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[-roadkill-69-]

Nursery Growth
Username and User ID: -roadkill-69- 825808
Nursery Artist (if not Self):* -roadkill-69- 825808
Transfer Artist (if not Self):* -roadkill-69- 825808
Link to Nursery Batch: here
Nursery Batch ID: N194
Link to Growth: Artimus
Have you Added any Items? If so, please list them:*


Nursery Growth
Username and User ID: -roadkill-69- 825808
Nursery Artist (if not Self):* -roadkill-69- 825808
Transfer Artist (if not Self):* -roadkill-69- 825808
Link to Nursery Batch: here
Nursery Batch ID: N194
Link to Growth: Apollo
Have you Added any Items? If so, please list them:*

[Leloiod]

Other Transfers
Username and User ID: Leloiod & 990219
Original Artist (if not Self): cinerious
Transfer Artist (if not Self): me
Link to Original Chicoon: #16
Chicoon ID: n/a
Link to Transfer: here
Have you Added any Items? If so, please list them: no

[sweathie]

Archive Closed for Updates.

Archive may be closed for a few days, please take note of this and keep the forms you need to post for when the archive is open

[sweathie]

approved
crowthefrostyfloof
LittleMaple
Foxil
Leloiod
BunnyBeam
-roadkill-69-
FatalCollapse
Zubers
Furrydogs12
hamkid
-roadkill-69- (1)
-roadkill-69-
nio
Ottercola

denied
Poppln
reason:
back leg markings are further back and go further down on the leg
dark green marking on wing is incorrect

rosemeadow
reason:
fix front hand coloring
incorrect green markings on nose bridge
wing references incorrect, light green takes up the entire lined space

Leloiod
reason:
tail bones must be connected, you cannot have free-floating bones
add "eye style edit (c)" to traits list

-roadkill-69- (2)
reason:
tail bones must be connected, you cannot have free-floating bones

Leloiod
reason:
clarity in design needed to differentiate antennae from horns
"horns" on tail do not resemble horns and would need to be edited, mainly at the base, to connect to the tail in a (semi) realistic manner. if you were to edit them to look like "extra feathers (c)", they can have that shape.

woofer-moosh
reason:
resposted

next post

[sweathie]

back after a dinner break :)

approved
-roadkill-69-
raiikou! (2,3)
Audria
Buzz Aesthetic
bananadile*
Riley ♥
ToraOkami303
Cr0wz
-roadkill-69-
VenomousParadise
shortstop
-Aeris
Ottercola
tiredddd
BunnyBeam
bananadile*
woofer-moosh
crowthefrostyfloof
nio
Rosemoon
raiikou!
-Aeris
-roadkill-69-
Buzz Aesthetic
Leloiod
MaroonCookie
~Dabi~
Poppln
woofer-moosh
-roadkill-69-
Leloiod

approved with conditions
raiikou! (1)
condition:
chicoon ID is MYO348

crowthefrostyfloof (1, 2)
condition:
in the future, the proper form to use for artist search claims is "Using a MYO (Off-Oekaki)"

Cr0wz
condition:
chicoon has "fur texture edit (UC)" not "tufts (C)"

-Aeris
condition:
in the future, please link directly to the item being transferred rather than your personal storage page

nio
condition:
ipod is an adorable name. the condition is i want you to know that <3

denied
Riley ♥
reason:
improper use of "crystal ball" item. pupil must be a sparkle or spiral shape.

birds of a feather
reason:
chicoons cannot have exposed bone
flame color incorrect, added shading obscures flame color. the most "unshaded" part of the flame is also the incorrect hex code
chicoon must also have "large patches of fire on fur (r)" in order to have a flame tail
add "colored sclera (uc)" to traits list
add "'fang edit' (c)" to traits list
signature must be moved back to the original placement
needs "unapproved" sign

also be aware: these are not grounds for denial, but may make you rethink your design
1. the horns going from the torso to back leg would restrict back leg motion
2. the "shaped flame (r)" and "missing limbs due to injury (nr)" trait combo implies that, at some point, your chicoon had a tail AND a tail-shaped flame.

Angry.Jackal
reason:
please provide link to MYOs as proof

~Dabi~
reason:
chicoons cannot be 6ft tall. height edit only allows for 20% change in height, so the tallest a chicoon can be is 3.6ft tall (height chart)
remove "colored pupil (nr)" from traits list
please list what your chicoon's "powers/abilities (r)" is in order to be approved

kroger
reason:
"extra feathers (c)" must resemble feathers
chicoon has "tail edit (uc)" - the lack of a thin tail taper at the same width of a regular chicoon tail constitutes "tail edit (uc)"

Audria
reason:
chicoon does not have "colored sclera (uc)", please make sclera white
please either use our pre-made "unapproved" sign or make one which does not obscure large parts of the chicoon

Poppln
reason:
incorrect tail stripes- uncommon chicoons must have 2 or 3 tail stripes

Poppln
reason:
lines on wings are curving the wrong way
incorrect number of stripes on back legs
incorrect number of stripes on back
incorrect pupil color
tuft on neck is facing incorrect direction
not a reason for denial, but the shading on the ear/back of neck is spreading onto the background

-Aeris
reason:
provide proof of hamkid owning "a bit better" potion

Furrydogs12 (1)
reason:
chicoon has the following traits not listed - "iris shape (uc)", "colored sclera (uc)", "eyebrow edit (c)"
one of those uncommon traits is not covered by your MYO

Furrydogs12 (2)
reason:
missing pattern on ears
horns are too small, missing darker blue
incorrect nose color, missing darker blue

VenomousParadise
reason:
missing heart on front left leg
gradient on tail is incorrect shade of pink - gradient needs to be a lighter pink, like in the original design, to not merge with the tail stripes

Syn_cat
reason:
line quality on flank markings is not consistent with original design
dark marking on head goes further down (bisects the eye)
you seem to have either edited the shading on the flame or used an incorrect flame color, please fix this

Syn_cat (1)
reason:
spots on front leg incorrect color
incorrect pupil color
incorrect wing markings (back of the wing is same as front)
tail stripes and foot markings do not have feathered edges

Syn_cat (2)
reason:
missing light gray marking on top of neck
missing green on back feet
green on tail intersects with tail stripes in original design
medium gray meeting the nose should curve

[Angry.Jackal]

back after a dinner break :)

approved with conditions

Angry.Jackal
reason:
please provide link to MYOs as proof

Here is the link to my MYO purchase in the shop and here is Buzz receiving my payment; and for good measure here is Buzz accepting my order.

Please let me know if I need any more documentation!

[sweathie]

back after a dinner break :)

approved with conditions

Angry.Jackal
reason:
please provide link to MYOs as proof

Here is the link to my MYO purchase in the shop and here is Buzz receiving my payment; and for good measure here is Buzz accepting my order.

Please let me know if I need any more documentation!

please repost your form when the archive is open again!

[sweathie]

archive open

[cecro]

Using a MYO (Off-Oekaki)
Username and User ID: kroger + 1018618
Link to Chicoon: he is wanted for several counts of arson
Edits on Chicoon:
> custom lined (NR)
> expression (NR)
> colored pupil (NR)
> single flame color
> ears (C)
> tufts (C)
> feathers (C)
> horns (C)(tufted)
> eyelashes (C)
> eye style (C)
> tail (UC)
> mane (R)
> 0 stripes (R)
> "jazzberry jam" flame color
Rarity of Chicoon: rare
Have you Added any Items? If so, please list them: nah
Which MYO are you using?: free batch o chicoons (staff myo)

[Riley ♥]

Using a MYO (On-Oekaki)
Username and User ID: Riley ♥ + 290656
Link to Chicoon: Forum/viewtopic.php?f=32&t=4770187
Edits on Chicoon: NR: Expressions, piercings
Common: Single fire colour, minor tail tuft edit, eyelashes
Uncommon: Unmatching eyes/fire
Rarity of Chicoon: Uncommon
Have you Added any Items? If so, please list them:
Which MYO are you using?:


Other Transfers
Username and User ID: Riley ♥ / 290656
Original Artist (if not Self):* toy20243
Transfer Artist (if not Self):* Self
Link to Original Chicoon:
Forum/viewtopic.php?t=4772324 (#32)
Forum/viewtopic.php?f=124&t=4772431
Chicoon ID: #32 on Kei's Final Dive
Link to Transfer: Forum/viewtopic.php?t=4773241
Have you Added any Items? If so, please list them:* N/A