Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby jumu » Sun Mar 06, 2016 3:22 pm

Okay, first of all, I adore the wolves, especially the small splash of red. But the thing is you have four wolves. On top of that, both of the sentences are italicized, and there's only about three colors overall, which to me is a bit boring and odd. Maybe try adding more color (red), and having one of the sentences not in italics? I also suggest making the quote thing bigger so it's easier to notice and stands out cx
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Wed Mar 09, 2016 5:47 am

the yellow text is a bit hard
to read. also I think the links would
look better if they were a little smaller,
and if you used a different text border.
Maybe instead of using the text as your
quotes, you should use image font.
everything else is lovely!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ♛Queen♛ » Wed Mar 09, 2016 12:23 pm

Oh my gosh...First of all I just want to say its absolutely breath taking, I cant really find anything wrong with it other than the fact that the bio is just a bit to hard to read, but other than that...so beautiful
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby gynaboo » Wed Mar 09, 2016 12:35 pm

MOVING PICTURES! how? I honestly wish I knew how to do that... Amazing signature. @):-D
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A river made from a dragons tears, a river made of her sorrows.
A river that created a valley called Dragon Forge.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby talkshow boy » Wed Mar 09, 2016 1:24 pm

There's really not much to your signature. The images you chose are quite unclear, so you might want to find some clearer ones. It also feels empty on the sides, try adding borders or something to make it a bit more interesting. It has a lot of promise, it's just rather empty at the moment.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Fri Mar 11, 2016 10:44 am

The images don't go at the same time, and the text is only lighter colors, so the left image is more noticeable than anything else. The text's a bit hard to read, the quote is split up, and the .gifs both face the same direction. I really like it though!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby leda. » Fri Mar 11, 2016 10:51 am

      i would like it if the images were sharpened up a little bit more,
      as if they appear a tad bit blurrier to my tastes although it's not
      very recognizable. i personally don't like the small black borders
      around it, and would like it if they weren't just a plain old recta
      ngle. maybe some more dimension, like if it were rounded? the
      contrast in the colors are good, but it feels bland. i personally d
      on't like the text being bolded, as it's dull enough already. mayb
      e some light peaches, or a small white? i like the fancy borders
      , but how about dingbats or borders, just a little detail?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Zynphera » Fri Mar 11, 2016 12:13 pm

Honestly, I love it a lot! I was worried I couldn't find anything to criticize you on. ^^" However, the gif in the bottom left appears to be a bit fuzzy/staticky, most likely due to too many colors in the gif. I'd suggest finding a more sharper gif, but I honestly love your signature as it is right now. ^^
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Fri Mar 11, 2016 2:23 pm

I love it, but it lacks something to the right side. Other than that, there's nothing I can criticize. Maybe another picture on the right.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby qeu9nveq7vn » Tue Mar 15, 2016 1:11 pm

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I quite like your sig,
except from the fact
that the picture is the
same on both sides,
just flipped. Maybe find
another monochrome pic?
Maybe you could use a
site like this one to make
the quote/song lyric look
a bit more interesting!
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