The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

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The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

Postby banshee; » Tue Jan 03, 2012 5:16 am

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The Roleplay School is looking for Proctors. If you think you're proctor material and would be happy to join our staff team, please fill out the form and post it here, and you will be contacted by PM if we think you would make a good addition to the family. c:


What we expect of our proctors;
•To be online at least once a day so that they may edit and revise your student's work.
•To be polite and mature, but firm.
•To resolve problems in a nice way, without losing their head.
•To be above average in their roleplaying skills.
•To put time and effort into their work.

We reserve the right to dismiss you if you do not meet our standards once you are hired.

The Roleplay School main thread can be found here.
The Proctor Handbook is found here.

Application;
Code: Select all
[i][b]Your name:[/b][/i]
[i][b]How long have you been rping:[/b][/i]
[i][b]What sites have you rped on:[/b][/i]
[i][b]What type of rp do you consider to be your specialty:[/b][/i]

[i][b]How many words do you usually post:[/b][/i]

[i][b]How often are you on CS:[/b][/i]
[i][b]How long are you online:[/b][/i] (Guestimated number of hours)
[i][b]Time zone you are in (BST):[/b][/i]

[i][b]Sample rp:[/b][/i]


Process;
You may post your application on Monday to Wednesday.
On Thursday applications are reviewed.
The new proctors are announced on Friday or Saturday.
There will be one, two, or three proctors hired each week.

This Week's Additions;

♦Kayla
♦carrie911
♦ι'мαɢιиαтισи
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❝𝑌𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑚𝑎𝑛𝑦 𝑡𝑦𝑝𝑒𝑠 𝑜𝑓 𝑝𝑒𝑜𝑝𝑙𝑒 𝑖𝑛 𝑦𝑜𝑢𝑟 𝑙𝑖𝑓𝑒.
𝑌𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑑𝑒𝑙𝑖𝑐𝑎𝑡𝑒 𝑓𝑙𝑜𝑤𝑒𝑟𝑠, 𝑟𝑎𝑔𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑜𝑐𝑒𝑎𝑛𝑠,
𝑞𝑢𝑖𝑒𝑡 𝑓𝑜𝑟𝑒𝑠𝑡𝑠, 𝑡𝑜𝑤𝑒𝑟𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑚𝑜𝑢𝑛𝑡𝑎𝑖𝑛𝑠, 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑐𝑜𝑙𝑜𝑢𝑟𝑓𝑢𝑙
𝑠𝑘𝑖𝑒𝑠. 𝑌𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑡ℎ𝑢𝑛𝑑𝑒𝑟𝑠𝑡𝑜𝑟𝑚𝑠, 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡
𝑙𝑖𝑔ℎ𝑡𝑛𝑖𝑛𝑔. 𝑇ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑘𝑛𝑜𝑐𝑘 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑑𝑜𝑤𝑛, 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙
𝑙𝑒𝑎𝑣𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑏𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑡ℎ𝑙𝑒𝑠𝑠. 𝑌𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑠𝑢𝑛𝑟𝑖𝑠𝑒𝑠, 𝑦𝑜𝑢
𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑔𝑎𝑟𝑑𝑒𝑛𝑠. 𝑇ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑔𝑖𝑣𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑙𝑖𝑔ℎ𝑡, 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑦
𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑡𝑎𝑘𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑜𝑛 𝑎𝑑𝑣𝑒𝑛𝑡𝑢𝑟𝑒𝑠. 𝐸𝑥𝑝𝑙𝑜𝑟𝑒 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑚. 𝐺𝑒𝑡
𝑙𝑜𝑠𝑡 𝑤𝑖𝑡ℎ 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑚. 𝑇ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑎𝑙𝑙 ℎ𝑎𝑣𝑒 𝑠𝑜𝑚𝑒𝑡ℎ𝑖𝑛𝑔
𝑑𝑖𝑓𝑓𝑒𝑟𝑒𝑛𝑡 𝑡𝑜 𝑡𝑒𝑎𝑐ℎ 𝑦𝑜𝑢.❞
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Re: The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

Postby Toxi+Bbun » Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:42 am

Your name:
Toxi
How long have you been rping:
Three years
What sites have you rped on:
ChickenSmoothie, WebkinzInsider, and a private site that my friends and I made.
What type of rp do you consider to be your specialty:
Humanoid RPs
How many words do you usually post:
About two hundred in semi-literate RPs.
How often are you on CS:
Everyday, except if something comes up.
How long are you online:
5-7 hours.
Time zone you are in (BST):
UTC -6
(6 hours behind BST)
Sample rp:
Nora Samwell

"Boy did I pick the day to leave," Nora thought, as she walked, her pull-on boots slapping the pavement. She loved to watch the rain, but hated to be in it, especially without an umbrella. She was in a part of town she had never been in before. To be honest, it seemed quite shady to her. There were hardly any billboards, and the buildings weren't fancy. At all.

Looking up, she adjusted her bean. The green yarn was soaked, and strands clung to her fingers. She saw a store labeled "Groceries". It had an ugly colored green and yellow awning. Sighing to herself, she quickened her walk. Nora stopped once she reached it, and sat just underneath the window ledge.

Using flashlight she had brought, Nora peered into her grey luggage bag. She had packed a couple changes of clothes, two other pairs of shoes, a notebook, a small camera, her beloved donkey stuffed animal, non-perishable food, water bottles, and a piece of parchment.

She set an empty water bottle just outside the awning to catch some rainwater. Nora then pulled out the parchment. They, her "parents" said to find the people on the list. Like her, they were sixteen. And also like her, they had powers that corresponded with their eye color.

Nora sighed a second time, and reviewed the conversation with her "parents". "Why didn't they tell me sooner?" Was one of many questions that swam in her mind as she sat there, listening to the rain.
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Re: The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

Postby Mimi-911 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 1:50 pm

Your name:
Mimi
How long have you been rping:
Uh.... A couple of years I'd say. Not sure of the exact amount of years though. ^^"
What sites have you rped on:
CS, Pokefarm...
What type of rp do you consider to be your specialty:
Animals

How many words do you usually post:
I have no idea ^^" Over 200 though, probably up to.... well as much as I feel necessary
How often are you on CS:
As often as I can, though sometimes limited to 3 days a week...
How long are you online:
All day ^^
Time zone you are in (BST):
What...? All I know is I'm in Eastern Australian time ^-^"

Sample rp:
Finding...
account is inactive; occasionally checked by a friend.

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Re: The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

Postby banshee; » Sat Feb 25, 2012 7:56 am

This weeks addition is Toxi! c: Congrats, and welcome :3
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❝𝑌𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑚𝑎𝑛𝑦 𝑡𝑦𝑝𝑒𝑠 𝑜𝑓 𝑝𝑒𝑜𝑝𝑙𝑒 𝑖𝑛 𝑦𝑜𝑢𝑟 𝑙𝑖𝑓𝑒.
𝑌𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑑𝑒𝑙𝑖𝑐𝑎𝑡𝑒 𝑓𝑙𝑜𝑤𝑒𝑟𝑠, 𝑟𝑎𝑔𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑜𝑐𝑒𝑎𝑛𝑠,
𝑞𝑢𝑖𝑒𝑡 𝑓𝑜𝑟𝑒𝑠𝑡𝑠, 𝑡𝑜𝑤𝑒𝑟𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑚𝑜𝑢𝑛𝑡𝑎𝑖𝑛𝑠, 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑐𝑜𝑙𝑜𝑢𝑟𝑓𝑢𝑙
𝑠𝑘𝑖𝑒𝑠. 𝑌𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑡ℎ𝑢𝑛𝑑𝑒𝑟𝑠𝑡𝑜𝑟𝑚𝑠, 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡
𝑙𝑖𝑔ℎ𝑡𝑛𝑖𝑛𝑔. 𝑇ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑘𝑛𝑜𝑐𝑘 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑑𝑜𝑤𝑛, 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙
𝑙𝑒𝑎𝑣𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑏𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑡ℎ𝑙𝑒𝑠𝑠. 𝑌𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑠𝑢𝑛𝑟𝑖𝑠𝑒𝑠, 𝑦𝑜𝑢
𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑔𝑎𝑟𝑑𝑒𝑛𝑠. 𝑇ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑔𝑖𝑣𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑙𝑖𝑔ℎ𝑡, 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑦
𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑡𝑎𝑘𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑜𝑛 𝑎𝑑𝑣𝑒𝑛𝑡𝑢𝑟𝑒𝑠. 𝐸𝑥𝑝𝑙𝑜𝑟𝑒 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑚. 𝐺𝑒𝑡
𝑙𝑜𝑠𝑡 𝑤𝑖𝑡ℎ 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑚. 𝑇ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑎𝑙𝑙 ℎ𝑎𝑣𝑒 𝑠𝑜𝑚𝑒𝑡ℎ𝑖𝑛𝑔
𝑑𝑖𝑓𝑓𝑒𝑟𝑒𝑛𝑡 𝑡𝑜 𝑡𝑒𝑎𝑐ℎ 𝑦𝑜𝑢.❞
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Re: The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

Postby Nimble Awesomeness » Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:02 am

(By the way, I would have waited to post my form until Monday, but since it's so inactive anyways I figured it wouldn't make much of a difference.)

Your name: Nimblestep
How long have you been rping: Since I joined Chicken Smoothie, June I think.
What sites have you rped on: Just Chicken Smoothie.
What type of rp do you consider to be your specialty: Warrior cats, cats.

How many words do you usually post: It really depends on who I'm RPing with, most of the time I mirror post but I try to always do more. So, about 230 words on average.

How often are you on CS: Very often, at LEAST once a day.
How long are you online: (Guestimated number of hours) Again, it depends, but I try to stay on as long as I can, and I can normally get one for at least an hour every day. But more for most days.
Time zone you are in (BST): Pacific standard time.

Sample rp:

Stormpaw
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"Bl-Blossompaw?" he called out into the dark cave. He padded further in. While he was warmer, it wasn't by much. "Blossompaw, are you there?" his tail lashed in worry. He had heard her call out, but couldn't quite place where she was. "Blossompaw, say something," he said, a little more commandingly this time. He padded around the cave in a small circle, not wanting to get lost. Alas, he did this until his nose finally rested itself on her small, fluffy body. The heat was fading from her very fast, and Stormpaw laid down next to her on the snow-less ground. "Blossompaw, please, wake up. Come on, it's not time to sleep. Blossompaw!" he whimpered with fright and concern. "Don't be dead," he whispered. "Don't leave me here, now. I can't be alone like this Blossompaw... Please, wake up!" his voice pleaded in such a tone that would bring tears to any cats eyes.


Never mind :)
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Re: The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

Postby ωιитєяfℓу » Sat Feb 25, 2012 2:38 pm

Your name:
Unknown Child, but everyone calls me UC~
How long have you been rping:
Since I joined CS - maybe a couple of days after I joined actually. XD
What sites have you rped on:
Just CS, but I'm joining some new ones this weekend.
What type of rp do you consider to be your specialty:
Humanoid, definitely. I can also be found occasionally doing the odd fantasy creature.

How many words do you usually post:
Gosh, I don't know. Quite a lot, I'm guessing. XD
*Yowch, the sample below has over eight hundred words and that was on a bad day with only one character.*

How often are you on CS:
As much as I can. Which is at least once a day to check RPs and stuff but I can get on more if I have the inclination.
How long are you online:
Two, maybe three hours over a school day, and at least five or six at the weekend. But I'm warning you, maybe once or twice a week I won't be able to get on.
Time zone you are in (BST):
Western European Time. UK, basically.

Sample rp:

Unknown Child wrote:
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So lately, been wondering
Who will be there to take my place
When I'm gone, you'll need love
To light the shadows on your face
If a great wave shall fall
It would fall upon us all
And between the sand and stone
Could you make it on your own?


Charlene Soraia - Wherever You Will Go

Mark: "I predict a lot of fights in the future"
Someone else: "You can read the future?"
Mark: "Nah. I met her." *Indicates Noella*
MλƦҞ
||Seventeen||Male||

Glaring at the guy who dared to talk to him, then feeling really self-conscious, Mark backed down, letting James take out all his anger on him. Tuning it out, Mark scanned the room, meeting the girl who's name he mocked's eyes. Immediately he felt incredibly bad, she was exceedingly pretty and had the misfortune of having a bad name. - or what he thought of as a bad name. Somehow, though, he just knew that it was the right name for her and that she had a...bad reputation. A slight grin slipped onto his face before he turned away, letting James walk away from him and letting everything the guy had said to him slide.
He barely listened to the last part of what the hologram said, but when the guy was sliced in half, Mark jumped to his feet and closed his eyes - he wasn't usually squeamish, but watching a guy getting cut in half always put him off things.

But then the guy who had brought them here literally said, "You'll be escorted to your rooms. There, you'll find some semi-formal attire that you can choose to wear to the banquet tonight." Food? After watching that? Wow. But then again, he'd barely eaten his cereal this morning... And now his stomach was growling. Wow, after all that, he was still hungry.

It was then that he realised that he hadn't been paying attention at all, and that most of the other people had left the room. Glancing at the Commander, Mark practically ran from the room, fearing staying in the same room with the man that had kidnapped him. He followed the attendant down the corridor, barely realising that his room was next door to the girl from earlier, Noella.

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The design of the room was pretty simple, just plain white walls and double bed in the middle of the room - hang on, was that his I Hate Mondays poster above the bed? Mark stared at it, then realised it wasn't, it didn't have Mr. Grumpy on it, it had some guy he didn't know on it looking grumpy. Walking over to the wardrobe, he tripped on the edge of a plush rug and fell head-first into the wardrobe door. "Ow." Mark muttered, rubbing his forehead and pulling the door open.

Slightly shocked at what he saw, Mark pulled out the hoody and jeans that he had been wearing when he had arrived. Throwing it behind him onto the floor in favour of a white suit, Mark contemplated wearing the suit. He had never worn a suit before, and was unsure about the tie. Mark finally decided on wearing it, knowing that he'd most likely spill something on it at some time, but didn't care. He knew that he had to apoligise to the girl he had offended, and he wanted to look his best when he did so.

Moments later, Mark was in his white suit, deciding to leave his hat in his room. It felt like he was leaving part of himself behind as he walked out of his room, ruffling his curly hair so that it looked okay, and was immediately worried about what people would think of him - after all, he would be spending a long time with the five people that he was heading towards now, and he wanted to make an impression. He pretty much knew that the guy who had spoken to him didn't like him, so he wasn't going to gain any friendship points with him.

When he reached the Banquet Hall, guards flanking him on either side, he paused to take a breathe before he pushed open the double doors and walking in, straightening his tie as he walked in. Immediately he saw the beautiful girl that he had insulted, and headed towards her. She looked gorgeous, her hair was down and looked like it was curled, and it was over her shoulder. The dress she was wearing took his breath away, and he took his time as he headed towards her. He saw another guy head over to her, looking sort of like James Bond, and let a smirk settle on his face as he reached them. "Urm, hey. Nu-Noella, I was just coming to say I'm sorry, I didn't mean to offend you." Rubbing the back of his head in embarrassment, Mark added, "I was wondering whether you'd mind me, um, escorting you tonight?" He looked around at the hall, shocked at his own daring. It wasn't often that he took the initiative to talk to people, things couldn't get any weirder. Apart from the guy who looked like James Bond, he just seemed crazy. "I'm Mark, by the way." Mark added, thinking that he might as well introduce himself since he knew her name and she didn't know his.
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Re: The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

Postby MBRShorse » Sat Feb 25, 2012 4:04 pm

Your name:
MBRShorse

How long have you been rping:
About 4 years

What sites have you rped on:
Chickensmoothie, Ponybox, Inkpop, and a private proboard RPG

What type of rp do you consider to be your specialty:
Humanoid

How many words do you usually post:
150-200 average. I tend to adjust to the other RPers posting, so sometimes they are shorter, but always semi-lit. In an advanced RPG, I can easily reach 500.

How often are you on CS:
Daily

How long are you online:
5 hours, off and on

Time zone you are in (BST):
Eastern Standard Time


Sample rp:

Fidelia was dressed in black. She liked to pretend that she was in a state of eternal mourning, though the idea of mourning was a concept she found to be pointless and useless. Tears and sadness were not going to suddenly bring the dead back to life. All it did was leave the cryer in a shameful state of snot and blubbering words. It was almost disgraceful. But the black set her red hair on fire, so to be ranked among the mourning was a small price she was willing to pay for such a contrast. She didn't care what other thought of her anyway. She had better things to think about.

The airship was bigger than she had imagined. The billowing, off-white ballon that held the whole thing up was atleast twice the size of her own mansion back in Lerwick. Copper wires hugged the giant entity and attached it to a bronze body that was decorate with ornate reliefs of mythical creatures, such as mermaids iand unicorns, things she hardly believed in, but she did found the craftsmanship of the art to be quite good. She was more fascinated, however, with the shining windows that reflected the silver sky that hung above her. It gave the entire ship a rather ethreal feeling. With such a fine and large vessel, ths journey was bound to be grand. Now, all she had to do was find someone to carry in her luggage for her. She had been staring at the Reverie for nearly twenty minutes, but not a soul had come out to greet her or offer to assist her with her bags. Maybe she was early. It wouldn't be the first time.

Fidelia gripped the handle of the violin case she held in her left hand. In her right hand was a larger case, built to carry a French horn. Behind her were two large, leather suitcases stuff with her clothing and other necessities, including sheet music. Somewhere beneath all of the fabric was a flute in it's case, since it was the only instrument she was willing to have "man-handled". Leaning up against her suitcases was a cello case, which someone hadn't stolen yet, to her surprise. On the streets it would fetch a handsome price. Perhaps the people in London were kind, moral folk. Well, not kind enough to help her, but at least they weren't thieves.

With a sigh, Fidelia leaned back to sit upon a suitcase, but her bustle got in her way. Blasted thing. Her mother had insisted that she wear it. Fidelia had only done so in order to shut the woman up. Corsets she was fine with, but these metal contraptions used to make her back-side look larger really drove her up a wall. They were useless, pointless, and got in the way of daily activities. Once she got on the ship, it was coming off, if she ever got on the ship. She pulled a pocketwatch out of her skirt pocket. 10:37. They left in less than 30 minutes. Why hadn't anyone shown up yet? Did she have the days mixed up? Fidelia let an irritated sigh escape her lips. She began to count the cobblestones beneath her feet as boredom slowly crept up on her. Not today. Not today.

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Re: The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

Postby tide. » Sat Feb 25, 2012 5:59 pm

    I aplogize if I've posted at the wrong time, I've just moved and my life is pretty busy so I knew that if I didn't do it now I'd forget x3

    Your name: tide.
    How long have you been rping: since 2010.
    What sites have you rped on: chickensmoothie and horseisle.
    What type of rp do you consider to be your specialty:
    powers r.p.'s are mainly what i stick to, however I've been in pretty much every single type of r.p.
    How many words do you usually post: I'm not sure how many words, but if I had to guess something like 600 / 700+.

    How often are you on CS: 7 days a week :3
    How long are you online: spread out throughout the day, but total I'd guess about three or four hours, on weekends sometimes more.
    Time zone you are in (BST): whatever timezone new south wales, australia is in x3 [ occasionally, I'll be in united states midwestern timezone. ]

    Sample rp:
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Echo
Aliquam, the Lost

Star light, star bright
I'll make a wish on you tonight
Not knowing the fact that you'll change my life

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I walked outside, enjoying the fresh air and time outside my house. I gazed up at the clear sky, the stars, not quite falling yet, from the looks of it, littering the vast expanse of darkness. I thought quietly of how my parents had taught me about every constellation, and how I'd always loved going outside to look at the stars. I thought back as far as I could, recalling an evening in June. It had been cool outside, and we'd all gone outside to look at the stars. We laid down on a blanket and pointed out different constellations to each other, which was how I had chosen to study for my constellations test. It was the Thursday before my big astronomy test. Three days later my parents would be dead. I love that night to this day. I will never, ever forget those precious moments I spent with them. I stuffed my hands deep into my pockets, turning my violet eyes towards the snow covered grounds. I yanked on my combat boots to pull them up a bit higher to avoid getting snow in my shoes. I let a single tear fall onto the snow, watching it sink in deeply and glisten in the bright, cold moonlight. That was all I'd allow myself. Every time I cried, I wouldn't stop for hours. I wanted to enjoy this meteor shower. I forged on up the slight hump that just bearly qualified as a hill, set down a blanket near a few other people who were scattered around the field near my house, and sank down onto it. I stared at my boots for a few minutes, then heard the first of the excited words of others; It's starting, I thought.
I looked up at the sky, staring at it imploringly as tears began welling up in them, and begged it. Please. Please, I am an absolute wreck. It's been four years and I can't get over it. I need a change. I need my life to change. Something needs to improve. Anything. My income, my house, my social life, please, just... please.
I let a few tears roll down my face as I gazed up at the sky. Mom, dad... don't let me down. I'm asking you. Please. Help me. "Help me," I murmured. "Something needs to change."
My violet eyes sparked with hope as more and more stars began to coat the sky in a thick, diamond light that illuminated the snow beautifully. The moon glittered more warmly, now; the accompanist to a legion of things that might somehow save me.
And in that beautiful, captivating moment, my heart lurched. Every cell in my body seemed to ache and burn, and I squeezed my eyes shut as the excruciating pain seemed to grow. I got up quickly, rolling up my blanket and staggering back to my house, which was about ten yards away. Oh my god... I thought, even my thought process slowing and somewhat blocked out by the pain. What the hell is going on?
I managed to get myself inside before I passed out, but soon I simply passed out on the floor, the pain taking over.
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I woke up seemingly hours later, judging by the lack of light in the room and no sounds coming from outside. Everything ached, but the pain had gone away -- except for a headache. After a few moments, I realized that I knew everything that had happened since I passed out. Everything was in my head. In fact, I seemed to be able to recall everything. Back to the period of creation. I saw everything that ever happened, and it was all flying through my head at an incredibly fast speed. I blinked a few times, and a feeling of fear gripped me tightly. What happened?
I got up and realized something else, too: my back felt sort of numb. I stretched my shoulders back slightly, closing my eyes and trying to crack my back. Suddenly, my eyes flew open. Something was different. Something had changed. I pushed myself up straight, and I hit the counter -- which was three feet behind me.
My heart seemed to stop. What the...? And then I realized that I hadn't just been stretching my back. I'd been stretching a large, pitch black pair of wings attached to me.
Attached.
To.
Me.

I blinked rapidly, my violet eyes taking in the impossible sight. ...How...? I still wish I had known what was going on now. If I had, I would've just gone and severed the stupid wings off and jumped off a cliff. I would've tried to end this nightmare before it started so that I would never have to go through the running, go through the pain that I would have to later. But I just thought it was a dream. Too bad it wasn't.
I'd made a wish upon a star...
And weirdly, it had come true.
Just not how I expected.

    [ not my best post ever, but the best one I could find. I haven't been in an active r.p. in ages ;_; ]
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Re: The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

Postby {{ f i a s c o }} » Sat Feb 25, 2012 8:24 pm

Your name:
(I Promise)
How long have you been rping:
About one year, in all.
What sites have you rped on:
Only properly on CS, but I started off illiteratly on the warrior cats site.
What type of rp do you consider to be your specialty:
I'd say humanoid.
How many words do you usually post:
Depends. Usually 3-5 lenghthy paragraphs, about 200 words, I'd say.
How often are you on CS:
Daily.
How long are you online:
Depends. Mondays, Wednesdays and weekends usually leans towards 4 hours, Tuesdays, Thursdays and Fridays around 1-2 hours.
Time zone you are in (BST):
Greenwich +1 I think (European)
Sample rp:


.{Aria Erudita Maycombe}.{17}.{Luminox, summoner}.{Currently: Talking with Sammy and Kris, getting undercover}.{Feeling: Hungry. Talking to strangers; putting Marvello away}.
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{''Cos I'm under the weather, just like the world, so sorry for being so bold.' KT Tunstall}

As Aria awaited for their result, her eyes clenched as a large splatter of water hit her forhead, right in between her eyes. She wiped the drop away daintily, eyes burrowing into a frown as she turned her gaze skywards. Another drop drummed her face, this time, the tip of her nose, and Aria could net help but let out a small sneeze as the small droplet tickled her factions. Almost hesitatingly, one drop followed another, as if treading on unknown territory, and soon, Aria found herself amidst the roar of hurtling aqueous meteorites crashing on the ground.

The day had been relatively pleasant; a feeble Sun playing hide-and-seek behind swift, passenger clouds, yet, somehow, this abrupt change in the weather seemed unusual and unnatural. She was no meteorologist, yet she prescenced the involvement of some gifted student or another in this sudden downpour caused by an unnoticed gathering of almost malevolant, brooding dark rain clouds. No clap of thunder betrayed the prescence of any electric stormclouds, however, Aria was confident that they might be brought about mischeviously by a certain student or another. After all, this was no normal school; by all logical standards, no ordinary students would belong here, involving her most recent aquaintances, Sammy and the dark-haired girl which she had not given the sufficient time to present herself.

In the middle of all her ponders, Aria realized that she was becoming increasingly damp. Water had soaked into her silver and white horizontally striped cardigan, and was running quickly down the length of her dark, skinny jeans. She felt a trickle of water dribble down the base of her neck, proceeding from the top of her head, and her body shivered. Her usually calm face contorted into a scowl as she rememb[ered her sole purpose of visiting the stables; Marvello. An uneasy snort rebounded off the walls of the stables, accompanied by a symphony of impatient strokes of metal horshoes against the hard stone floor. She sucked in a breath, and looked helplessely at the pair, before jogging towards the restfull stallion and untying him quickly from the wall he was anchored too. "Sorry, Marvy. The grooming must wait for another day," seh said, walking quickly with a loose grasp on the lead that attatched to the stallion's halter. She scrutinizied the paddock for Marvello's stall, gratefull to see only one door wide open, and leading the horse into it. At the door, she unclasped his halter, letting him trot briskly into the ample stall, and grabbed his mesh, cooling blanket and tossing it onto his steaming quarters. She buckled it loosely, and closed the door quickly behind her, tracking her way back to the probably confused pair at the edge of the stables. Such a pity; she hadn't even been able to check out the tracks and arenas. She guessed that could wait; the downfall was getting heavier by the minute, the rumbling in the clouds obstinately louder, along with the rumbles in her stomach.

Her smile flickered along her face, ghost-ish pallor set in it because of the decreasing temperature. "So, ladies," seh said, in a smooth tone, "I suggest we get out of the rain and into the dining room." She still needed to meet her prefect, and get changed, and memorize her schedule, and ride, and solve Marvello's pending grooming. It seemed today would be a pretty interesting day, by the looks of it. Noting the increasing rainfall, Aria broke into a half-hearted, yet light, fluttering jog, moving lithely, yet quickly, aroudn the winding path that led them to the fountain, not even waiting for the other two to catch up. Waiting would mean catching a cold, and that is currently what I less need, she thought, ponder mildly sarcastic.

She arrived at what seemed the door of a humming, warm-scented yet completely dark building, and burst through both of the doors, banging them open. Chatter ceased momentarily, curious gazes and snickers being shot in her direction; a strange, silvery blonde, completely dripping wet bursting into a dining hall was apparently not a normal occurence in this school. However, she was too distracted by the lack of light, lips parted in a small 'o' at the wonder of such dark place. To her, darkness was an unpleasant concept, and she found herself closing her eyes, brow creasing slightly and muttering a few comforting words to herself under her breath, only surprising herself to the outcome of this mumbling. "Spirit, fulfill my command and bring some light to this shadowy atrium," she intoned, voice strangely monotone in comparison to her usual, absent yet tinkly voice.

Something seemed to stirr, and Aria, uneasy by her unwilling invocation, felt a whoosh blow through the doors, enveloping her in a swirly, musky smell that made her wet hair flicker in it's prescence. Goose-bumps raised on her forearms, and, slowly, an ethereal speck of light began forming to her left. It glowed dimly, yet effectively; it was no larger than a tennis ball, yet it's light was strangely comforting. It illuminated a few metres, perhaps two, in all directions surrounding it, and Aria could now make out six tables, laid side by side, and all it's members quietened and slightly engrossed by the small spirit.

"Huh. How peculiarly unusual," she intoned, quite loudly, to her dismay, at the strength of the apparation, placing an index finger on the tip of her mouth, observing, fascinated, the floating ball of dim light.


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GT: Like all these personal attributes about you
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GT: So you just believe them and hope that
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Re: The Roleplay School; Proctor Auditions

Postby diamonds;; » Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:05 pm

{ {. F O R M .

{ {username--
sky.

{ {how long have you been role-playing?--
over a year, and ever since i have joined cs. my literacy grades at school are the highest in my class.

{ {what sites have you role-played on?--
i have role-played on a few, several of which had closed down and i have forgotten most of the names.

{ {my preffered role-playing section--
i love to role-play plots with romance in it, and warrior cats, a series by erin hunter, adventure human role-plays and anything that intrests me and is of a literate level. i am very flexible, but some role-plays, even humoids {my favourite role-plays} don't fuel my muse. i love power role-plays, fantasy ones too. i'll do anything really!

{ {how many words do you usually post?--
a minimum of six hundred words {they are also very detailed} and up to five thousand words. i havent, in a while, been able to role-play to my full standard. i wish to do this soon! my average is around 1,220 words to 3,000, with strong description and grammar. all the posts below was on a bad day, but i will be posting some of my best posts once a role-play that i have joined has started.

{ {how often are you on cs?--
Everyday. It is everyday unless I am on Holiday which I will warn you about with a week’s notice, but that is very rarely. If a holiday is planned, and at the time of waiting for the flight to land back the airport, I will almost likely be on CS saying my good bye s! However if the hotel I am in has WiFi, I will try to speak to my partner and how they can improve while i am away.

{ {how long are you online?--
The least amount of time would probably be about five hours per day, and the maximum eighteen. On Friday, Saturday and Sunday I will be on for a larger amount of time, over, six to fourteen hours a day. The most I have been on Chicken Smoothie was between fifteen to eighteen hours. My time is very flexible, and I normally spend time sorting pets, trading, PMing or posting on threads. On school days, I am on for a lot less, for about a period of about four or eight hours.

{ {the timezone i am in--
i am in the GMT zone. i am british.

{ {sample of writing--

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|{ . ғ α я я ɛ и . }|


( farren ) ( twenty ) ( straight ) ( the " clown of the ground " )


Farren is a girl with a tiny, slender built stature
that is almost small, slender
and strong build. She has a smooth and a nicely figured heart-shaped face that is
beautifully complimented with her very light, striling blonde hair, her side-fringe
which falls
into one eye. Light streaks of brown and fair black highlight her hair that blend
together nicely with her natural colour. It is thick and naturally wavy, and curls at
the very tip's end that falls freely to about half way up her back. It is sometimes
tied back with
a few strands escaping and falling over her eyes. Her eye brows are quite thin, yet
thicker that most. Her emotive eyes are rather noticeable, the pools of colour which
are bluer than the pacific ocean and seem to almost glitter and shine like the very
stars at night, sparkle when she laughs or at he most devious. Her eyes are normally
rimmed
with black eye-liner, and accented with long and fluttering eye-lashes. This young girl's
lips are as red as Roses and often seal that childish grin that adds to her cheeky
appearance.
Now this petite girl has an overall good posture with a very relaxed pose and good
shoulder length. Her torso is very thinly built, and it looks as she is unhealthy.
Her body is and her hips curve and stands at a height of a somewhat modest 5'6",
Farren's legs are short, yet
they can throw a kick and her
calves are well rounded. Her hands are small with nimble fingers that are almost always
drawing and writing or hand standing or cartwheeling, always finding something to do.
She dresses simply the way she feels. If she is excited she would wear girly floral shorts
and t-shirts, and if she is sad she would probably wear dark colours but always found with
her Pandora bracelet and red converse. She can put together the most random of
combinationsand it somehow seems to suit her. If Farren was in a crowd, she is a lot less
likely to be spotted by most as she blends in with others.

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{ { 8:12 a.m .morning. asleep

Paradise was the scenery around the girl. She lay motionless,
not ever a flicker in this slumber. The grains seemingly dance
in the fresh breeze that cooled the sun’s torrid emission,
and only blew the teen’s thick hair. All was serene and tranquil,
silent apart from the gentle wind ruffling the trees enclosing
the flowery clearing. Her sleep was not once disturbed. A purple
wild flower was blown by the wind and was caught under Farren’s
well tanned hand.
But suddenly, she awoke, but not pleasantly. A delusion, once again
In her sleep, she had had the same dream four times in a row, all of
Paradise and lying in a grain field and her arm catching a purple wild
Flower, but what does this denote? Farren asked herself this matter
repeatedly and frequently, but the query was always anonymous.
She hauled herself from her lethargy and drowse and she almost
heaved herself from bed, falling onto the floor. The model Ellie held her
stomach
felling the sudden loss of air from whithin her lungs. "What a brilliant
start to the day!" The girl cursed beneath her inhalation. Brillaint. Just Brillaint.
She wiped her eyes and faltered into the bathroom, looking into the
mirror seeing her reflection. Ugh. The girl twisted on the tap and streaked
her face full of water that conveyed her out of her dreamland. The model ]
applied mascaravigilantly to her long eyelashes, put on a thin and light shade
of eyeshadow, added blusher
and some lip gloss that she had purchased only yesterday. She brushed
her teeth quickly and chose on her 'All-saints' white T-shirt and Black
denim leggins. Her striking blonde fell behind her back as she wiped away
loose strands of a colour like a raven's wings and put on her black leather
jacket. Her look was complete with some 'Police' sunglasses. A eccentric
sound of the door-bell ringing echoed through the house causing Farren to
lope down the stairs and answer to whoever was there. Strange. There was
no-one there. She scanned
both sides of the street, yet saw zero or no-one adequate to have been
knocking on her door. With a grimace, Farren condemned the door to a shut,
then peered out of the
window to see if the someone had returned. Kids. Stupid Kids.
she sighed and shookher head as she sauntered into the open
kitchen. Pulling out a ceral box of Corn Flakes
and pouring them into a bowl, she facilitated herself to break-fast
and a concise drink of fresh
orange juice. In the reflection of the window she saw a figure move
out-side of her house.
Stupid. The model sat down at the kitchen bar, keeping a secure look
out to see who was lurking
around her yard. The casual, everyday note from her 'hard-working' parents
had been left on the marble counter, saying the same old thing.
'Gone to work, be back at 8;30. love you'

and always signed by Dad and Mom. Well thats a change. A blue note instead
of a yellow.
What am I? Six years of age? Really...
Wow. Picking up the note, she scribbled smileys with the black fountain pen that
lay besides it. After the 'you' she wrote a xP, under the 8;30 she wrote xD, before
the 'gone' she wrote O.e
and above the 'work' she wrote c: . A day's drawing lesson complete.
She got out of the house just before 20 to nine.


{ { 8;41 a.m. on her way to the Belle Carrie’s cafe.

A leer began to materialize on her well tanned face as she
strolled down
the side-walk That was congested with millions of pedestrians wanting to
see many wonders of the crammed
city of dreams, or crushed ones. She managed to slip through the crowds and
get to the cafe, just in time to catch a table. She requested a small apple, and
then she was lost in daydreams. Staring
out into the hectic and eventful streets of new-york, with a population of a
staggering and vast eight million, the statue of liberty, empire state, yellow taxis,
central park, Hudson river... and Farren’s life changing new job. She was tore away
from all of this as she received a text message
From Addie, her acquaintance and fellow model. She flicked her salient blonde hair
to the side
as she switched on her iPhone and clicked on the message.
K hun. Be there soon, just at cafe. I’ve seen some lovely shoes across the road.
Can’t resist the temptation.
Farr XxX
She got up and left a tip for the waiter, and waved a succinct goodbye to the
Man at the counter.
She managed to cross the road, but with a sheer amount effeft and spped.
After reaching the other side of the road, she entered the shop by pushing
through many people. In the end she did manage to get in, but just
by a margin. She found the pair of heels just by the counter and she was
first to get them, and first to buy them.
She got outside quickly to, and pushed past people so she could get to the
edge of the side-walk. She waved her hand and got a taxi almost instantly.
She was then drived to the studio.

10:21 a.m
{sorry for the crappy ending. muse died like agaes ago -.-}




{ clown . funny . stupid . footballer .
rebel . farren . }
{ . chocolate brownies are her favourite food . }
{ . the komodo dragon and the osprey is her favourite
{ animal . }
{ . her favourite rapper is nicki manaj . }
{ . she used to support manchester city . }

{ a small, muse-lacking reply of 1,241 words }



example two::

Upon the noise of the same dreaded morning clamour Farren awoke. Alarm clock. Again. 9:30 a.m. She slammed her hand on top of the device in a futile endeavour to halt the noise, out of lucid malice. She pulled herself from her drowsiness and slumber and she almost threw herself from bed, falling onto the floor. Farren held her stomach felling the sudden loss of air from within her lungs. "What a brilliant start to the day!" The girl cursed under her inhalation. Brilliant. Just Brilliant. She wiped her eyes and faltered into the bathroom, looking into the mirror considering her reflection. Ugh. The teenager turned on the tap and streaked her face bursting of water that tore her out of her dreamland. She brushed her teeth hurriedly and pulled on her favourite 'All-saints' white T-shirt and Black denim shorts. Her onyx black hair fell behind her back as she wiped away loose strands of a colour [the colour of raven’s wings] and but on her black leather jacket. Her look was inclusive with some 'Police' sunglasses.

An eccentric sound of the door-bell ringing ricocheted through the house causing Farren to jog down the stairs and retort to whoever was there. Strange. There was no-one there. She looked at both sides of the street, yet saw nothing or no-one close enough by to have been knocking. With a frown, Farren slammed the door to a shut, then peered out of the window to see if the someone had returned. Kids. Stupid Kids. She exhaled rowdily and shook her head as she sauntered into the open kitchen. Pulling out a cereal box of Corn Flakes and pouring them into a bowl, she helped herself to break-fast and a brief drink of fresh orange juice. In the reflection of the window she saw a figure move out-side of her house. Stupid. Farren sat down at the kitchen bar, keeping a close look out to see who was lurking around her yard. The casual, everyday note from her 'hard-working' parents had been left on the marble counter, saying the same old obsession.
'Gone to work, be back at 8;30. love you'

and always signed by Dad and Mom. Well thats a change. A blue note instead of a yellow. Wow. Picking up the note, she scribbled smiles with the black fountain pen that lay besides it. After the 'you' she wrote a xP, under the 8;30 she wrote xD, before the 'gone' she wrote O.e and above the 'work' she wrote c: . A day's illustration seminar, complete.

With a final mouthful of her break-fast and the last sip of her drink, she seized her White Paul Frank bag and paced through the living room and opened the door to the unsullied morning atmosphere. Seeing that her skate-board had been intentionally moved, she kicked it back into the space it had been previously then headed towards the confidential school where she would commence her week's education as junior, with the worst known enemy to man. The teacher. Now in Farren's case this teacher was... possessed with the word 'detention', but Farren did not care about Astrology, as she wanted to become a veterinary surgeon when she had passed university and the high school exams . He had already given detention to seven people in the most recent three days. Stuff these teachers. She wandered along the side-walk leisurely with some science and Astrology books in her bag. Stuff this school. As Farren turned to look back on her house, her gaze quickly shifted to a rapid moving white Audi A3 with blacked out windows seemingly racing all the other cars down the road.

There were four kids in there in total. You could just see petite grey silhouettes from the almost completely black tinted windows. Glad I can't see their ugly faces. She drifted further away from the crowds and the looming buildings of the town. Her head seem to swarm and throb with questions. Her pace began to quick, her walk slowly yet gradually get faster and faster as she tried to escape the many pedestrians. She thought not to cut through down dark alleyways, as a narrow escape would be almost impossible for anyone if there be a dead end and gets caught up with a gang. Farren turned her head over her right hand shoulder, seeing that the car had been almost crashed into another while she had been thinking. The driver was obviously on the phone, the device to his ear and speaking in something that looked like a hushed tone.

Stopping at a busy intersection, Farren smirked indistinctly while carrying on walking and checking left to right for any oncoming traffic. Farren thought a silly thought, yet it soon changed into; Who are they? Farren glanced at a strange Audi that had been speeding down the road. Probably a kid from the local public school down the road, or someone arbitrarily stalking another teenager. Her pace began to gradually quicken as she could almost hear the school bells ringing and her stuck in detention for the next week, until she broke into some sort of a fast walk. Quicker and Quicker she stepped, care-full not to fall. With one last look behind her to check for any oncoming traffic, she ran. She crossed the road then sprinted into a nearby field, always stepping carefully ahead so she does not fall. She ran quicker than she had even done before, the cross-country practice gave her a fair chance of getting to school on time. On the buffer point between the field and the forest was a small stream, possibly jump-able, but it would take some doing. She knew that she would be quicker in here with the winding paths and thin, towering pine trees, and of course that hole, the hole in the ground. A more complex yet quicker route to her private school.

With a run up, Farren leaped further than she had ever done before, yet almost slipped into the stream but managed to clamber up just at the last moment. She cut across another small stream, careful not to lose her balance as she hopped along the stepping stones. Her converse were relatively damp by the time she had skipped down the stream and over a fallen long in her path. It wasn't long before she was close to the school grounds and out of the forest. Flitting around some towering pine trees, Farren almost tripped from a crag escape from a nook in the ground. "Damn!" She shouted as she 'epically' bailed on the rock, he shoe flipping off. "Lol. I fail" She said, returning to her feet and collecting her shoe, putting it on her foot. "Lol" She whispered again, starting to jog her way to the school. A clearing emerged as she entered what were now the official school grounds. She casually walked around the big iron silver gates and into a pleasant looking and aroma-full garden at the entrance of school, a rather hopefully sign for the day. The weather at least managed to hold back it's rain for know, Farren hoped that the sun would not hide away and it to dampen her spirits.

She slipped into the school reception without being noticed, the lady at the counter clearly with her head tied to the computer screen and oblivious to what the world was doing around her. Quickly, speeding up her pace, she added more books to her collection in her bag. A teacher, a science teacher to be exact, grabbed her arm. He was a young age and a dirty blonde with dazzling blue eyes. Mr. Ebsworth. A guy who had been a few years older than her when at kindergarten. "Farren, I need to show you something" He said, leading her into another hallway eagerly. A smile was planted on his face. Farren smirked at his enthusiastic ways, grinning loudly. "Follow me in here" The scientist asked, his hand slipping down to Farren's hand. It was almost a world full of advanced technology and test-tubes filled her sight. "How much does this cost?" Farren asked looking at her old friend. "To be honest, I don't have a clue. It's cool though" He replied, turning on a computer screen. Farren sniggered at his lack of knowledge on his own work splice, but questioned why he had brought her here. The rather plain architecture puzzled her too, it was a private school however, these places were often loaded with money, these were top of the range facilities. All parents love their kids going to a 'special' school. Special alright.

Farren was startled as a machine was turned on with a rather loud thump, her frightened voice rapidly changed into a laugh. "You are an idiot, Beck, you know. You are!" She moaned at him. "Glad I am not anything else!" He replied casually still keying in some letters not the screen. "What is that?' Farren asked, now walking over to the screen. "It's how you get all the things up and running. The boss just told me to bring you into this place and wait for assistance. Me, of all people, needing assistance? I think he was almost completely drunk at the time." He replied softly. "Ouch. That's hard. What did you do? Mess up big time or something?" Farren questioned to her old friend. "No. He just said 'wait for assistance'. It's probably because this is an area that I am not an expert in, but I'm an expert of everything as you know." The scientist said with a rather disappointed tone added to his voice. "Yeah. The expert at everything. You the one who can do a grind on a scooter and crack your head open. Expert I would say" She replied sarcastically. "How did you know it was me?" Beck questioned back with an astonished tone to his voice. "Everyone did; it was all over the school newspaper!" She replied almost laughing her head off. "I never knew anyone read those things. At least I was popular back in the day." Farren laughed at that and was quick to reply to what his friend said. "Notorious, I would say" Beck shook his head with a grin planted on my face. "Know all" He replied.

''Farren, I asked Mr. Heverwaski about the results of the Pet Dogz competition, and he knows the results. Your essay based on the African Lion, beat everyone else’s. You, and a person of your choice, gets the tickets to the tour. Congrats. ‘’ He smiled. ‘’Get your stuff ready. We’re going to pet dogz. ‘’
{ an average reply. however, i can do more. 1,771 words }


example three::

The effeminate she-cat’s silhouette of a shadow flickered in the dim luminosity of the morning. The day was youthful, the sun only just beginning to rise from its slumber of the night. She was scarcely covered by the thick vegetation at the side of the path’s boundaries as she attempted to hide from any people coming into the forest for a bizarre reason. Her neck angled to where her head remained level with her shoulders as she sustained to pick out each and every scent that interested her or would possibly be an upcoming threat to the clan. Her paws brushed almost silently over the thick layer of foliage. A sudden scent in the air of a rodent sent a flash of curiosity to a flicker in her eye. Falling quickly into the dense covering of undergrowth, her breathing silenced as she let herself camouflage within the leaves. A small creature scuttled by her, unknown of what oblivion it’s step’s would take itself to, when the apprentice leapt onto her prey, yet it escaped before she could of killed it. Poignant with the loss of prey, she headed back in the direction of camp. She was not a normal apprentice; she had been one for under a moon, but a medicine cat in training, learning the ways of the herbs. Hastily, she ran back through the scattered jades of plants and flowers. It wasn’t long before she arrived at the camp, what was seemingly buzzing with life. It was too eventful and chaotic for Dawnpaw’s liking, she preferred more silent scenery and for herself to get lost in her thoughts and search for herbs and remember their cures. Remedies were energetically buzzing around her mind from the past few days of concentrated training and tutoring, after all, she was the trainee of the shaman. All her life, she aspired to become a medicine cat, like Tumbleweed himself. In of the hectic mayhem, she saw Tumbleweed calling for her, and she was quick to pad of and explain for her absence. She approached them tom with ease, knowing that he was a humorous cat, most liking to not mind her nonappearance for the last few minutes while she was just simply wandering the routes and paths of the forest. She came up to the tom with a warm smile across her face, hoping not to be punished for not being there. ‘’ Hello, mentor, I apologise for my sudden absence and is there a duty that I need to be called to at this moment? ‘’She mewed, her eyes fixed onto the tom’s, hoping not to get noticed by another other clan-mate. She was eager to get into her training of the day, hoping to get into it as rapidly as possible. She was rather the opposite to other apprentices at her age, she wanted to learn but others just wanted to be left alone. Dawnpaw found it selfish for them to think that, as if the days turn cold with fear, and a battle is foretold and about to take place on the very own ground that they walk on, the only thing you would want is to be victorious, most of all, be secure with knowledge of self-defence. But it was not her beliefs that counted in their choices, it was their own and that was what made them, themselves. Dawnpaw’s attention never ceased to give way to other toms and she-cats hurrying around the camp, her luminous aqua eyes were entirely focused on Tumbleweed, as she found it arrogant to not pay attention to the being you are talking to. Dawnpaw awaited patiently for her mentor’s reply.
{ 609 words. very small reply, but detailed. }


example four::
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. || > annabel . f a r r e n . hart < || .

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I'll stop the whole world
I'll stop the whole world
From turning into a monster, eating us alive
Don't you ever wonder how we survive?
Well, now that you're gone, the world is ours


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Ruthlessly, she roused from a light slumber, a knife engrossed firmly in her hand, with her AK47 loaded besides her. Something split the humid air from within the car, a thunderous bang, a sound hauntingly known as a grenade, a grenade was a weapon that killed her grandfather. Her lips were cracked, her skin pale, but yet her two dogs, Oblivion and Skype, lay besides her in the land rover, not recoiling at the deafening screech. After the strident clamour, all fell to a deathly silence, something that this young girl had dreaded but had occurred previous to a tragedy came. She peered out of the blacked out window, pushing away her fears for a instant, and observed the desolate streets of a place she had once loved, but now it just provoked agonizing reminiscences of the past and before the living dead took their home in this world. But the street was now empty; not engaged with thousands of people hurrying to shops and market stalls. It was silent now and she was unaccompanied by any human. Daringly, she looked through the back and front windows risking her cover, then selected both her AK47 and Barrett 50cal, and then aimed at anything that stirred amongst the ruin and rubble. Her knife was then returned to its position, seeing that all was composed, stationed in her right hand military boot. The street was the lucid remains of havoc and chaos; wreckage and debris of the cars and the state of shops, market places and malls, most burnt by fire or crumbling because of devastation, very few intact with walls and structure still holding strong were remaining standing. The scene, over all, was quite depressing, yet she attempted to kindle the hope that both of her parents were still living in this mass destruction. A resistance group was only several hundred yards away from her, and if stimulated, and effortless place to sprint to for shelter if a wave of disturbed dead-walkers came near with infecting distance, but maybe some people in that building were infected. She did want to regroup with someone, but at this moment she preferred to stay alone. For most of the zombie apocalypse, she had spent her time underground with her twenty – seven year old uncle, a navy SEAL officer equipped with the paramount artillery and weaponry supplies and ammo. He went ‘up top’ sporadically to collect supplies and ammo, and left her with ten packs of ammo, a tazer, four guns and a pack of grenades. She always hid the knife in her boot however. But her uncle was missing, and all she had left in the world was her two dogs and a pigeon that she had once tamed, but that had flown away a year ago, most likely dead. Annabel pulled a half eaten packet of crisps and a bitten sandwich, and ate them slowly then drank a small amount of water that she had had for several days. But then, in that split second, she thought about deciding on something reckless, something entirely stupid, a thought that she was going to go in that building and kill as many dead as possible, not matter how wild it was. She but her back on her back and tightened the straps, and took out both her AK47 and barrett 50cal, and checked is both were fully loaded. She pulled up her hood and zipped her jacket. All was prepared. She silently opened the car door and let both Oblivion and Skype out and they then waited for Annabel to come to. Then she ran. She ran as quick as her feet could carry her, dodging the rubble and running into the upper level parking garage, aiming carelessly at the zombies and shooting, in attempt to kill as many as possible with a headshot, a smile on her face. ‘’We were on earth first!’’ She screamed in a sudden rage of anger. Adrenaline ran through her veins like a bullet, as she recklessly shot as fast as the gun would. But no, she would wait out in this car for a while, until she saw someone, someone who was at least alive and not someone who wanted to eat her brains. Annabel decided to lay low for a while, and wait for someone to come, hopefully not a zombie.

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{ muse-lacking 724 worded post. deatailed. }
    Character: Annabel Farren Hart
    Where: In a land rover next to the parking garage
    Talking to: No-one
    Mood: Depressed, scared, ruthless
    Mentally: 89 %
    Physically: 97 %
    Word Count: 724 words. a little small but i was unsure what to write. sorry for the delay.
    Apperance:
    xoxoxoxox

    Annabel is like a girl in a picture, painted with the thin and small build and long flowing hair. The girl with the blue eyes guarded by long dark eyelashes, and thin eyebrows. Her eyes and beautifully complimented by her softly tanned skin tone, and her frame, gently touched with her light brown hair highlighted with streaks of blonde, that is normally set in a bun or ponytail with strands falling just above her pale flecked eyes. Her lips are as red as roses, with a youthful smile and cheeky grin forming in the corner. Her shoulders are normally loose, or tight with stress or worry. Her figure is slim, with an athletic look from the football and many other sports that she has participated in. She is normally dressed in black or her light blue t-shirt with the red and orange writing and flower. She has thin wrists and nimble fingers, from the many words that she has written. Her legs are a bit smaller than normal, however it fits with her torso almost perfectly, with small feet in any colour of converse. She stands of a height about 3"6 with a body with an innocent yet guilty look, with more delicate and feminine features with an opposite personality.


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{ anyone can find her in the car if you wish }


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|{ . ғ α я я ɛ и . }|



|{ . sixteen . crushless . eevee morph . in pain . in a field . }|







Paradise was the scenery around the girl. She lay motionless,
not ever a flicker in this slumber. The grains seemingly dance
in the fresh breeze that cooled the sun’s torrid emission,
and only blew the teen’s thick hair. All was serene and tranquil,
silent apart from the gentle wind ruffling the trees enclosing
the flowery clearing. Her sleep was not once disturbed. A purple
wild flower was blown by the wind and was caught under Farren’s
well tanned hand, but it was stained by a red and sticky substance.
Blood.
But suddenly, she awoke, but not pleasantly. A severe pain struck her
spine, almost disabling her legs completely. Her vision was blurred
and her head, dizzy, and her hands cut. Even one of her knees
were bruised. She rarely hand a bruised knee, as it was mainly
her head or her arms that where bruised, scarcely ever her knee.
A large groan escaped her sore throat as she struggled to find her
balance and thus get to her feet. She strained her eyes and waited
for them to adjust to the bright, beaming sunshine. Her knees
became weak as she stood up, but it just managed to sustain her
weight, with aid of a willow tree behind her. With the shade from
the willow, her eyes managed to finally adjust to the light, but she
was barely able to stand without support as all her energy was
drained. But Farren thought to herself and decided it must of been
a hangover, but why was she in a meadow she questioned herself.
When the bleeding from her hands had stopped, she used the back
of her hands to wipe her eyes, and her vision was now no-longer
blurred or strained. A sudden sensation of tiredness overcame her
thin body and sent a yawn out through her lips. It must of only been
early afternoon because of how light it was. But the thing that overcame
her mind was how she got here and where she actually was. The middle
of nowhere?
Rapidly, a thought raced through her mind. She could of been kidnapped
and taken away from her family. A panicked look was painted across her
face, and nothing could calm her, but how could that be possible, and if
it was, where was the kidnapper? More questions began to form in young
Farren’s uneasy and troubled mind. She tried to stable her position next
to the tree so that her back would no longer ache. But her knees gave way
and she sank to the bottom of the grass trunk. Then, another pain shot
through her left arm like a bullet. What was the matter with her? Was she
on some sort of drug? Many things began to confuse her in the heat of the
moment. Then the feeling of dizziness and a headache began to come on
in her head. She was back to the beginning again. But she was completely
helpless to the situation. That was the thing she hated the most about this,
as well as the fact that she was in the middle of nowhere that she has
suggested before. She became stressed in a matter of moments. Farren
became uneasy and lay down with her head on a small, grassy bank. While
she lay, Farr shielded her face from the sun with her arm, and then sighed
deeply, wishing for the pain to go away. But she knew, this was not going
to happen. The teen pinched herself weekly, hoping and wishing for this to
be a bad dream and she would wake up in the middle of a maths lesson
with the teacher bellowing a detention at her face.
Then she realised that she was wearing something completely different
from the time before the black out. She was wearing a grey and white
striped jumper saying ‘Love Pink’ in bold in the middle with a short grey
denim shorts to match the look. However, she was now wearing a white
top saying ‘Happiness’ with torn dark blue denim shorts. Everything just
became stranger by the second. What was happening? The day was getting
worse, but a sudden instinct inside her told her to get up. With a sudden
new life of energy, she did just that. She used the last reserves of her
strength to get up with the assist of the same tree from before, the willow.
The blinding light as she escaped the shade of the tree was painful and first,
but her eyes, once again, adjusted. As the blur faded away, just across the
clearing a small purple back pack lay resting next to a hollow log from a tree,
but the grain grew wild around that part of the clearing, and the ground uneven.
She sighed once more as she tried to take a step, and her knees almost gave way
once again, but a new fighting spirit was in her, and something gave her a drive
to push on and persevere. Cries of tenderness quietly escaped her lips as she
stammered painfully towards the bag, curious to know what was inside it. She
let out a loud cry, this time as she fell to the ground in agony. Her legs had given
in. But small hints of swagger came back from the time when she came to Mythar
for a holiday, and this gave her even more drive to push on. With this she used
] her upper-body strength to manoeuvre her way through the thick vegetation.
It took her a while, but in the end, only a few feet away from the bag, she
sprained her shoulder. She winced loudly in spite of the sharp pain in her arm,
and now it was almost impossible to get to the bag. A small task to walk a few
yards now became impossible to complete, as almost all odds were against her.
Farren was mortified. However, her fighting spirit did not once die in this time,
and she still had one hand to work with. She used this hand to lodge in holes in
the ground and pull herself along. Even though her legs were tender and sore,
she used her as extra help to her arm, but she rested her injured arm. She
was now in reaching distance of the bag.
With a curious spark inside her once dull eyes, she reached into the bag and
found water and granola bars, as well as a dark blue hoodie, compass and a
pink pokedex. She grabbed the hoodie and used it as a sling, but then,
ever so slightly, she heard a noise, a faint noise like someone was rummaging
through a bag, like she was doing, then followed by a loud and closer scream
of a girl. There was others like her in this situation, but where were they and
how she could find them, was something she didn’t know.
The words ‘’help me’’ escaped her throat faintly and then she lay there, drained
of energy.


{ 1,167 words. i liked writing this post. defiantly not my best but it was fun }



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