Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .normal.human. » Tue Jan 19, 2016 2:49 am

Maybe make the different quotes different colors? The gray/blue is kinda bland. Maybe put in some gifs and/or make the space between the pictures transparent.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Tue Jan 19, 2016 3:40 am

Yours is great, but if you moved the transparent tall image up or found a taller one it would be more symmetrical.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby leda. » Tue Jan 19, 2016 3:45 am

the rounded images of the cat are hard to see,being them both black.there's not much to say about the center,just that's it consists a bit too much of text than symbols.i reccomend a quote,or some white or a color that would work with black on your signature.i suggest shortening the quote,as it takes up your whole signature.maybe adding a bio,or some bars/borders would spunk it up?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .normal.human. » Tue Jan 19, 2016 3:50 am

I think there is a little too much space on the right side, and it might be cut off on the bottom but I can't really tell. Also the white under the T is lower down than the "deer boy my homie" picture.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Tue Jan 19, 2016 4:22 am

I think the images in your sig sre a bit out of place. There is far too much space between them. Try adding quotes or borders in the middle of them.
Also, a border or a box around the text would make it seem more in place.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Radioactive Wolf » Tue Jan 19, 2016 4:24 am

There seems to be a little too much space in the middle where it says "hey nerds". Also the writing could be a little more colourful like your images? <3
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Lillybear » Tue Jan 19, 2016 4:52 am

To be honest, I think the credit kinda sticks out in an awkward way.

It's fairly plain and doesn't quite fit with the theme. Perhaps you could change it's color or move it around a little?

Also, where everything's on the left it's the only thing on the right.

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby rocoboq » Tue Jan 19, 2016 4:58 am

    I really like it! However, I feel that the "hakuna matata" text image is a little off spacing-wise, and, personally, I would add a sort of border on the right side.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby You Have Lost, Light » Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:01 am

Its Really good, But The Letters On The Left Are All Together, But Otherwise Its Great (Sorry When It Comes To Words I Have Problems With It xD)
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby abxy » Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:06 am

I like the images and quote, and how everything fits in! What bothers me is that I feel where the left image is should have a bit more of a weave, and the images seem a little roughly cut and pixelly. Maybe try softening them up so they fit more? Otherwise it is a very nice signature!
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I'm not a very big fan of the signature, but I'll keep that from me judging too harshly. I feel that it needs a border, or a few more images to even out the empty space. Maybe make the words a tiny bit clearer?
(Keep in mind I'm on mobile, so I may not see a few things!
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