Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6

Postby ☼ ℓ ʋ м σ s » Wed May 25, 2016 6:35 am

9|10
I actually really like him! He seems like an interesting character, and I love the mid-evil setting.

How about my precious little S'more, Coquina? <3
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Coquina was born to a nice family, but she never knew her parents because she was sold to a new family about 4 weeks afterward. She was a kittypet for some time and she lived with two very nice housefolk. Though she was quite bored most of the time, she never dared to step outside, for she lived in a city unlike others. A large government of cats who called themselves the Mis-aggregation, controlled the alleyways and the streets, and treated stray or wondering cats as slaves, though they didn't bother the humans or the kittypets who stayed inside. However, Coquina was always curious about what it was like out there. Coquina's good friend, Nox-a stray snowshoe Siamese cat, who was an associate of another group of cats called The Division- always came to visit her, but they only talked through one of the glass windows. Eventually, Coquina succumbed to her curious nature, and stepped outside from the safety of her home. The air was so fresh, and the grass felt wonderful under her paws! She couldn't help but linger outside a bit longer. A few moments after, she payed dearly for her decision. She was attacked by a few members of the Misaggregation, held against her will and forced into slavery.
Nox traveled to her house the next day, only to find she had disappeared. Coquina had never left her home, so Nox immediately knew something was wrong. He searched for her all over, but he couldn't find her anywhere. Disappointed and worried, Nox went back to his own correlation, The Division. Some days later, he agreed to work undercover in the Misaggregation, as a spy. He unexpectedly crossed paths with Coquina there, having no clue she had been captured. Coquina looked frail and week, her ribs were showing beneath her pelt and her usually enthusiastic blue eyes were filled with scorn; she didn't look like her usual self at all. This is because Coquina had never learned to properly hunt, and the Misaggregation regularly took half, or all of the prey she managed to catch. She was starving and losing strength. Nox couldn't bare to see her like this, and he promised her he would free her one day. Coquina watched silently from the slaves quarters as Nox began to grow more and more close to Envy, a real member of the Misaggregation. Coquina didn't like the fact Nox had fallen for the enemy, but she still didn't confront him, though she was slightly jealous. All she ever wanted was for Nox to love her like he loved Envy, but she knew it would never happen, Nox only thought of her as a good friend of his and nothing more. There's a lot more to the story, but I'll just skip on ahead-
Nox eventually gets Coquina out of the dreaded place, where he helps her seek refuge in the sewers where his camp was hiden. Coquina was accepted into The Division; there she is taught how to fight and how to hunt, and becomes a very respected member of the correlation. Some time afterward, Coquina is wondering through the sewers, and she catches a highly respected, and ranked tom named Blade from the Misaggregation, snooping around to gather information for her group. Coquina tackles him after he refuses to leave, and the two cats tussle. During the fight, both cats fall over the edge of the sewer, into the water. Blade tears Coquina's collar off while they are struggling under water, and it floats to the surface. A while after, both Coquina and Blade drown. Nox is devastated as he spots her collar, but not her. The cats of The Division drag Blade's body out of the water, but Coquina's is no where to be found. A few days later, Coquina's body is found further up the sewers, and a proper vigil is held for her. Coquina still watched Nox together with Envy from the heavens, dreading the thought that she was dead and silently sobbing inside. But even though the thought of never being able to be Nox's equal depressed her, she was happy for Nox.
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6

Postby Pipsquawk » Wed May 25, 2016 6:37 am

9/10 i the pattern but it seems a bid common for a cat, still looks good!

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6

Postby sel » Wed May 25, 2016 6:50 am

    7/10
    It's a bit simple for my taste, and the colors don't really stand out in a crowd by themself.
    But I do love the concept!

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6

Postby Glispa » Wed May 25, 2016 7:17 am

    7|10
    I absolutley ador the general idea of the character and it's species and even though I like the idea of the colours I personally find the base pink a bit too clashing in my opinion and would probably have preferred to have it another shade of pink. I really like the blue spots on the cheeks but is less of a fan of the pattern on his back. I do also really adore the little cape/neck thing, I find that it really suits the idea this guy has going for him and goes to make him even more adorable than he already are <3

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6

Postby debris » Wed May 25, 2016 7:36 am

9/10
Really cool, I like the color scheme and the spikes, as well as the lock on the collar/necklace and the ears. The only things I don't think fit in are the tail in general and the eye color, as I think the eyes could stand out a bit more.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6

Postby Roadhog » Wed May 25, 2016 7:51 am

I LOVE the idea, but I could fall under loving the character more if the skull was from a real animal. It just sounds wacky that it would be from some mythical creature- since the character is more on the realistic-spectrum </3 if that makes sense. sorry!!
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6

Postby $moke » Wed May 25, 2016 8:22 am

10|10 aaaah what a beauty <3<3 i adore the way he is kept the most simple without looking plain or easily to copy,the unique species features and pale markings give him the needed touch of specialness<3 i also really adore the albino-esque vibe this guy gives off,what a stunner <3

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6

Postby Pipsquawk » Wed May 25, 2016 8:29 am

10/10 looks good, it has nothing that is flawed the colors look nice and the yes :o

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6

Postby Ancunín » Wed May 25, 2016 8:40 am

7/10 they are cute, but overall rather dark, and i'm not a huge fan of super simple designs :)

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6

Postby Elfie » Wed May 25, 2016 9:13 am

6/10
Very cute design and I love the colour combo of blue and yellow. The little star markings are lovely as well, although a bit more could be added to the design, it seems a bit "flat" to me with the solid blue.

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