Just a little fun for when you have time to kill
by LaurelLeaf » Sun May 01, 2016 9:51 am
8/10The colours are pleasing, but I feel that you need another colour to harmonize the purple and the deep red (maybe another lighter red not the same shade as the one you already have) I like the striped markings, but because your species has a lot of features (hair, feathers, hooves and rattlesnake tail) you should keep one theme. I feel that the purple and red spots are out of place. Maybe you sould try to put some purple stripes too and if you want to keep the spots do a ticking pattern (
like in the cat (#C))
Connor
I would appreciate some critique
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by sword » Sun May 01, 2016 12:41 pm
7/10
It's pretty cute and I like the colors and design on the back, but there's just something about it that doesn't quite click with me ... ? I can't quite put my finger on it.
This ... candle thing? I just got it today. Name and personality suggestions are welcome, I have no idea how to approach a character like this. Art and design by Fokron on DA.

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by NARANDA » Sun May 01, 2016 12:44 pm
10/10 They are so unique, and the colors work really well with them! The necklace is a nice touch and adds to the character! Sadly I am unsure what to suggest, maybe search up names that mean fire?
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I would love suggestions on what kind of species to mix him with as they gain more tails (And become larger and more canine like) as they age and they consume their tail partners to gain new tails. Meaning they gain traits of the species they consume. Some suggestions on what would look good would be amazing!
He is a Takekitsune, a sort of pipe fox like creature.
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by Princess Taozi » Sun May 01, 2016 12:46 pm
10/10
This character is something different that you often don't see and I like it! The design on the candle stick is lovely and it is overall very lovely! Personality wise I wold suggest maybe a mentor sort of wise guardian sort of character? Or that's what I think when I see this Character!10/10
A really cool concept and lovely design I just love browns! He's really cool looking <3
Shiloh maybe?Ref and design by me
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by zelos » Sun May 01, 2016 4:58 pm
[strike]8/10 ;; Not exactly my cup of tea, though they are nice. I wish the eyes contrasted all the brown a little more, they feel like they blend in too much. I would also prefer something to break up all the brown some more.
Solace? He's a beauceron, and is the head of the royal guard in the same universe as my collie queen, Avarice. He's a tough, humorless, kind of arrogant jerk, but he's also fiercely loyal to his queen. The stones on his harness are jasper (symbolising power), the earrings represent his belonging to the royal guard, and the two gold bands represent his rank. His claws are fitted with sharpened covers made of pure gold (they were literally smelted to his claws, so they're not coming off), and the thing on the pommel of his sword is a dragon's eye. The sword itself was an heirloom passed down through his family. Suggestions, comments, or critiques would be cool uwu Everything is by me. Please note that the accessories are part of what makes his design, and therefore saying "he would be plain without them" would defeat the purpose (not to mention I was going for a realistic look and his breed is a little plain.)

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