Orb Cat Raffles

[Echos]

It's time for a contest!

I will be giving away this little girl. Her name is Dottie! Here's what you have to do to win her:

You must make a story. Here's what you have to do in the story!

You must include Dottie in some way!
Include how she got her spots! [Be creative!}
Include why her spots change into rainbow colors! {Be creative!}

Rules!

Nothing inappropriate!
Put effort into your story!
This is not a raffle, the best story wins.
Put the name of Echo's Bff in the 'Other' part of the form!
I'm sorry to be strict, but if you do not read the rules, your form will be ignored until I find that you have reread the rules.

Here's the form!

Username:
Story:
Other:

If you pretty t up, it will b a bonus!


1. Endme
2. Tala2121
3. Fandomturtles
4. Jay~Walker~And~Luna~
5. Hopegracecatdog
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.

Things I like in a story:

UnUsUaL tHiNgS
Creativity!
Humor!

[Febuh]

Username: Edme

Story: In a small cave lived a orb cat named Dottie.She moved in the cave far from other Orb cats beacuse they would make fun of how plain she was. Dottie suprisingly didnt have any dots on her, she was just plain white with black ears and orbs.Won day she went to go get some berrys from the forest. It wasn't very common to find berries in the forest for most of it was dead trees. She knew a secret spot were there were a few. On her way she saw a old path she never noticed before. Of course being the curious little cat she is she went down it.It was hidden bye some vines that were about 3 feet wide. She didnt care she pushed and tugged at the vines to get through. She mad it! She begain to walk down the trail when she came across a bush of odd looking berries. It was strange.. they were all sorts of colors and gave of a sweet scent. She picked one off and ploped it into her mouth.the sweet smell of them were the same as they tasted, Delicious! After she ate a few she grabbed some to put into her basket to take back to the cave. While she was walking back she heard a twig break from behind her. Right behind her was a young cat like her. In a soft meow the stranger said "hi..". "H-hello" meowed dottie back. " i-i-im lost... can you help me?"."uhh..sure" dottie replied happily. She walked back to the cave with her new friend named Echo. When the reached the cave Echo meowed " wow it is very beautiful..". "Thanks" said dottie."I also love your spots on you and how they change colors! Im absolutely gorgeous". Dottie narrowd her eyes and turned her head "what?". Echo said "on your pelt silly!" Dottie looked on her back. Spots spot were everywhere! "OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH" yelled dottie. Dottie then pranced around with echo laughing and dottie shared her story of how she got her spots.

Other:Echo's BFF

[azhdarchid]

Username:
Tala2121

Story:

~DOTTIE'S SPOTS~

Many want to know the story of Dottie's spots. There are many versions of the story, but only one correct one. Here is one version of the story:
Dottie yawned. She padded out of her cave, looking at the morning sky. It's so beautiful! She thought. I wish I could be that beautiful. Dottie knew she was pretty, but she didn't know how she could compare with the beauty of the sunrise. "So, you want to be pretty, huh?" A harsh voice spoke. Dottie spun around, her fur puffed up. "Who are you?" She hissed, surprised by the sudden appearance of a cat. "You don't need to know..." The cat replied, sly as a fox. It was pure black, even it's eyes. "Now come with me, Dottie, if you want to be beautiful." The cat slunk away, apparently not caring if Dottie followed. How does it know my name? And my thoughts? All of Dottie's instincts were telling her not to follow this cat, but she wanted to be as beautiful as the sunrise. So she followed the cat.
They eventually made it to a shadowy forest. The trees were pure black, just like the cat she was following, and grey vines hung from them. The grass was a sickly brown, and weeds grew everywhere. Dottie was about to ask if they were really going in, when the cat dashed in without hesitation. Dottie pauses, then followed. The grass and vines turned toward her, trying to trap her. She shook them off, and ran faster. She kept losing the cat, but found it again by scent. How is that cat so fast? She wondered, after losing it again. she ran blindly starting to panic. What if she was lost forever! She skidded to a stop; just before falling into a huge expanse of black water. She peered into the murky water, but couldn't see a thing. "Well?" A voice growled. "Aren't you going to jump in?" Dottie spun around to see the cat. "Why should I trust you?" She growled. "I almost got lost in this creepy forest, because of you!" The cat started to walk away.[color] "Fine," [color=#808080]It sighed. "Don't be beautiful." Dottie thought for a moment. "Okay, fine!" She called. "I'll do it!" The cat grinned, before turning around. "Wonderful!" It said, satisfied. "You've made the right choice." Dottie wasn't so sure, but this cat had promised her. "So, what do I do?" Sha asked. "Simple," The cat replied. "Just jump in." Dottie nodded. She held her breath, then dove into the water.
Ahhh!!! It burns! The water was like black acid.Dottie tried to swim. The water was pulling her down. Which way was up? Through the fog of pain, she could hear the cat's cruel laughter above. I've got you now. She winced with every stroke of her paws, but she finally reached the surface. She gasped for air, sucking it into her aching lungs. Then she padded to the shore, the water still burning her. She finally stood on dry land. "Why did you do that!" She asked the cat. "I almost died!" The cat laughed again. "But look! You're beautiful now!" Dottie looked down. She was covered in ugly black burns. "Wha-?" She felt like fainting. "This...this isn't beauty!"
The cat stepped closer. "But you're beautiful to me." He purred dangerously. "Stay away from me!" Dottie hissed. Just then, a beautiful navy blue cat with monarch butterfly colored with landed between them. "What is going on?" She asked, glaring at the all black cat. "Uh, nothing!" The cat said quickly, then ran away. The monarch cat sighed, then turned to Dottie. "Who are you?" She asked gently, her eyes softening. "M-my name's Dottie," She replied. She glanced down at the black blotches covering her body. "Can you fix my fur? I used to be a pretty white. And who are you?" The cat replied' "I am Queen Monarch. and as for your fur, I cant make it how it originally was, but I can do this." The queen flicked her tail at Dottie, and the ugly burn marks were transformed into beautiful rainbow leopard spots, constantly shifting colors. "There!" The queen said, satisfied. "You are prettier than the most spectacular sunrise." Prettier than a sunrise... Dottie jumped around with excitement. "Thank you so much!" She paused. "But how do I get back home?" Queen Monarch smiled. "Leave that to me." The queen flicked her tail once more, and Dottie fell asleep. She woke up in her den. The sun was just rising. Was that all a dream? She glanced down at her spots. It was true! she coulnd wait to tell all of her friends. THE END
Now that is one version of the story, but is it the right one? No body knows. but it just might be.....

Other:
((Random guess, Echo's BFF is Aqua?))

[Echos]

Username: Edme

Story: In a small cave lived a orb cat named Dottie.She moved in the cave far from other Orb cats beacuse they would make fun of how plain she was. Dottie suprisingly didnt have any dots on her, she was just plain white with black ears and orbs.Won day she went to go get some berrys from the forest. It wasn't very common to find berries in the forest for most of it was dead trees. She knew a secret spot were there were a few. On her way she saw a old path she never noticed before. Of course being the curious little cat she is she went down it.It was hidden bye some vines that were about 3 feet wide. She didnt care she pushed and tugged at the vines to get through. She mad it! She begain to walk down the trail when she came across a bush of odd looking berries. It was strange.. they were all sorts of colors and gave of a sweet scent. She picked one off and ploped it into her mouth.the sweet smell of them were the same as they tasted, Delicious! After she ate a few she grabbed some to put into her basket to take back to the cave. While she was walking back she heard a twig break from behind her. Right behind her was a young cat like her. In a soft meow the stranger said "hi..". "H-hello" meowed dottie back. " i-i-im lost... can you help me?"."uhh..sure" dottie replied happily. She walked back to the cave with her new friend named Echo. When the reached the cave Echo meowed " wow it is very beautiful..". "Thanks" said dottie."I also love your spots on you and how they change colors! Im absolutely gorgeous". Dottie narrowd her eyes and turned her head "what?". Echo said "on your pelt silly!" Dottie looked on her back. Spots spot were everywhere! "OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH" yelled dottie. Dottie then pranced around with echo laughing and dottie shared her story of how she got her spots.

Other:Echo's BFF

Very nice! I meant for you to put who Echo's bff is, but I guess that'll work too XD You are added to the raffle!

[GenericGadget]

USERNAME: Fandomturtles
Story: Dottie stretched out on the warm sunbathed rock and wondered why she was the only one that didn't have spots. She heard something in the nearby bushes move so she stood up to try and see if there was any thing there. The lose pebbles on the rock shifted and she fell into the deep river.
Water filled her nose and mouth as she tried to get to the surface. Quickly being over come with exhaustion she looked to the surface. A bright figure shone right above the surface and reached out her paw for Dottie to grab on to.
Dottie used all the strength she could muster. She finally broke the surface of the water and she was pulled to the edge.
The bright figure spoke, "I am Cas. I have come to give you three wishes your first one was used when I saved you from the water, you have two left."
Dottie replied "I want spots like everyone else"
"Granted. One left."
Dottie looked at her reflection in the water she looked exactly like every one else. She realized that being different wasn't bad it was something to cherish. She wanted to be different again, to stand out from the crowd.
"Make my spots different, like no other cat has seen before, make them bright, make them shine, make them unique."
"Are you certain my dear?"
"Absolutely"
"Granted"
Dottie's spots changed colors with the blink of an eye. They were the most unique spots Dottie had ever seen.
That was the day Dottie got her spots.
Other:Echo's Bff is Dottie . Hope you like my story

[Echos]

USERNAME: Fandomturtles
Story: Dottie stretched out on the warm sunbathed rock and wondered why she was the only one that didn't have spots. She heard something in the nearby bushes move so she stood up to try and see if there was any thing there. The lose pebbles on the rock shifted and she fell into the deep river. Water filled her nose and mouth as she tried to get to the surface. Quickly being over come with exhaustion she looked to the surface. A bright figure shone right above the surface and reached out her paw for Dottie to grab on to. Dottie used all the strength she could muster. She finally broke the surface of the water and she was pulled to the edge. The bright figure spoke "I have come to give you three wishes your first one was used when I saved you from the water, you have two left."
Dottie replied "I want spots like everyone else"
"Granted. One left."
Dottie looked at her reflection in the water she looked exactly like every one else. She realized that being different wasn't bad it was something to cherish. She wanted to be different again, to stand out from the crowd.
"Make my spots different, like no other cat has seen before, make them bright, make them shine, make them unique."
"Are you certain my dear?"
"Absolutely"
"Granted"
Dottie's spots changed colors with the blink of an eye they were unique.
That was the day Dottie got her spots.
Other:Echo's Bff is Dottie . Hope you like my story

I like it! Especially this part: "-like no other cat has seen before. Make them bright, Make them Shine, Make them unique." I will add you to the contest!





Also, I'm adding a second prize to the equation! Whoever guesses Echo's bff right wins! Hint: It's not Dottie!

[Prince Endymion]

Username:~Jay~walker~&~luna~

Story: Once there was a young orb kitten. Her parents named her Dottie, for when she was young she had glorious dots all over her. Yet, as the years went by, Dottie's spots began to fade till finally, they were gone. In fear, Dottie ran away from home, scared and upset. 'What happened to my fur?' She thought as she silently sobbed in the dark of a forest. As she moved along, the forest began to have more light. All around her was colorful trees and plants, many of which looked like the candies she loved to eat. Up ahead was a majestic palace that towered above the land. Dottie raced ahead, looking from side to side, seeing the beauty of this land. Before long, Dottie heard a meow coming from a patch of lollipop flowers. She cautiously padded over and saw a small little orb cat, trapped in the 'sticks' of the flowers. Dottie immediately broke off a few flowers. "Are you ok?" She asked. The orb cat mearly nodded as a voice echoed through Dotties mind, "Yes, I am fine. Thank you! In return I will grant you three wishes!" "Really?!" Dottie asked. Once more, the cat nodded. Dottie purred with delight, "I wish for my spots back!" In a flash of light, there was once more, black leopard spots all over Dottie. "Hm... I want to take something back from this beautiful land... I wish for my spots to be as colorful as the scenery around here!!" She cried out. Now, Dotties spots flashed gorgeous colors. Dottie smiled, "And now... I want to go home, please! Thank you little cat, what is your name?" Dottie began teleporting back home. "You are most welcome! My name means nothing, though... we shall meet again!"

Other: Destiny!

[GenericGadget]

Is the BFF narcissus ((spelling?))

[hopegracecatdog]

Username: hopegracecatdog
Story:

This is a story about how Dottie got her spots and how she made a new bff
On a night like no other the stars were high above her head and the moon was like a bowl of milk shining like the stars them selves she looked upon them in aw. Looking up so long she had not noticed she wondered off into a eerie yet beautiful forest full of moonlight and shadows. Dottie felt like some thing or some one was calling out to her. So she kept on walking until she came upon a under ground chamber it was small and dark and the tunnel was narrow. she used her whiskers to guide herself down. in the distance she heard water dripping and dropping and water running. As she got closer she saw a pure white glow getting closer. After a few paw steps she enter a HUMONGOUS tavern and up above was a hole big enough for the moon and stars to shine down on a pool of water it was very shallow but from her point of view it looked like the heavens came down on this little patch of water. She could not believe her eyes to the left of the tavern was a little water fall trickling down. to her right was a littler hole were the water trickled out. But the most amazing thing was what was right in front of her! just before she entered it was a plain smooth clear rock but as the moon covered the hole the rock lit up with amazing colors the walls of the tavern let up in marvelous colors like stars but not stars like rainbow stars! the stars started to gather at the left side of the tavern and manifested into another orb cat his pelt was a shimmer of stars and this cat smirked and said " Hi my names Leo!" He seemed quite pleasant and charming. I fluffed up not knowing what to expect he quickly said " no worries i wont hurt you its always well to see some one new!" he said his eyes sparkling like the moon itself. I quirked my head side ways and gleefully said " HI my name is Dottie!" he sat down and " you don't have very many spots?" I scoffed and you don't look much like a Leo!" he laughed " what does a Leo look like i am a constellation orb cat!" I myself was confused by what he meant so i went and asked " were do you come from then Leo?"
He smirked i come from the stars i can only come here when the moon is full their used to be tons of us different constellations like Capricorn and Sagittarius but they all moved on their also was other orb cats that came here to visit but they are all gone." he sighed and in his eyes you could see that he was remedied of them. "O" I looked down and then back up " will then I guess I will just have to be your new friend!" I exclaimed as I jumped up Leo chuckled sure his spirite brightened up "ok!"
and hour went by and i had not realized it was almost dawn I had to go! I turned to Leo "I have to go sorry its almost dawn!" He looked almost astonished and looked back to me and sighed "ok see you soon then?" At that moment he started to become transparent I looked at him in shock "were are you going!" Leo chuckled sadly "I have to go back to the stars" he tilted his head up and said " I hope to see you soon don't forget!" and the stars on the wall gathered around him and me. I woke up with a startle and looked around for Leo " was it just a dream?" as she followed the tunnel back out the sun was rising and in the distance she heard a voice "don't forget"
as she got back home she looked in the mirror and gasped her fur looked like little diamond rainbow stars had gathered in her fur and she remembered Leo she was just as aww struck by the colors just like in the cave and she chuckled and said tell next full moon I shall see you again my dear friend.

Other:
I hope you enjoy!
the song i listed to well typing this lovely story is
http://youtu.be/bDUnQs4u2oQ

Echo's Bff Shine???

[azhdarchid]

Username:
Tala2121

Story:

~DOTTIE'S SPOTS~

Many want to know the story of Dottie's spots. There are many versions of the story, but only one correct one. Here is one version of the story:
Dottie yawned. She padded out of her cave, looking at the morning sky. It's so beautiful! She thought. I wish I could be that beautiful. Dottie knew she was pretty, but she didn't know how she could compare with the beauty of the sunrise. "So, you want to be pretty, huh?" A harsh voice spoke. Dottie spun around, her fur puffed up. "Who are you?" She hissed, surprised by the sudden appearance of a cat. "You don't need to know..." The cat replied, sly as a fox. It was pure black, even it's eyes. "Now come with me, Dottie, if you want to be beautiful." The cat slunk away, apparently not caring if Dottie followed. How does it know my name? And my thoughts? All of Dottie's instincts were telling her not to follow this cat, but she wanted to be as beautiful as the sunrise. So she followed the cat.
They eventually made it to a shadowy forest. The trees were pure black, just like the cat she was following, and grey vines hung from them. The grass was a sickly brown, and weeds grew everywhere. Dottie was about to ask if they were really going in, when the cat dashed in without hesitation. Dottie pauses, then followed. The grass and vines turned toward her, trying to trap her. She shook them off, and ran faster. She kept losing the cat, but found it again by scent. How is that cat so fast? She wondered, after losing it again. she ran blindly starting to panic. What if she was lost forever! She skidded to a stop; just before falling into a huge expanse of black water. She peered into the murky water, but couldn't see a thing. "Well?" A voice growled. "Aren't you going to jump in?" Dottie spun around to see the cat. "Why should I trust you?" She growled. "I almost got lost in this creepy forest, because of you!" The cat started to walk away.[color] "Fine," [color=#808080]It sighed. "Don't be beautiful." Dottie thought for a moment. "Okay, fine!" She called. "I'll do it!" The cat grinned, before turning around. "Wonderful!" It said, satisfied. "You've made the right choice." Dottie wasn't so sure, but this cat had promised her. "So, what do I do?" Sha asked. "Simple," The cat replied. "Just jump in." Dottie nodded. She held her breath, then dove into the water.
Ahhh!!! It burns! The water was like black acid.Dottie tried to swim. The water was pulling her down. Which way was up? Through the fog of pain, she could hear the cat's cruel laughter above. I've got you now. She winced with every stroke of her paws, but she finally reached the surface. She gasped for air, sucking it into her aching lungs. Then she padded to the shore, the water still burning her. She finally stood on dry land. "Why did you do that!" She asked the cat. "I almost died!" The cat laughed again. "But look! You're beautiful now!" Dottie looked down. She was covered in ugly black burns. "Wha-?" She felt like fainting. "This...this isn't beauty!"
the cat stepped closer. "But you're beautiful to me." He purred dangerously. "Stay away from me!" Dottie hissed. Just then, a beautiful navy blue cat with monarch butterfly colored with landed between them. "What is going on?" She asked, glaring at the all black cat. "Uh, nothing!" The cat said quickly, then ran away. The monarch cat sighed, then turned to Dottie. "Who are you?" She asked gently, her eyes softening. "M-my name's Dottie," She replied. She glanced down at the black blotches covering her body. "Can you fix my fur? I used to be a pretty white. And who are you?" The cat replied' "I am Queen Monarch. and as for your fur, I cant make it how it originally was, but I can do this." The queen flicked her tail at Dottie, and the ugly burn marks were transformed into beautiful rainbow leopard spots, constantly shifting colors. "There!" The queen said, satisfied. "You are prettier than the most spectacular sunrise." Prettier than a sunrise... Dottie jumped around with excitement. "Thank you so much!" She paused. "But how do I get back home?" Queen Monarch smiled. "Leave that to me." The queen flicked her tail once more, and Dottie fell asleep. She woke up in her den. The sun was just rising. Was that all a dream? She glanced down at her spots. It was true! she coulnd wait to tell all of her friends. THE END
Now that is one version of the story, but is it the right one? No body knows. but it just might be.....

Other:
((Random guess, Echo's BFF is Aqua?))

I finished my story! :3