Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Greenleaf]

Hello again! :3 I'll probably be sending in a few more cats tonight, but I'll start out with this little guy.

Image/Description: Boop! He's another tux (I am obsessed with them ;A;) with bright golden eyes; I'll get around to editing the image so it fits this description. He's a normal-sized cat, not being overly brawny or extremely small, though he is a bit on the lithe side. He's also long-haired with soft, well-tended-to fur.

Name: Shadepaw, soon to be Shadeclaw. I've see a lot of 'evil' characters named Shadeclaw around, so I'd thought it would be amusing to create a really calm and level-headed character with this name.

Gender: Tom

Clan: Depends on the roleplay.

Rank: Apprentice, then warrior.

Personality/Skills: As I said before, this little guy is known for being calm, laid-back and friendly with everybody, and doesn't panic easily under stressful situations; he is also extremely patient and isn't easily unnerved when someone rages at him for whatever reason - this patience, however, can prove to be a trifle annoying when one is trying to get his attention on an important matter, as he won't seem to be in much of a hurry to act.
However, do not assume that this tom is lazy due to his more easygoing traits; he is vastly committed to his training in becoming a warrior, though no matter how hard he tries, he is only average in his hunting and tracking skills. His battle skills, however, is a different matter entirely; his mentor often proudly calls him a fighting prodigy. He can bring down opponents in a few effortless sweeps, and can anticipate and dodge their attacks easily thanks to his speed; many cats marvel at his graceful style of battling. He is also very intelligent and knows how to calculate very efficient battle plans.

Important Notes: He prefers ambushing to flat-out frontal attacks and is, quite frankly, better at ambushing as he has the patience required for it.

:3 thanks!

[Arcaii]

Hello again! :3 I'll probably be sending in a few more cats tonight, but I'll start out with this little guy.

Image/Description: Boop! He's another tux (I am obsessed with them ;A;) with bright golden eyes; I'll get around to editing the image so it fits this description. He's a normal-sized cat, not being overly brawny or extremely small, though he is a bit on the lithe side. He's also long-haired with soft, well-tended-to fur.

Name: Shadepaw, soon to be Shadeclaw. I've see a lot of 'evil' characters named Shadeclaw around, so I'd thought it would be amusing to create a really calm and level-headed character with this name.

Gender: Tom

Clan: Depends on the roleplay.

Rank: Apprentice, then warrior.

Personality/Skills: As I said before, this little guy is known for being calm, laid-back and friendly with everybody, and doesn't panic easily under stressful situations; he is also extremely patient and isn't easily unnerved when someone rages at him for whatever reason - this patience, however, can prove to be a trifle annoying when one is trying to get his attention on an important matter, as he won't seem to be in much of a hurry to act.
However, do not assume that this tom is lazy due to his more easygoing traits; he is vastly committed to his training in becoming a warrior, though no matter how hard he tries, he is only average in his hunting and tracking skills. His battle skills, however, is a different matter entirely; his mentor often proudly calls him a fighting prodigy. He can bring down opponents in a few effortless sweeps, and can anticipate and dodge their attacks easily thanks to his speed; many cats marvel at his graceful style of battling. He is also very intelligent and knows how to calculate very efficient battle plans.

Important Notes: He prefers ambushing to flat-out frontal attacks and is, quite frankly, better at ambushing as he has the patience required for it.

:3 thanks!

Sorry for the wait if there was one. There was a bit of an emergency. Also, I'm heading to bed in a bit, so if you do send more in, I may not get to them tonight! Just so you know.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: He could easily be called Shadecloud with that personality, but since we go for skills above personality over here, Shadeclaw is a perfect name. (Perhaps it's helped by my love of cats with super intimidating names being the friendliest cats around, cats with "cute" names being these big brawny folk, and general cats that defy expectations of a name, but who knows.)
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: Overall, this is a fantastic cat! I've always been of the opinion that cats of average build that are fantastic fighters generally tend to keep calm and a more level head than larger ones, since they need to be mindful of their disadvantages and be able to improvise regularly. Of course, that's not to say a big cat can't be brilliant, but they don't have to be worried about it as much as a regular or small sized cat would.
Anyways, I really do like this cat, and I appreciate you subverting the name expectations. Well done!

[Keriae]

Image/Description: Blue tabby bicolour with pale green eyes. This is the picture being used in roleplays. Perhaps like this.
Name: Aspenpaw/Aspencloud
Gender: Male
Clan: Whichever I join.
Rank: Medicine cat apprentice/ Medicine cat.
Personality/Skills: Gentle, patient, not easily perturbed, gets on with most cats, serious; he's a new character, but he's also going to be skilled at his profession, although not enough to warrant -leaf. He also cares for his mentor quite a lot.
Important Notes: New character xD

[.kestral]

I wonder if you will recognise this lady

Image/Description:
Black she cat with white front paws. Her fur often seems to show blue or red depending on how she is stood in the light. She has bright green eyes.
Name:
Swallowleaf
Gender:
She Cat
Clan:
Snowclan
Rank:
Medicine Cat
Personality/Skills:
Swallowleaf is a skilled medicine cat, no one can deny that. But she hates her position, many cats can see the envy in her eyes when watching training and warrior ceremonies. She has allowed her jealousy to change her becoming stern, stubborn and in some ways mean. She is an extremely skilled fighter, showing skills many cats envy. But she isn't able to utilise her skills in the way she would want to. Her leader (before Lynxstar) refused to name her Swallowclaw, as he thought it wasn't fitting for a skilled medicine cat to have a name that showed she could fight.
Important Notes:
Swallowleaf always wanted to be a warrior, the medicine cat died with no apprentice and there were only two cats of the right age at the time. Swallowleaf (paw) and her sister, Mousewhisker (paw). Starclan showed that one of the two needed to take the position. Swallowleaf was the better fighter, her sister the better hunter. She knew her sisters skills were more needed by the clan and so stepped forwards to become a medicine cat. She is good at it, extremely good, but she has always regretted her choice, and it seems she is doomed never to have an apprentice to take over from her. She doesn't realise her personality puts most kits off.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Blue tabby bicolour with pale green eyes. This is the picture being used in roleplays. Perhaps like this.
Name: Aspenpaw/Aspencloud
Gender: Male
Clan: Whichever I join.
Rank: Medicine cat apprentice/ Medicine cat.
Personality/Skills: Gentle, patient, not easily perturbed, gets on with most cats, serious; he's a new character, but he's also going to be skilled at his profession, although not enough to warrant -leaf. He also cares for his mentor quite a lot.
Important Notes: New character xD

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Aspencloud is a good name for him. It sounds nice as well, so that's a bonus (something about Aspen- makes for a good name).
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: He's got solid grounds for characterization - I can imagine a calm cat being rather serious, or at least not one to make a lot of jokes or stray from the task at hand.

[Arcaii]

I wonder if you will recognise this lady

Image/Description:
Black she cat with white front paws. Her fur often seems to show blue or red depending on how she is stood in the light. She has bright green eyes.
Name:
Swallowleaf
Gender:
She Cat
Clan:
Snowclan
Rank:
Medicine Cat
Personality/Skills:
Swallowleaf is a skilled medicine cat, no one can deny that. But she hates her position, many cats can see the envy in her eyes when watching training and warrior ceremonies. She has allowed her jealousy to change her becoming stern, stubborn and in some ways mean. She is an extremely skilled fighter, showing skills many cats envy. But she isn't able to utilise her skills in the way she would want to. Her leader (before Lynxstar) refused to name her Swallowclaw, as he thought it wasn't fitting for a skilled medicine cat to have a name that showed she could fight.
Important Notes:
Swallowleaf always wanted to be a warrior, the medicine cat died with no apprentice and there were only two cats of the right age at the time. Swallowleaf (paw) and her sister, Mousewhisker (paw). Starclan showed that one of the two needed to take the position. Swallowleaf was the better fighter, her sister the better hunter. She knew her sisters skills were more needed by the clan and so stepped forwards to become a medicine cat. She is good at it, extremely good, but she has always regretted her choice, and it seems she is doomed never to have an apprentice to take over from her. She doesn't realise her personality puts most kits off.

Sounds familiar, but I've been racking my brain for the past 5 minutes and can't think of who this is.

Name Rating: 7/10
Name Type: Misplaced Traditional
Name Reasoning: Swallow- refers to a black and white patched cat, and since the only parts of her that are white are her feet, the name doesn't really work out.
Her main skill that literally everyone knows about is fighting, and since it doesn't really matter how the leader feels about it, tradition states that the most noticeable skill is the one to be named for, no matter where she's at (a newer leader would probably rename her if she desired). Granted, certain suffixes do have excluding rules to them (-flower being only for she-cats, -leaf being only for medicine cats), but since she's incredible at fighting, she should be named for that instead.
Alternative Name: Dipperclaw/Sloeclaw

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: Oh, this is a delightful character. What a crappy position to be caught in, seriously! I do like this idea quite a lot, so good job to you, and deepest sympathies to this poor cat.

[Arcaii]

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[Arcaii]

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