duskstream - 10/10, it fits the cat perfectly. good use of the rather underrated -stream! however, I wouldn't include that he was named for his eyes, just his aquatic talents. eye colors aren't really an important thing to the cats, and are nothing to be named for.
willowstorm - 8/10, I love the name but the reasons behind it don't make a lot of sense to me. I don't think a cat should be named for where it was born -- that's sort of a burden to carry for the rest of her life, especially if it has some negative things to it (I know that a few cats wouldn't really love a rogue-born kit in their clan). for this cat, I'd recommend a prefix that represents how she actually looks, but I'm not stopping you from creating a major story arc or anything. it could be interesting to see how the cat handles it, actually! for this cat, -storm is fine, but if she is particularly swift, I'd go with -foot instead. the clans usually name cats for their skills first, personality second.
dawnwing - 8/10, dawn- is a favorite prefix of mine, so good there! it's fitting as well. I used to not like -wing very much, but I've recently warmed up to it. it serves the same purpose as -tail, however, which I usually prefer in any given situation.
dawnflight - 7/10, I like this one less. -flight is okay, but below both -wing and -tail for me.
birchfur - a young pale-grey tabby tom with white paws. decent at balancing, but not good enough in any particular area to warrant a special suffix. has a bit of a complex due to this.
mothnose - grumpy grey-brown tabby she-cat. good at tracking but often keeps discoveries to herself out of selfishness or fear that other cats may find out and steal her glory.
pigeonclaw - grey-and-white elder tom. an excellent fighter in his day, but not too confident in trees ever since he got his tail bent thanks to a nasty bite-and-shake from a stray dog.
fallowpelt - brown tabby elder she-cat. rooted in her past and dislikes change, and collects small things that have meaning to her or her old friends. holds grudges.
willowstorm - 8/10, I love the name but the reasons behind it don't make a lot of sense to me. I don't think a cat should be named for where it was born -- that's sort of a burden to carry for the rest of her life, especially if it has some negative things to it (I know that a few cats wouldn't really love a rogue-born kit in their clan). for this cat, I'd recommend a prefix that represents how she actually looks, but I'm not stopping you from creating a major story arc or anything. it could be interesting to see how the cat handles it, actually! for this cat, -storm is fine, but if she is particularly swift, I'd go with -foot instead. the clans usually name cats for their skills first, personality second.
dawnwing - 8/10, dawn- is a favorite prefix of mine, so good there! it's fitting as well. I used to not like -wing very much, but I've recently warmed up to it. it serves the same purpose as -tail, however, which I usually prefer in any given situation.
dawnflight - 7/10, I like this one less. -flight is okay, but below both -wing and -tail for me.
birchfur - a young pale-grey tabby tom with white paws. decent at balancing, but not good enough in any particular area to warrant a special suffix. has a bit of a complex due to this.
mothnose - grumpy grey-brown tabby she-cat. good at tracking but often keeps discoveries to herself out of selfishness or fear that other cats may find out and steal her glory.
pigeonclaw - grey-and-white elder tom. an excellent fighter in his day, but not too confident in trees ever since he got his tail bent thanks to a nasty bite-and-shake from a stray dog.
fallowpelt - brown tabby elder she-cat. rooted in her past and dislikes change, and collects small things that have meaning to her or her old friends. holds grudges.
i lived.
