance. Soon enough, Sable was in good health. Tinder grew very close to the tom, nearly thinking of him as a second brother. Though, Sable grew especially close to Merah and Tinder began to grow cautious of this, and eventually Sable's affection for Merah got to the point in which Tinder had to ask the tom to leave. Sable refused and instead attacked Tinder. Tinder was injured badly and left on the side of a curb to die while Sable forcefully took Merah away. Tinder hasn't seen her since and doesn't know anything about her whereabouts. While on the verge of death, a young cat named Badger found him later that day, and took him to a strange-looking apartment building with a variety of cats thriving there; it was called The Misaggregation. Tinder soon found out that his sister, Adder was also there. Adder had been starving herself ever since Chinno's tragic death, and the Misaggregation helped her out too. Tinder learned to adapt to the association's ways and follows the leader, Badger, who became the leader after the previous one, Robin died. Tinder doesn't believe in true love or love at first sight, he models himself after Badger(the leader)/looks up to him, he hates talking about his past, and he believes he is doing the right thing by following Badger. Tinder is now a proud member of the Misaggregation, along with his sister Adder, though he still never talks to her.
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by zelos » Wed May 25, 2016 1:16 pm
6/10 ;; The colour combination is nice; at least, the bright, contrasting gold hues really draw the eye to them. I also really like the scarf and the little charms hanging off of it. However, the fur is far too dark for me; it almost matches the lines, and as such, the facial details get lost in it. It's hard to tell where the hair and the muzzle, etc, starts and ends because of that. I think the black should be a little lighter.
Gambit? She's an Illyrian Sheepdog and in the same universe as Avarice and Solace. She's Avarice's advisor and lover, but their relationship isn't always the most functional. She's skiddish, but very kind and loyal to Avarice, and perhaps her undying love and loyalty can even be viewed as a flaw, because where many would have left by now, she has stayed. Any critiques and suggestions on her markings would be nice, but please don't say that she's too plain or natural, because that's what I was going for uwu. All by me.
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