✧ MarshClan | Forms and Discussion ✧

[Snowcenti]

@Someone from like 6 post's ago Yea, But actually im not sure about the continuation of most of the warriors. All of the warriors that are actually active have apprentice's right now except one (Quietheart I think??). Im probably going to remove all of the inactive cats on Wednesday or Thursday if i dont hear from they're RP'ers. The warrior's i have in the poll are mainly just the older, active cats :'>

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HHHH PARA YOU NINJA'D ME i feel like im one the Ban the Member Above You Thread with all these posts :'0

Im trying to decode the prophecy to make sure its at least understandable but i bet Para's gonna ninja me again

Two will grow to many to dry the marsh while the days are bright. (Wolf and Feather gaining allies)
While the wolf howls, the bird will soar and bring with her an army of those who do not sleep. (Literally the above again but its Feather kinda training cats in the DF)
The dark sky will come to dry the marsh; they bring with friendly faces and their kin. (The DF Cats's attacking Marshclan)

[Squirrelstar123]

@OnmiBrid - I was that someone from like a few posts ago. (X3) That makes sense and yeah she doesn't have an apprentice atm. That sounds good to get rid of the I active people because then it just gets confusing and junked up. What about the people who said they were gonna stay in the rp but they don't post?

[rocoboq]

Both ideas could work, thanks for pitching in!

Yeah you were pretty much right, Omni lol. I was imagining them as separate prophecies, but, with revision, they could work well together.

Revised prophecy idea (two-parter):

As Brambleleaf goes for a walk in the night, he goes to a clean area in the marsh for a drink. As he glances at his reflection, he sees a black feather fall into the center of the moon reflection.
It distorts everything, including the shillouettes of various cats.
One cats remains, looks up to the sky, then turns white and fades away. (This could be in a dream)

Two will grow to many, the bird soaring with the army of those who do not sleep.
The dark sky will come to dry the marsh, with them familiar faces.
One will fall, and only the light sky can save the clan.

And yeah, doing a bit of spring cleaning on the current cats would be convinient... that way it would be easier to balance genders and find out the numbers of each rank.

[Squirrelstar123]

That prophecy just got even more intense then the first time. I like it! ^-^ I think this is a good idea.

[rocoboq]

Thanks! I'm just not sure how to fit Wolfsong in better without actually saying "wolf."

[Snowcenti]

Yea, I'll go one a cat clearning spree in a few moments geez that sounded darker than intended
I totally agree with Squirrelstar, That prophecy got so much darker but the way you explained it, it sounded really cool.

[Squirrelstar123]

I agree because saying wolf kind of makes it obvious. Maybe think of something describing a wolf. Like when the mysterious creature sings their song? (wolves are described as mysterious creatures) I am not good at ideas but that's a place to start if you want to include him without directly saying wolf or something. I think it's already really amazing and makes me excited for it.

[rocoboq]

Okay, how's this?

Two will grow to many, the bird soaring with the army of those who do not sleep, and the dark canine singing of war.
The dark sky will come to dry the marsh, with them familiar faces.
One will fall, and only the light sky can save the clan.

I'm thinking since wolves are canines, this might work?

[Snowcenti]

That sounds good, But the line "One will fall, and only the light sky can save the clan." is confusing me






also I changed my username :'0

[Squirrelstar123]

Well prophecies are confusing sometimes. I think it sounds good as well!

XD Right when I was getting used to the other name