Just a little fun for when you have time to kill
by Rooster Cult » Wed Apr 15, 2020 10:22 am
4/10
this is all based on personal opinion, so please don't take it harshly:
first, I can see the appeal. The colors work great and the design is very nice to look at. The art is very clean and neat as well.
I, however, have a dislike of many closed species as they often don't offer a very wide range to take creative liberties with. Saying that, I find the design a little plain and would worry that they would be hard to distinguish from other manokits. Of course, I can also see the desire for simpler designs, and that is perfectly fine.
If I were to offer some advice, I would say to give them a few more markings in a different darker color? A dark black or grey would give it a poison dart toad vibe, and a dark teal or desaturated royal blue might give him some tropical beach vibes. those extra darker colors could make them stand out a lot more.

Design by me, reference sheet by
AbsxntHis AI, nerve, is
hereJass is a 16-year-old savant who loved to develop Artificial Intelligence for fun. He was often quite shy and had no other friends than those he programmed. One AI, Nerve, seemed to show the most humanity and sentience, always curious and learning. Jass wanted to teach the AI more and help him develop, but he saw that technology was limited in that an AI could never store enough information to be fully sentient. So he implanted Nerve into his brain with the hopes that it would create a fully independent AI.
It ended up backfiring, as Nerve panicked upon the impromptu surgery and shocked the wound, hoping to cauterize it, but only ended up giving Jass a makeshift lobotomy. Jass was taken in by the government to be studied(mostly due to the fear that he could create war machines). Jass is now a lot quieter and reserved. He shows and experiences little emotion and it is very hard to know what is going on in his head, or what the AI might be telling him, as he will sit and stare blankly for hours on end.

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by changbin » Fri Apr 17, 2020 3:46 am
9/10
i really like this dude! he's got an interesting backstory. i like the little eyepatch and scar tissue around it, i don't see many eyepatch-clad characters who have visible scars. i think the outfit color scheme is a little limiting, seeing as most of the character's palette is blue. the hair color and style is nice but i think it's a bit close to the color of his pants? that's just a personal thought though. other than that, i really adore this dude!
here's my newest design.
they are a comfort character, so i haven't put much thought into their backstory.
their name is lait et miel, or "milk and honey". it's an odd name, i know, but bear with me.
i was thinking of giving them (trigger warning - mentions of blood) either honey or milk as blood, like some people give their characters goo or strawberry milk as blood (end trigger warning).
any feedback on the design would be greatly appreciated ^^;
btw,,,, the flower isnt,, actually part of the design,,,, i forgot to remove it,,

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here is their toyhouse
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by Cruxich » Sat Apr 18, 2020 3:59 am
7/10 Unfortunately this fella is kind of a lil basic for me design wise, but regardless they're still relatively adorable and the color palette is nice and matches up very well. Choice of name is rather unique as well, and the meaning is very fitting. There's nothing else much really though I can talk about, I'm afraid.
Maybe a couple of other markings here and there to make him stand out, and maybe an accessory to? Nothing extravagantL, but still simple enough to where it doesn't stand out from him cause it's more detailed. Like, a little yellow or orange collar with a beehive charm for an example sounds like a very fitting one.
Riza? Design by RyuketsuKira, art by e-b-ony-thor-ns, base by LambRot

A unicorn dabbling in Water-based magic, Riza is a late descendant of a very powerful Pharaoh that lives near the outskirts of the desert city, Somnambula. Never speaks, but very wise and gentle. She's well known for contributing to the town via a small, artifical lake made with her own magic where ponies can come and go to get water as they please. While Riza rarely, if ever interacts with the others she's still well respected and even has a couple of suitors.
Her mane and tail is made out of water, jelly-like in consistency but heals whoever consumes it regardless of injury or illness. Riza is very protective of it, and will only allow those to partake in it if she senses that they need it. Otherwise, like a true "Desert princess" she cares for the other ponies in her own way.
She's also a lot more powerful then the average unicorn, but not as powerful as an alicorn.
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by boyfail » Sat Apr 18, 2020 4:21 am
8/10 oooh, i like the hair a lot, it really adds to the entire character as a whole. Just by looking at her, you can tell a lot of info about her without even looking at her desc. such as the fact that she does water magic and is the descendent of a pharaoh. she is honestly rlly rlly pretty, i just don't personally like pony type designs so thats why it's a little biased fvfs
how about my beautiful son Salen?

he has better art by an absolutely amazing artist on his
th, i just thought i'd put my own art up 4 him tho fhffv
Honestly, he might sound a little boring, but here I gooo!!
Salen is a man in his early, early 20's (but i gave him the backpack bc i thought i was gonna make him a teen but no fvfvf), and he gets flustered and agitated easily. He doesn't really have many friends because of his his looks and overall demeanor and aura, but he is very nice to the people who he lets in and enjoys hanging out with, buying them trinkets and stuff. He owns a palmetto corn snake named Koi, along with many other reptiles and arachnids, and just really any animal that would scare others away. He's prone to bad chronic nosebleeds, but he doesn't really freak out or anything since he thinks they make him look cool. He's called "grandpa/grandad" by a lot of his friends, since his best friend is his "daughter" and they call her "mom"
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by YourGayness » Sat Apr 18, 2020 9:43 am
8/10
What a cool dude !! The simple colour scheme is so nice! I'm personally more of a fan of more unnatural characters, but I really like this guy! His mask especially is really nice!
My guy Labyrinth? : ) (All by me!)

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