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by danger days » Mon Apr 04, 2016 2:04 pm
the text in the center is completely unreadable and hurts my eyes unless i highlight it, maybe darken the font a little bit ??
other than that, it's really nice.
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by AtlasHyperion » Mon Apr 04, 2016 2:06 pm
It's really empty. That's really all I can say other than the fact that you didn't capitalize anything and it would look better capitalized, I think. Other than that, it's just super empty. I feel like having more in your signature would improve it.
The images are nice, but the text is impossible to read. Having a border at the top as well as above the quote would look better, and also having it be symmetrical up and down, meaning a big quote at the top too. Really, though, the color of the text is, to be honest, a terrible color. It doesn't match the colors of the images and is hard to read. Try to find a purple or a dark pink close to the colors of the images.
It's really empty. That's really all I can say other than the fact that you didn't capitalize anything and it would look better capitalized, I think. Other than that, it's just super empty. I feel like having more in your signature would improve it.
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by storm coming. » Mon Apr 04, 2016 2:22 pm
The image on the right is too big for the text box, along with the 'I know' and sort of 'Because'. Your bio is too short compared to the rest of the signature. The 'Ever' is very big for my taste and I would have gone with a different approach for this signature. For the word that says 'me' the lines around it are too short because they don't match up with the words. So basically your signature is very nice, besides for the fact that it doesn't match up very well.
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by danger days » Mon Apr 04, 2016 4:37 pm
the placing of the text makes it very hard to follow what the quote is saying, it just looks like a bunch of random words.
the words "as your cat knows" in the bottom left are cut off halfway.
the large cat image in the middle is a little bit unclear and pixelated.
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by Max » Mon Apr 04, 2016 6:18 pm
I think it looks a bit small, and it doesn't have much to it. I also feel like the text and the lines below and above it don't really match up completely. Maybe add a quote or a larger text box on the sides, and keep the gif in the middle? Overall, I think simple is what you were going for anyway, and I must say that it is satisfying to look at.
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by ♛Queen♛ » Tue Apr 05, 2016 10:10 am
Its a nice signature, thought through but
it feels i dont know..a bit..cluttered? I like
the feel of it but do to how cramped it is
makes it hard to read and follow.It's
just a bit to busy for my taste, thats
all, but other than that, fantastic
signarute, well done c:
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by peachy keen- » Sun Apr 10, 2016 8:22 am
ooh, your signature is very nice! however, it feels very empty. there's so much more room to add to your bio. shortening the image & gif would fix that.
the word 'you' is larger than the split gif above and below it.
the bare right side ends to the emptiness, but it doesn't bug me too much.
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by taffy; » Wed Apr 13, 2016 10:20 am
wow, as usual your signature is very well coded and beautiful!
however, the quote on the side is a bit hard
to read, and it the written text like 'me i'm a'
and 'in' are added in weirdly in my opinion. also,
the quotes surrounding the bio blend a bit too
much with the bio, maybe make it bolded instead.
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by thank » Sun Apr 17, 2016 1:57 am
argh i can't find anything to criticize ;-;
the column of things (i dunno what they're called) on the far right has a line on the bottom and not the top. Because I'm a perfectionist and everything always needs to be perfect, this bothers me.
other than that i can't find anything to criticize
you siggy is always very lovely
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