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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby Keriae » Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:37 pm

    ginger cats can have hazel eyes. eye colour runs on polygenes and is entirely possible.
    cats cannot be both ginger and cream, as one is self and one dilute. calicos and tortoiseshells are black (or a "black" colour, such as chocolate or cinnamon) with ginger.


    braveheart - 5/10 - a newborn kitten cannot look brave. how would another clan recognize his prefix is brave from his fur colour? -heart should be used for cats with a very strong moral compass.
    nightstep - 7/10 - it's an okay name, and the prefix is fine. however, -step should be used for cats with an animal prefix, and to reference the gait of that animal.
    tinyripple - 7/10 - the prefix is fine, but why choose -ripple over -stream, as it carries the same meaning? in addition, a good hunter could be given the suffix -whisker.

    kestreltail - a mostly brown black classic tortie tabby with gold eyes. she is renown for her tree climbing skills and agility.
    lichenflower - slim and long legged black tortie point. she was born white, as often the case with colourpoints, and develops her tortoiseshell points later. she is a motherly cat, though raises her kits to be confident in themselves and may been seen as harsh on them.
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Postby 䏠xote » Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:55 pm

        kestreltail: not very creative at all, and typically bird prefixes are followed by -wing or -feather. -Talon, -claw or -wing would be best for a character who is good at tree climbing, as they have to do with those parts of the body/being close to the sky. I also really dislike the prefix, but I won't dock points for personal preference. 5/10 at best for me.
        lichenflower: lichen is a nice, underused prefix, but flower is overused for queens or cats with an affinity for kits. Nice flow, though. 6/10.


        also, that's what I said. it's perfectly natural for a cat ginger in color to have hazel, NOT green, which is what I pointed out. I think maybe you aren't reading very well, either, because you clearly did not read any of the reasons behind names. also, stream is entirely overused, and it's better to be creative than for every cat to be named somethingstream. c:

        braveheart - rich sorrel tabby tom with long fur and hazel eyes. he means his best in all he does, and tries hard to live up to the legacy that his father, blazeheart, left behind. he is young and ambitious, and full of wonder and naivety, as he is still new and has not experienced great sadness yet in his life.
        brave, a namesake after his father in hopes that he might live up to Blazeheart's courage, and heart, both after his father and for the strange of his heart and pureness of his actions.

        nightstep - black she-cat with short fur and a sleek, small body. her paw-tips are white, and her eyes are an icy green. she is a bitter cat, one who has been cursed with misfortune since the day she met her first love. while she grew up well, she fell in love with a kittypet, and was cursed with stillborn kits. she birthed another litter of stillborns ever after leaving him, and was known as the barren ever since. she only birthed a single, sickly kit to a good warrior, who died the same day in battle.
        night, for her pitch-black pelt, and step, for her quiet, meticulous mannerisms and ability to sneak up on prey, be it cat or mouse.

        tinyripple - tiny, blue tabby she-cat with amber eyes and white points. tinyripple is a small but good swimmer, a shining gem in the clan's fish-catchers. she enjoys her family more than any other company, and has helped her mother raise two litters of kits. she is not interested in a mate or kits herself, but does occasionally think about what it would be like.
        tiny, for her small stature, and ripple, for her affinity with water.
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Postby 䏠xote » Wed Jan 13, 2016 6:19 pm

        icewhisker: first off, i really like the way this one flows. back in my earlier role-playing days, ice was a very popular name (and one of my favorites), but it isn't used as often these days, so it does add a bit of spice to mundane, earthy names. -whisker is nice for a hunter, especially of ground prey. i think that it definitely fits, and the character is unique. 10/10

        foxfur: the prefix fox makes a lot of sense considering his color, but isn't a popular name among cats considering their nature. i feel like the prefix might hinder his ability to be liked by others, considering its negative connotations, but the logic is sound. fur also fits, considering his entire name is based on his pelt. while it isn't very creative, it's still a sound name. 7/10.

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        briarstripe - darker chocolate tabby tom with long, thick fur and hazel eyes. briarstripe is a confident warrior, who does not think that his is any better than his peers. he doesn't particularly wish for much in life, being comfortable with peace and hopeful that it will continue. he's a good hunter, not by natural skill, but because he's been trained well, and is on par with most fighting cats.
        he was named briar because of his color, and because his mother liked the feisty ring it held, and -stripe because of his tiger-like markings.

        cloudear - white she-cat with significant tufts of fur on her ears. long-haired, but not very noticeably. cloudear is half-deaf, with one orange eye and one blue one. she is average at best at hunting because of this, but can usually keep up with her brother, briarstripe. she was an apprentice longer than many other cats, but fought hard to become a warrior and learn techniques that would suit her.
        she was named cloud, for her white, fluffy fur, and -ear, both for the tufts on her ears and as an allusion to her deafness in one ear.

        snowstream - long-haired, very pale colored she-cat with yellow/hazel eyes. snowstream is a kind she-cat, who doesn't much care for fighting, or for hunting land mammals. instead, she prefers to hunt fish, and can swim fairly well, a trait inherited from her riverclan blood. she finds it easier for her than trying to climbs trees and track squirrels. she hopes that one day, she can have a mate, and many kits.
        she was named snow, for her white pelt, and stream, for her affinity with water.
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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby hxneystorm » Thu Jan 14, 2016 3:59 pm

Hey! I'm a non traditional namer, but please don't get offended by my views! I have my own ,kinda unique way of rating and making names :3

Briarstripe: I really like this. I dunno why.8/10
Cloudear: Ooh! This is a very nice name! It fits her nicely. 7/10
Snowstream: Fits nicely. 8/10

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Brightstone-
A white Tom with honey coloured patches flecked over his body. He is sturdy, strong, and calm in many situations. He is blunt and brutally honest with anyone, even his mate and kits. He has large, amber eyes and a nicked left ear. He has multiple scars over his back leg from a Fox that was found on territory.
Bright - For his colouring and decorational purposes. - Stone for his sturdiness and bluntness.

Chiafleck:
An odd shecat, pale grey and covered in small black flecks, like Chia seeds. She is bubbly, bouncy and very optimistic. She has narrow bright blue eyes and long whiskers. Her fur is short and slightly rough and her paws are small and dainty.
Chia- for the flecks on her fur. -Fleck for decorational purposes
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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby rose.bloom » Thu Jan 14, 2016 4:04 pm


I was working on this while Honeystorm~ posted, apologies!

briarstripe 8/10 it's a great name and really flows, it also seems to
really fit the description. i don't really know what about it that isn't working
but it's a great name. I just feel like the suffix doesn't fit as well, suffixes,
traditionally [im a traditional namer], are supposed to refer to the strengths
of the cat. instead of stripe, I suggest maybe "heart" as he seems like a loyal
kind of cat who doesn't think he is any better than anyone else.

cloudear 10/10 this is an amazing name. it perfectly fits the description
you gave. gosh, this name is too perfect [i might use it for a fanfic!]. one question
though, is she a long haired cat? i imagine her to be one, but I'm not sure.

snowstream 2/10 first of all, sorry, but this name just sounds a little cliche
to me. everyone has a cat with the prefix 'snow' and i just feel it is overused. also
the way you described the suffix stream, makes me think a little to much of silverstream
and then how you added how she wanted a mate and many kits, then I couldn't stop
thinking about silverstream. it is also a mouthful trying to say. apologies, but this isn't
your best name.

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echosight Echosight is a white medium-long haired cat. she has brown ears,
a brown tail, and one brown paw. she has heterochromia eyes, one orange, one blue.
her mother thought 'echo' would describe the color of the two colors of her eyes, so
she was named echo. her prefix, sight, not only refers to her eyes colors, but of her
great seeing. she spots rabbits moving 20 yards away from her, with thickets of
brushes making it harder to see. Echosight is kind of a weirdo, but she doesn't mind.
some of her clan mates think she's actually crazy. Echosight is actually oblivious to
what people say/think about her.

mousefoot i know this is a common name, but I kind of love it. mousefoot is a
tiny short wiry haired black and white speckled cat. other cats tease her about her
size, but she is the fastest, swiftest cat in the clan. mousefoot tends to be rather
quiet, but uptight and moody.

redstream redstream is a long haired white with ginger-red-brown splotched tom.
he rather dislikes fighting, and despises hunting on land. he is rarely found socializing at
the clan camp, but in the river swimming, or hunting fish. to make up for being a poor
fighter and refusing to hunt on land, he usually catches twice the amount of prey than
paths other warriors. even though he hates catching prey on land, he is very swift runner, like
a stream. despite being stuck up, he is loyal to his clan, and a protective father. he has
two kits [Foxkit, Tawnykit], that he loves to death and would die for them.
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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby lady chocobo » Fri Jan 15, 2016 8:11 am

echosight - i don't see how her mother would name her for her eyes. naming her 'echo' for her eyes is strange to me. -sight is okay, but honestly, if she's a good hunter or something, then -whisker would be better. 5/10

mousefoot - prefix would be fine, if mousefoot was brown. mice aren't black and white, to my knowledge. suffix is fine. 7/10

redstream - not sure if his fur color is possible, but the name works for him. 8/10


crowcloud - black molly with yellow eyes. crowcloud is patient and calm, and doesn't get angry easily. often one to join patrols for this reason.

beenose - golden-brown tabby tom with orange eyes. known throughout the clans for his renowned tracking skills.
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Postby 䏠xote » Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:57 am

        crowcloud: while the prefix fits well, the suffix doesn't seem to belong with this cat at all. i could see it if maybe she was a dreamer, or a cat with thick, fluffy fur, but the cat doesn't seem like that kind of character. it flows nice, though. 5/10
        beenose: it seems like a solid name, and fits him well. i can't really find any fault with it. 10/10

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        tanglebelly - dark chocolate tabby tom with long, thick fur and primarily green hazel eyes. tanglebelly is the deputy of his clan, an older cat with lots of experience. he's rather easy going, and, though firm and gentle, prefers to have a good conversation and nice laugh with other cats rather than scold them or tell them what to do. his humor is possibly one of his best traits, as he can keep cats calm in times of crisis, and comfort those who may be on edge.
        tangle, because of his thick, long fur (inherited from both sides of the family) and -belly, because of his good sense of humor.

        twigcall - rich brown tabby tom with long fur. twigcall is tanglebelly's son, a young medicine cat apprentice who inherited his father's knack for conversation. he can be grumpy and quiet, but is a good diplomat, one of the qualities that make him a good medicine cat. his father often jokes about him nearly being named -thorn for his witty and sarcastic banter with clan members, but every cat would agree that his ability to communicate outweighs his sometimes prickly attitude.
        twig, for the way his stripes look like the shadows twigs cast over the undergrowth, and -call, for his ability to communicate/his diplomacy.

        cloverbloom - long-haired, very pale colored she-cat with yellow/hazel eyes. cloverbloom is a kind she-cat, who doesn't much care for fighting. she loves her clan fiercely, and aspires to have a kind mate and provide the clan with many kits. nothing makes her more excited then newborn babies. she is also a fairly good climber, but is mediocre when hunting.
        she was named clover, after white clover blossoms in spring, and -bloom, after her desire to bring new life to the clan.
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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby Antipathy » Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:19 am

Tanglebelly - 10/10 - I have to say, a good name! I like the description and the reason behind the name.

Twigcall - 8/10 - Unique! I've never really seen "-call" used before, but I like the way it was used here. c:

Cloverbloom - 10/10 - Her name fits her very well, and she is definitely a pleasing character!

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Redblaze: a russet-colored tom with a dark grey underbelly/legs; bright green eyes. He is a brave and noble cat, and loves nothing more than to sink his claws into something. Despite his fighting nature, he is a good-natured tom and loves to swap stories with his Clanmates.

Muddyface: A light brown she-cat with dark brown spots and a grey underbelly; dark yellow eyes. She is a brash and sarcastic cat with a brave heart. Her motto when it comes to enemies invading her territory is attack now, ask questions later. Despite her nature, she can be a very loyal she-cat, and will fight to the death to protect her clanmates.
Prefix: Her pelt colors -- Suffix: Her attractiveness
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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby Sakuma Ritsu » Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:28 am

Redblaze - 9/10 - The name sounds really cool

Muddyface - 10/10 - I really like this name for some reason these is something charming about it


Brambleshade - Dark brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes, dark brown ears and lighter brown muzzle, belly and paws.

Darkshadow - Black she-cat with dark blue eyes and a torn ear.

Mistyleap - Blue-gray she-cat with sky blue eyes.




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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby lady chocobo » Fri Jan 15, 2016 2:13 pm

[size=85] brambleshade - 7/10 not sure what -shade is supposed to mean. suggestions: bramblepelt/bramblefur/brambleface
darkshadow 7/10 suggestions: darkfur/darkpelt
mistyleap 7/10 misty- implies that the cat is misty, and -leap... i'm assuming she's a good jumper? if so then i suggest misttail.

laurelstorm - white tom with green eyes with an unpredictable personality; he tends to saunter about and is quite bad at hunting. laurel- for his white fur and -storm for his volatile personality.

sootfoot - dark gray dappled tom with gold eyes. very good runner (particularly good at running through snow) and loves watching clouds. soot- for his dark gray pelt and -foot for his excellent running abilities.
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