LOC Adopt #153 - Will be adopted again at a later date

[Pengu.]

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This is adopt No. 153 of Version 5 of L.O.C! To be eligible to adopt you must mark the main thread, and fill out the form below! You must fill out a form for this LoC. This community is focused around participation and just really being a part of the group. If you are not up for being active in the community, please do not apply :c
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Took some suggestions from the LOC Discord for some of the next adopts I will be making. The suggestion for this lady was, obviously, an orca - thanks to Squirrelspirit for the suggestion. She has a few extras added onto her, including a back fin and a few earrings.

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[b]Username:[/b]
[b]LOC Name:[/b]
[b]Gender :[/b] Female
[b]Element:[/b] Water
[b]Allegience & Rank:[/b]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[b]History:[/b]
[b]Relationships (Optional):[/b]

Unlimited extras are allowed in this impress-me competition. However, please watch with unique and fancy coding, it always messes up on my browser and makes it very difficult to read. Thank you ^^

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Closes June 8th @ 5 PM EST

[Nanorat]

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Marking.

[Kassypen]

Marking to watch! She’s adorable. ^^

[NARANDA]

Marking (Still debating if I am going to try out or just watch...)

[CCrow]

Mark. Not sure if I’ll enter or just watch

[Pengu.]

Reminder that this competition closes this Friday, June 8th, at 5 PM EST. Judging will occur immediately after closure. If there are no completed/winning forms, the lion will be put up for adoption again at a later date.

[Pengu.]

This competition is closed.
No winner will be chosen for this competition and #153 will be reopened at a later date for claims or open adoption.

Nanorat, though you were the only completed form, it did not meet the standards to award the adopt this time around. The main section of the form, personality and history, seemed to be less focused on rather than the add-ons/extras in the form. With a personality only a few sentences long, it is hard to get a grasp for who the character is, let alone have it stand out and show in the history. Perhaps if you plan to try again when she goes up for readoption, focus more on developing a well rounded character whose personality clearly shines through in their history, and create a good story that draws the reader in and really sees her as a full character. Please don't be discouraged and try again in the future.

[Nanorat]

Ah. I see.
The reason why I didnt expand THE personality section, is because her personality was written over - bit by bit - through her other small parts, forming an overall opinion on her without repeating the same things in more than one place, like an actual story, because ya'know.. you get to know someone not by reading their data card, you learn them through parts of their live through which they show themselves... Too bad it wasnt good enough to be noticed.

I doubt Ill try again though. I guess Ill stick to only keeping my two moles.