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by iddy » Thu Dec 17, 2015 1:38 pm
[note: i am a traditional rater, so please don't get offended. i give scores by how the name goes best with the cat. also, my names are supposed to fit my character and be lyrical, not be pretty. source: prefixes | suffixes]
cloudflight: [3/10] although this name does have a nice low, the prefix 'cloud' is misused and the 'suffix' does not go well with the name. the prefix 'cloud' is for white cats only, barely accepting cats that are extremely pale gray- without any tabby markings. and in reality, there is no such thing as a white tabby cat for it's extremely pale gray. also the suffix doesn't really make much sense with the prefix. i mean, if you look at it, it basically means a cloud in flight. but not only that, she has other skills that are fairly well, and there are other suffixes that reflect her skills.
suggestions: prefixes; silver-, mist-, or pale- suffixes; -whisker for her hunting skills, -tail for her ability to balance in trees.
badgerstorm: [6/10] this name is a misplaced traditional. in his description, you described him to be a great fighter with much strength; it sort of seems as though he was named after his ability. cats are never given their prefix after a skill, personality, or eye color. skills are developed as they grow, as well as personality, and kits don't open their eyes after a week or two, let alone have its color changed then. the suffix 'storm' is used for cats that do not have notable skills, and that have a very unpredictable personality, in which he is not described to have.
suggestions: prefixes; none suffixes; -claw for his fighting skills
puddlefoot: [4/10] 'puddle' is not an accurate prefix. a cat cannot look like a puddle. there are clear puddles, that reflect the sky, brown puddles speckled with mud, and neither of these can compare to what a cat looks like. i now i wouldn't want to be named after that. 'foot' is for cats that quick on their paws and fast runners... and on the side note, i find it very cruel to know that a clan in which you were born in and a clan in which you all are basically family to taunt you, really. you just explained that he was good at fishing and guarding, so he is good at something, and guarding is very important to the clan. he should be very respected for that.
suggestions: prefixes; ivy-, ash- suffixes; -whisker for his ability to hunt fish, -pelt/fur for his not so notable skills
leafbreeze: [2/10] again, this is an inaccurate name. there are plenty of colored leaves: green, red, yellow, brown. and the ones most interacted by are the one in which have fallen, and i know i do not want to be named after something dead. and, 'breeze' does not apply either really, it has no meaning.
suggestions: prefixes; fawn-,hazel-, or honey- suffixes; -leaf for her extreme talent in being a medicine cat, -whisker for her hunting abilities
my cats:
appleflower: a light golden molly with a faintly mottled pelt and bright green eyes. although she has no notable skills, she contributes to the clan by helping new queens care for their kits, and is known for her motherly personality for those around her.
acornfur: small light golden-brown tabby molly with large yellow eyes. she is a very energetic cat, though, her skills are short lived. although she seems to never get tired of talking, she is known for her positivity that is well appreciated to the cats around her.
sleetclaw: a large pale gray dappled tom with flecks of lighter shade and white dappled along his pelt. he is a broad-shouldered cat talented in the battle field with green eyes gleaming of determination. although he can be quite short tempered and ready to dive head first into a fight, his courage is admired by his clan.
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by rose.bloom » Sun Dec 20, 2015 5:03 am
Windtail - 4/10 I like the name, just it's very common, not very unique
Blazewing - 9/10 I love the prefix Blaze, and to use it as a color describing 'wing' is amazing! I also loved that you used wing, not commonly used.
My cats -
Blossomheart - A gentle loving queen. Her fur is a white, with a light ginger, almost red, on her paws. She was a kittypet, and they called her Sukaru (Cherry blossom).
Sparrowtail - The deputy, he is always calm, cool and collected. A great fighter, not a very skilled hunter. His fur is a soft grey, and had white points and extreme white piebald.
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by rose.bloom » Sun Dec 20, 2015 3:19 pm
Orca's Cats
Poppynose - 6/10 Poppy flowers have often been used to symbolically
represent sleep, peace, and death. I don't think this suffix would correctly
represent Poppynose as she is very curious, and most of the time,
"peaceful" would be a cat who would just quietly sit "peacefully"
at the camp or in their den. Although I do like nose as a suffix,
as she is a good tracker. For information on poppys, go here.
Smokefoot - 5/10 I don't think "Smoke" would be a very good suffix
for a skittish cat, as smoke tends to stay put for a while, just meandering
of into the sky, and people or animals who are skittish are frightened
easily, and usually when you are frightened you don't linger and stay put,
usually, you are running, jumping or performing other quick actions.
Although, foot is a good suffix for a cat who is fast.
My Cats
Lionstep - Lionstep is a sandy colored she-cat with blue eyes.
She tends to be bossy, and loves to be in charge. She love to be
the "leader of the pride" if you will. She is large for a she-cat,
and is light on her feet. She is quick, and a fast runner.
Bananapelt (lol) Ravengaze - Ravengaze is a small,
almost raven sized she-cat. Her fur is a dense black, and she has
soft blue eyes. She has great vision, but is a terrible fighter. She
has more of a "flight" response rather than a "fight".
Raintail - Raintail is a
Russian Blue cat (Her mom was a
Russian blue kittypet, her father was also a Russian
blue kittypet raised in the clan). She is very good at balancing on
high branches. She is extremely light footed, and very nosey. She
is always 'piter-pattering' all over people's business.
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by iddy » Mon Dec 21, 2015 6:18 am
[note: i am a traditional rater, so please don't get offended. i give scores by how the name goes best with the cat. also, my names are supposed to fit my character and be lyrical, not be pretty. source: prefixes | suffixes]
lionstep: [6/10] the prefix fits her really well, but the thing is, her suffix is misplaced. 'step' is a correlating suffix, and therefore must work with the prefix. one way it works is as an adverb; foxstep will step foxily or mousestep will step mousily. another is in a somewhat similar manner; foxstep steps like a fox or mousestep steps like a mouse. and i, for one, stick most with the second way. in this case, it doesn't exactly work with the description you gave her. if you were to keep this name, she would have to walk or move like a lion. but lions do are not quick or fast at running, they can only keep a steady speed for a short period of time, and therefore sneak up as close as they can to they prey. lions are not light on their feet. they are heavy animals, and that's that. also, 'step' is not the ideal suffix for her because she has a skill, and warrior cats are always named for a skill if its notable.
suggestions: prefixes; none suffixes; -foot for her speed and running ability
ravengaze: [6/10] the prefix is fine, but i would like you to know that it's quite rare for black cats to have blue eyes once they are full grown. it's most likely for its color to change as they get older. having great eye sight isn't exactly a notable ability, really.
suggestions: prefixes; none suffixes; -fur/pelt since she does not have any skills that exceed the average point
raintail: [7/10] 'rain' prefixes are usually given to cats blue-gray cats that are patterned, and with the breed you provided, it appears as though they do not carry any tabby-like designs. other than that, the suffix fits her nicely.
suggestions: prefixes; blue-, dace-, juniper-, or pine suffixes; none
my cats:
beetlefur: small black molly with a lock of white on her chest and sweet yellow eyes. due to her short, stocky legs, she isn't the best at the battle field or in the hunting grounds. though, the positivity and determination that radiates from her is greatly appreciated from her clan.
maplestream: slim tortoiseshell molly with predominant honey-colored patches throughout her thick pelt. her tranquil green gaze never fails to provide warmth and comfort for the cats around her. although her slender body grants her agility and nimbleness, her strengths lies in the water.
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by moriarty, » Thu Dec 24, 2015 10:17 am
appletail (10/10) i really like this character for some reason c; also, the prefix fits your cat pretty well.
magpiepelt (10/10) i don't think I've seen anyone use the prefix magpie, so it makes her unique <3
my cats;
reedfeather - a riverclan tom with a dark brown pelt with tan stripes. after a fall when he was an apprentice, reedfeather had a permanently broken back leg. he soon became the medicine cat for his clan. reedfeather is often moody and snaps at others, but doesn't show his anger towards kits.
stormclaw - a large thunderclan tom, with gray fur and dark blue eyes. he's a tough warrior, with scars all along his pelt. he's usually quiet with his ears pricked.
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by hollyglow » Sat Dec 26, 2015 2:39 pm
My rates:
Snowcloud: The only problem here is that cats with white fur and blue eyes are often deaf. 7/10
Pheasantleaf: I really like the leaf suffix for a medicine cat. 9/10
My names:
Hollyglow: A black she-cat with gold eyes.
Raincrystal: A blue-silver she-cat with blue eyes.
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by iddy » Sun Dec 27, 2015 1:12 pm
[note: i am a traditional rater, so please don't get offended. i give scores by how the name goes best with the cat. also, my names are supposed to fit my character and be lyrical, not be pretty. source: prefixes | suffixes]
hollyglow: [1/10] i'm confused. how does this name fit her? it doesn't say anything about this cat. first of all, the prefix holly- is used for dark ginger cats or white cats due to the color of the berries or its blossoming flowers. her black pelt does not relate to this plant at all. if you didn't know, kits are named after the color of their pelt and how they look, not of personality or eye color, for this later changes further on. but by the looks of this, it seems as though you have created this name after hollyleaf in which the erin's have bundled together with their disorganized naming system. second, the suffix -glow, make little to no sense. what does this have to do with the cat? a suffix is given to a warrior with the following order: a notable skill, their personality, and lastly, their appearance.
suggestions: prefixes; beetle-, black-, crow-, dark-, ivy-, night-, raven-, sedge-, shade-, or soot- suffixes; -fur/pelt for her appearance since you did not describe a skill she might hold
raincrystal: [1/10] the prefix rain- is for cats that range from gray to dark blue-gray dappled or flecked cats. you did not describe any patterning on her, and therefore, it does not work her her pelt-type. now, for the suffix. who in all leaders would give a cat the suffix -crystal? they do not know what they are (if you must, depending on where the cats live), and yet, if they do have knowledge of this, why would they name a cat by something so precious and rare? it's so unfair and no cat is better than another.
suggestions: prefixes; blue-, or silver- suffixes; -fur/pelt for her appearance since you did not describe a skill she might hold
my cats:
cedarfang: a large dark brown tabby tom with deep orange eyes. with his broad shoulders and long legs, he is very talented in both hunting and fighting. his clan admires his hard work, but at times, his fiery attitude can get out of hand with cats of other clans.
maplestream: slim tortoiseshell molly with predominant honey-colored patches throughout her thick pelt. her tranquil green gaze never fails to provide warmth and comfort for the cats around her. although her slender body grants her agility and nimbleness, her strengths lies in the water.
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by fluffycat6 » Sun Dec 27, 2015 3:27 pm
Cedarfang- 6/10, it suits the cat well, but I'm just not a huge fan of the name itself. It flows nicely though, good job!
maplestream- 8/10, I like this name and the description is good, except I don see the prefix maple with so many honey coloured patches. Stream goes fairly nicely with maple and reflects her swimming strengths.
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