FirClan {Closed} and MoorClan {Open} {Discussion + Forms}

[detective who.]

Welcome to the discussion and form thread of FirClan and MoorClan!

This thread is meant for all OOC chat related to FirClan, including form submissions.

If you believe anything is missing from this post, please just say so, and I will get around to adding the missing information as soon as possible.


FirClan: Closed. MoorClan: Open.

Current season: Greenleaf.

Weather: Warm and foggy.

Moon phase: Quarter moon.

Upcoming events and updates: FirClan role play thread is complete; MoorClan thread is in progress.


Official members:

Administrator:
Detective Who
Moderator:
Dezembro
Role Players:
Sunatron
Piefan
*CatBug*
spotthecow
xXxOwlxXx
彡ＫＯＶＵ彡
Duskshine
.:sousuke:.


Application:


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[size=85][color=#404040]Description - [/color][color=#004000]brief and clear - darker coats more common in FirClan than MoorClan[/color]
[color=#404040]Name - [/color][color=#004000]name here[/color]
[color=#404040]Clan - [/color][color=#004000]MoorClan or FirClan[/color]
[color=#404040]Gender - [/color][color=#004000]tom or molly[/color]
[color=#404040]Rank - [/color][color=#004000]deputy, warrior, queen, apprentice, kit[/color]
[color=#404040]Age - [/color][color=#004000]in moons[/color]
[color=#404040]Personality - [/color][color=#004000]a few sentences[/color]
[color=#404040]Family - [/color][color=#004000]only if applicable[/color]
[color=#404040]Notable history - [/color][color=#004000]anything interesting[/color]
[color=#404040]Skills/Weaknesses - [/color][color=#004000]good at fighting, excellent at hunting, well-balanced, etc[/color]
[color=#404040]Important notes - [/color][color=#004000]remove if nothing[/color][/size][/list]

[detective who.]

Description - Mallowstar is completely white, which is unusual for his Clan. His eyes are amber.
Name - Mallowstar; formally known as Mallownose.
Gender - Tom
Rank - Leader
Age - 44 moons; nine lives remaining.
Personality - Mallowstar is a very curious cat. He's gotten wiser since he was an apprentice, and doesn't get in trouble due to his nose nearly as often. He's honed his skill of getting out of trouble, and combined with his peaceful nature, this helps keep the peace with MoorClan. Because he is a relatively new leader, he sometimes worries that his Clan thinks he isn't as good a leader as Diverstar was, so he tries to be involved in the lives of his Clanmates, and encourages them to come to him when they are struggling with anything. He also still enjoys hunting and patrolling with his Clan, and frequently adds himself to patrols at the last minute.
Family - Deceased
Notable history - Mallowstar, then Mallownose, was made deputy when the former deputy was killed in a battle over borders. Mallownose was chosen by the old leader, Diverstar, because of his ability to wiggle out of bad situations and his peaceful nature. Diverstar lost his remaining two lives unexpectedly; the first by a serious wound in battle, and the second through infection. It has only been six moons since Mallowstar became leader.
Skills/Weaknesses - Mallowstar has always been excellent at tracking. This has made him a great hunter, but also got him into trouble with patrols severl times as an apprentice. He is also not very skilled at fighting, and in battle relies mostly on getting under his opponent.

Wow, it's getting late. I'm going to check over everything tomorrow. Hopefully everything I put up today is completely coherent.

[Sunatron]

Edit: Fixed Badgerheart, I think.

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Description - Aspentail is a lithe dark mackerel tabby cat, her eyes are pale green. brief and clear - darker coats more common in FirClan than MoorClan
Name -Aspentail name here
Gender -She-cat tom or she-cat/molly
Rank - Medicine cat (If not warrior) deputy, warrior, queen, apprentice, kit
Age -24 moons in moons
Personality - Aspentail is rather childish cat, but she does her job well. She became a medicine cat rather early due to the untimely death of the old medicine cat, and struggles constantly to prove herself to her clanmates. She's also a bit high-strung, jumping out of her fur at the slightest noise. She is excellent at climbing trees to collect moss and cobwebs when supplies are running very low, but prefers to stay in camp, usually sending her apprentices to collect herbs. a few sentences
Family - Siblings- Ruby; Felicia (kittypets) only if applicable
Notable history - Her parents were loners, who were worried their kits may not make it through leafbare. Knowing twolegs cared well for kittypets, they took their daughters to their nests. Aspentail had been very sickly and they assumed she was as good as dead, until one of the Firclan warriors found her on a border patrol. anything interesting
Skills/Weaknesses - Aspentail is very good at climbing, as the name implies. However, she prefers to keep her paws dry. She is horrible at fighting and if the need arises she relies on surprise. good at fighting, excellent at hunting, well-balanced, etc
Important notes -My computer's a bit bad about images so I just had to link it. Sorry. May add more cats later if that's alright. remove if nothing

You asked for more cats, here you have them!

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Description - Badgerheart is a black and white cat, her eyes are blue. brief and clear - darker coats more common in FirClan than MoorClan
Name - Badgerheart name here
Gender - She-cat tom or she-cat/molly
Rank - Warrior deputy, warrior, queen, apprentice, kit
Age -14 moons in moons
Personality -Badgerheart's most powerful trait is inability to take no for an answer, especially when in conflicts with her views. She follows a very simple strategy when arguing with people, which she does often, reiterate her point and listen to no other views. It's gotten her into quite a few fights, but not enough to make her change her ideals. Her ideas are selfish, whatever's in her best interest is the right thing to do. However this doesn't means she's a cold cat, actually she cares for other cats as much as she can, without inconveniencing herself. a few sentences
Family - Starlingcloud (see below) only if applicable
Notable history - She's always lived in Firclan, she was a nice cat, giving her all for the clan. Then, in a battle against Moorclan, her mother was killed protecting her brother, then Starlingpaw. She changed then, her mother, the only one she'd ever really cared about, had been killed protecting her brother. She'd never liked him much anyway, seeing him as weak and lazy, now she hated him and vowed not to die like her mother anything interesting
Skills/Weaknesses -She is very self confident, to a fault, often believing she can do things she actually can't, like fight off cats twice her size. However, this makes her a fearless and ruthless fighter. good at fighting, excellent at hunting, well-balanced, etc

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Description - Starlingcloud is a large black cat with white paws and a white chest, he has green eyes. brief and clear - darker coats more common in FirClan than MoorClan
Name - Starlingcloud name here
Gender - Tom tom or she-cat/molly
Rank - Warrior deputy, warrior, queen, apprentice, kit
Age - 14 moons in moons
Personality - Starlingcloud is very aware about his clan's social life. He is very kind and patient, and enjoys spending time talking to all members of the clan, especially kits and elders. His relaxed nature makes him less likely to fight with other cats, unlike his sister who sees every other cat as a potential threat. However relaxed he may seem he cares deeply for all of his clan, especially his sister. a few sentences
Family - Badgerheart (see above) only if applicable
Notable history - When his mother died protecting him, it had a very different effect on him than his sister, he saw his mother as a role model, relaxed and carefree. He decided he would be like her, unworried yet caring for the weak in the clan. anything interesting
Skills/Weaknesses - His unworried nature makes him occasionally believe problems aren't as bad as others make them out to be. At the same time his calm and unruffled nature makes him a good diplomat. good at fighting, excellent at hunting, well-balanced, etc

[detective who.]

Hello, Sunatron! Aspentail is accepted as medicine cat, and I'd be happy to see more cats added later, if that's what you want to do. Thanks for joining~ *bustles off to update the main thread*

[Piefan]

Description - He has a thick, silver-blue coat with subtle, almost unnoticeable stripes on his tail, and a slender shape.
Name - Silvercloud
Gender - Tom
Rank - Warrior
Age - 20 moons
Personality - Silvercloud is modest - too much so at times, for he may doubt his abilities - and generally willing to help out with everything he can. He is rather tranquil, thinking it better to talk things out than fight. Still, being a warrior whose duty it is to fight for his clan, he will not hesitate to attack when threatened. He takes a little too much pleasure in this, as a matter of fact, his cautious attitude causing him to be merciless so as to make sure his opponent may never again endanger those he loves.
Family - -
Notable history - It can be said that Silvercloud has had an extremely boring life. He was born into the clan, and, content with his life, he stayed. A pleasant kit at birth, he grew into an equally pleasant warrior. His parents are both alive and well, living their days as elders.
Skills/Weaknesses - Silvercloud's build allows for agility and stealth, his greatest skills, but that same build minimises any brute strength he may have.

[detective who.]

Hello, Piefan! Everything looks good on your application, except for his name. His prefix is just fine, but the suffix -flare is non-traditional. I would recommend -tail, based on his highlighted agility. -cloud would also work, if you prefer, based on his personality, but strong skills usually outweigh personality traits.
I'm sorry if I've come off as rude - please let me know what you decide. Thank you for applying~

[CoolComrade]

Description -Black tabby with large yellow eyes and large ears.
Name - Battail
Gender - molly
Rank - warrior
Age - 20 moons
Personality - Battail is mostly lazy during the day, but will keep other cats up at night. She likes taking nighttime strolls. She does do what she's told, though, and pays attention during Clan meetings and patrols. If she isn't acting lazy, she enjoys making others laugh. She blends in easily with the shadows, and sometimes startles unsuspecting cats- usually on purpose. She harbors a crush on Silvercloud
Family - open
Notable history - Both of her parents were killed by a badger while she was an apprentice. She almost became a medicine cat, but realized that her true calling was as a warrior. She still helps Aspentail whenever she's needed.
Skills/Weaknesses - She's average in most aspects, but is skilled in climbing the fir trees in FirClan's territory. She mostly uses this skill to sneak up on cats and prey, and to run away from badgers, which she freezes in front of if she encounters.
Important notes - She has a fear of badgers, and doesn't like border patrols for that reason.

Description - A brown tabby with orange eyes.
Name - Mudpaw (Mudnose when he's a warrior)
Gender - tom
Rank - apprentice
Age - 8 moons
Personality - Mudpaw is a sociable young tom. He loves exploring new things, and wandered out of camp a few times as a kit. He is obedient, but can be a bit sarcastic at times.
Family - open
Notable history - Mudpaw was born into the clan, but his father died in the same battle as Badgerheart's and Starlingcloud's mother.
Skills/Weaknesses - An amazing tracker, he loves hunting patrols. However, he has a large appetite, and doesn't like waiting to share prey with the clan.

[detective who.]

Accepted, Captain! Thanks for joining~ I'll update the main thread later.

[Piefan]

Hello, Piefan! Everything looks good on your application, except for his name. His prefix is just fine, but the suffix -flare is non-traditional. I would recommend -tail, based on his highlighted agility. -cloud would also work, if you prefer, based on his personality, but strong skills usually outweigh personality traits.
I'm sorry if I've come off as rude - please let me know what you decide. Thank you for applying~

It's fine. ^^ Changed to Silvercloud through flipping a coin careful consideration.

[detective who.]

Ehehe, okay. Thank you~ You are officially accepted. I shall go update the thread.

EDIT; Thanks, Sunatron. Starlingcloud looks good, but Badgerheart is the wrong colour for a Badger- cat. She should be black and white, or black, white, and grey. Everything else looks great, though~