Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Warriors13lover]

Image/Description: She is a grey cat, almost like a dip dress, she is light grey/silvery in the front and darker towards the tail.
Name: Minnowclaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Riverclan
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: She is a very strong cat, she is larger then most of her siblings and an amazing fighter. She loves to defend her clan. She is NOT a very good hunter, and isn't a big fan of kits. She isn't actually very ambitious and is very worried about becoming leader. She is a fairly young deputy but was chosen for her smarts, she is very innovative and like to find new ways to do things.
Important Notes: She started out as the smallest in the litter

[quitting,,]

Thank you! I wasn't really looking for a prefix of Thyme or Bream- is there any prefix that could indicate to maybe to his attributes, or personality? Maybe even something that has to do with his tail or fur? c: (His fur was naturally born scruffy and ragged)

Quoting cause there is a new page ouo

[Arcaii]

Thank you! I wasn't really looking for a prefix of Thyme or Bream- is there any prefix that could indicate to maybe to his attributes, or personality? Maybe even something that has to do with his tail or fur? c: (His fur was naturally born scruffy and ragged)

He could be named Crookedtail, but it's a very small kink to name someone for. I would suggest making it more noticeable and from an accident as an apprentice if you want to use that name.

There are several other grey-tabby names that I could suggest, and I will advocate those over a name pertaining to his personality or fur texture. The reason for that is because if you were to line 5 cats up of varying colors, and ask a stranger who's Willowheart, they would be able to point them out easily because they're a light grey cat. If you were to line up 5 different cats and ask who Softstorm is, they wouldn't be able to tell you because they can't exactly go up to every cat and touch them to see who's soft and who isn't. And what if Softstorm is no longer soft like they were as a kitten? What if they're a big, muscular cat now?
A cat's coat color will remain consistent throughout their entire life, and that's a pretty secure bet compared to them possibly being bigger or skinner than they were as a kitten.
Plus, well, a suffix is where you describe a cat's skills or personality. It'd be a little redundant to have a Wildstorm, don't you think?

So! For other possible names: Ash-, Aspen-, Bleak-, Boulder-, Burdock-, Crane-, Fir-, Grey-, Juniper-, Roach-, Slug-, Smoke-, Squirrel-, Thistle-, and Willow-. I would suggest going with -stripe as a suffix if it weren't for his skills in battle.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: She is a grey cat, almost like a dip dress, she is light grey/silvery in the front and darker towards the tail.
Name: Minnowclaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Riverclan
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: She is a very strong cat, she is larger then most of her siblings and an amazing fighter. She loves to defend her clan. She is NOT a very good hunter, and isn't a big fan of kits. She isn't actually very ambitious and is very worried about becoming leader. She is a fairly young deputy but was chosen for her smarts, she is very innovative and like to find new ways to do things.
Important Notes: She started out as the smallest in the litter

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: It's a perfect fit, and the idea of a mother going "oh, look at my tiny grey kitten, like a little minnow, that's what I'll call her!" and then a year or two later having to look up to talk to her daughter is absurdly hilarious to me. Not sure if that's what she had in mind, but it's still funny.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: I really can't find anything wrong with her, other than her pelt color being a little shaky. Generally, cats will be lighter on the belly rather than the front. You could go for a blue shading color, like so, and the name would still work.

[Warriors13lover]

I guess I wouldn't mind her being dark grey on her back and light in the front. Lol i'm glad you like it x)

[Arcaii]

Let me know if you need any more assistance.

Also, as a note to everyone else: I have one more Clan to review, then I'm closing down the Clan and Territory review thread. For multiple reasons, one being that I hate reviewing Clans a lot more than I thought I did, and another being that it's very time consuming and unprofitable for me. (Whereas I thoroughly enjoy reviewing cats and it's a lot easier and quicker, and even if it does take a while I generally enjoy taking my time on it.)

[quitting,,]

Thank you! I wasn't really looking for a prefix of Thyme or Bream- is there any prefix that could indicate to maybe to his attributes, or personality? Maybe even something that has to do with his tail or fur? c: (His fur was naturally born scruffy and ragged)

He could be named Crookedtail, but it's a very small kink to name someone for. I would suggest making it more noticeable and from an accident as an apprentice if you want to use that name.

There are several other grey-tabby names that I could suggest, and I will advocate those over a name pertaining to his personality or fur texture. The reason for that is because if you were to line 5 cats up of varying colors, and ask a stranger who's Willowheart, they would be able to point them out easily because they're a light grey cat. If you were to line up 5 different cats and ask who Softstorm is, they wouldn't be able to tell you because they can't exactly go up to every cat and touch them to see who's soft and who isn't. And what if Softstorm is no longer soft like they were as a kitten? What if they're a big, muscular cat now?
A cat's coat color will remain consistent throughout their entire life, and that's a pretty secure bet compared to them possibly being bigger or skinner than they were as a kitten.
Plus, well, a suffix is where you describe a cat's skills or personality. It'd be a little redundant to have a Wildstorm, don't you think?

So! For other possible names: Ash-, Aspen-, Bleak-, Boulder-, Burdock-, Crane-, Fir-, Grey-, Juniper-, Roach-, Slug-, Smoke-, Squirrel-, Thistle-, and Willow-. I would suggest going with -stripe as a suffix if it weren't for his skills in battle.

Thank you! I very much like the name Crane- I may make him Craneclaw ^^

Though I do like the name Kinktail or Ruggedpelt- Would Kinktail work for him? If so, would it be a good name?

[Warriors13lover]

Image/Description: She is a very pretty light cream cat with darker stripes green/brown eyes
Name: Lilypetal
Gender: She cat
Clan: None just yet
Rank: Medicine cat
Personality/Skills: She is a very flirty cat, she knows she is pretty and like to use that to get toms to do things for her(Special kinds of prey, finding herbs ect.) She was glad when the previous medicine cat picked her because she never wanted to actually pick one of the guys or have kits. She is slightly impatient and doesn't like when the cats she is treating doesn't listen to her and she doesn't like waiting for things that take a lot of time(Regrowing herbs, big wounds ect.)
Important Notes: She is actually quite smart but doesn't like attention drawn to it.

[Arcaii]

Thank you! I very much like the name Crane- I may make him Craneclaw ^^

Though I do like the name Kinktail or Ruggedpelt- Would Kinktail work for him? If so, would it be a good name?

I would say it can work! I would suggest something like Bent-tail or Crookedtail over Kinktail, but it does work as a solid name. My suggestion of making the bend a lot more noticeable stands, of course.

[quitting,,]

Thank you! I very much like the name Crane- I may make him Craneclaw ^^

Though I do like the name Kinktail or Ruggedpelt- Would Kinktail work for him? If so, would it be a good name?

I would say it can work! I would suggest something like Bent-tail or Crookedtail over Kinktail, but it does work as a solid name. My suggestion of making the bend a lot more noticeable stands, of course.

Thank you! I will make the kink bigger, so it stands out more. Thanks for the help!