Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[tropicalbacon]

Image/Description: Link
Name: Ravenflame. The Raven- represents his pitch black coat, and his mother was also rather fond of the ravens in their Clan's forest. The Clan had no idea why she was so mystified by the birds. The -flame represents his fiery passion for nearly everything. He has the warmth of a campfire, when needed, and uplifts spirits in battle, but that warmth turns to biting burns to his enemies on the battlefield.
Gender: Male
Clan: Depends on the Roleplay
Rank: Sometimes Deputy, sometimes Warrior
Personality/Skills: RavenFlame is best at battling, and will usually push himself as hard as he can in battle. Though some cats from other cats fear his fleet-footedness in battle, they always know he is warm and cheery, usually apologizing for any harm he did in the last battle. He is rather modest about his skills, and doesn't like to brag. Many cats come and talk to him, because even though he isn't that old, he doesn't judge cats like others do and is simple minded, focused on solving the problem in front of him.
Important Notes: Nothing I could think of

[Greenleaf]

Hello again! I find myself frequenting this thread an awful lot nowadays; I've gone on this warrior-making tangent eue

If you could rate this one last cat for me, I'd be much obliged! <3

Description: Boop! This little guy is a tuxedo cat; he's predominantly black, of course, but his muzzle, a portion of his forehead, front paws and chest are white. This is the main reason I've come to you; I've been worried that too much of his fur is white for him to suit his name.

Name: Ravenpaw, soon to be Raventail.

Gender: Tomcat

Clan: Depends on the roleplay :3

Rank: Apprentice

Personality/Skills: He's an exceptional climber, and can scale the highest branches of trees or balance on the most precarious rock ledges. As for personality, he is observational, sharp-witted and calculating, believing that logic and judgement are more important than impracticality and mercy. He's also very ambitious, and aspires to be deputy one day.

Important Notes: He was originally born a loner into a struggling family, and after his parents and sister were attacked and killed by dogs, the Clan found the wounded kitten and took him in. Ravenpaw doesn't even know the original name his parents bestowed upon him. Because of his mysterious past, many cats still underestimate him or scoff at his dreams of leadership, while others remain wary of him; this has turned him colder than the usual cat.

He also has a surprising soft spot for kittens; because of his past and the way some cats still treat him sometimes, he wants to make sure that every kit he meets gets the love it deserves. <3 couldn't help myself x3

Excellent, let's take a look.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: He's the majority black (about 75-80% is the requirement for a solid color name), so the prefix works just fine, but if you're still unsure, I'll suggest some names that include white markings.
-tail fits him perfectly as well, so there's pretty much no issues!
Alternative Name: Rooktail/Dippertail. Both names allude to a black cat with white markings, which will work better than a black-and-white name, and -tail is left as is.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: I've seen the born loner bit a few times, which isn't anything new. But the rest of him -personality, skills, etc- is wonderful, so good job!

Thank you so much! <3 I'll probably be keeping his name as it is for the moment; I'm glad that a Raven- prefix fits him. :3

[beauty thief.]

Name: Nightwatcher
Description: Sleek, black tom with deep blue, almost purplish eyes. Has a white muzzle and white paws.
Important Notes: Is a insomniac- has trouble sleeping

[Warriors13lover]

Image/Description: A pretty white cat with a small red patch on her nose and green eyes. She has short fur except on her tail which is long and feathery.
Name: Rosefrost
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Flareclan
Rank: Warrior/Queen
Personality/Skills:She is a very quiet cat who is an amazing hunter. She loves kits and is a very loving cat. She hates fights but if pushed she can be vicious. She takes a long time to trust but when she does she will forever. Very smart and thoughtful.
Important Notes: None that i can think of (If you could rate this name and if you think of a better one let me know)

[Arcaii]

goodness gracious there are a lot of people here today

Alright, to work I go, haha!

[qiripan]

Image/Description: A small black she-cat with white spots on her tail and white paws. She has warm hazel eyes and a pale, pink nose.

Name: Dipperwhisker

Gender: She-cat

Clan: Depends on the roleplay

Rank: Warrior

Personality/Skills: Dipperwhisker is an extremely skilled hunter. She gets many praises from her Clanmates because of this, but always thinks of herself more highly than others. Dipperwhisker is snappy, sarcastic, selfish and hates kits.

Important Notes: None! Thank you so much in advance c:

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Dilute tortoiseshell with heterochromia eyes - the right is green and the left if blue. x
Name: Smokepaw/Smokewhisker
Gender: Female
Clan: Depends on roleplay.
Rank: Apprentice/warrior
Personality/Skills: Smokepaw is a witty, stubborn, mischievous little thing. She is full of pride and refuses to accept help, especially from her brother, who is constantly trying to defend her like she isn't capable of doing it herself. It completely grates her nerves and her Clan have grown used to her outbursts. But she's also pessimistic, expecting the worst whenever there's bad news, and she sometimes doesn't know when to stop her pranking. Putting rocks or thorns in warriors' nests, tricking the kits into eating rabbit droppings by telling them that they're berries, or sitting next to a rock that has a channel under it that makes her voice sound celestial. It's all great fun, but she's be told off for it more times than she can count.
Her main skill is her tracking: Smokepaw has an incredible nose and can follow scents further than most cats. This helps her with her hunting, and she's known to bring something back almost every single time.
Important Notes: I couldn't find the tortoiseshell section, so I settled for a grey-denoting name, as I figured she's mostly grey.

Edit: I forgot something xD

Quick note: This, I think, is my first hetero-chromatic eyed cat. I wasn't too sure if that naturally occurs in dilutes, even after looking around some, so I'll give allowance to it for now, and keep digging. That said, to the review.

Name Rating: 7/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Smoke- is a little hesitantly given, as I've always seen it as a grey-tortie name myself, but I notched it a little since it's denotation is a grey dappled tabby. It might could work, but I'll give you some dilute names as well, just in case.
While she is a good hunter, her tracking is what interests me. Cats that are good trackers tend to have great senses in general, not just with their nose. I'll talk about this more in the character section, but bottom line is that I think she should be named for her tracking, rather than her hunting.
Alternative Name: Lichen-nose/Pochardnose. Both prefixes are for dilute torties, and -nose references tracking.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: I'll be honest: I adore this character. She's something quite fresh to this review, and not just for her eyes - we haven't had a short-tempered prankster before. Her traits are all nicely tied together, and she sounds a lot like a few kids I've met: the types that will get themselves in trouble near constantly, and can't really offer an explanation why, just a certainty that it's the adults' fault. Granted, she doesn't seem like someone who's breaking into cars or getting into fights, but there's a semblance there that I like quite a bit. Non-sarcastic gold stars for you.
Now for tracking, and why I think you should focus on that a fair deal more than hunting.
Tracking is much more than hunting. It involves not just going after prey, but figuring out who was where, what they were doing, how long they were there, when they were there, etc, all based on a faint smell or grass laid a certain way. Good trackers can find lost kits or the dens of foxes, and they have hyper-sensitivity to the world around them. They may jump at small noises, or be aware that someone is coming long before their friends are, and they tend to be pretty good hunters as well. A good tracker is an excellent addition to the Clan - intelligent, quick on the draw, and extremely observant.
I think that, if you were to put some more emphasis on her tracking than her hunting, that would be a great trait for her to have. Difficult to fool thanks to her observant abilities, but marvelous at acting or lying herself, which helps a lot with her pranks. Her pride and dismissal of help could be partly because she knows that she's a better tracker than half the cats around her, and would notice danger in a flash. Skills are a reflection of ourselves, and vice versa.
I dunno. Just some things to think about.

[Arcaii]

Thank you so much! <3 I'll probably be keeping his name as it is for the moment; I'm glad that a Raven- prefix fits him. :3

If you have any other cats that have big markings like he does relegated to one specific area, then I think that's fine grounds for a solid color name. Let me know if you need any more help!

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Link
Name: Ravenflame. The Raven- represents his pitch black coat, and his mother was also rather fond of the ravens in their Clan's forest. The Clan had no idea why she was so mystified by the birds. The -flame represents his fiery passion for nearly everything. He has the warmth of a campfire, when needed, and uplifts spirits in battle, but that warmth turns to biting burns to his enemies on the battlefield.
Gender: Male
Clan: Depends on the Roleplay
Rank: Sometimes Deputy, sometimes Warrior
Personality/Skills: RavenFlame is best at battling, and will usually push himself as hard as he can in battle. Though some cats from other cats fear his fleet-footedness in battle, they always know he is warm and cheery, usually apologizing for any harm he did in the last battle. He is rather modest about his skills, and doesn't like to brag. Many cats come and talk to him, because even though he isn't that old, he doesn't judge cats like others do and is simple minded, focused on solving the problem in front of him.
Important Notes: Nothing I could think of

Name Rating: 7/10
Name Type: Creative
Name Reasoning: Raven- does fit him, though his mother's thoughts on naming are a little odd. However, she chose a good name, and so there we are.
-flame, I am not so agreeable with. There's a few reasons, the biggest one being the implications of the name. Like -frost, it alludes to a personality that cats may not like being named for (-frost being a distant, cold cat, and -flame being a fiery, aggressive one), but it's named for something destructive and unstoppable in its unpredictable path.
Well, let's say -flame was for something more positive, like his passionate nature (-heart), or his way of blazing in battle (-claw), or for him being such a fast runner one would expect sparks (-foot). See a pattern? Whatever -flame wants to say in a positive way is already said by something else, and thus it's not really needed. (Quick note: cats don't know what a campfire is, except a twoleg thing that they really don't want to deal with even in a small form.)
He could be a -heart or a -claw, but I'm leaning towards -claw mostly due to his passion extending to everything, not just one specific way of thinking. He is open-minded, after all.
Alternative Name: Ravenclaw, for the reasons above.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Overall, a good-hearted cat who's good in battle is a pretty good cat, but there is something I want to discuss. The little disconnect between his traits.
He's a hugely passionate cat, but somewhat meek, well-mannered, and simple in thought and focus. A well-mannered person can be passionate, but being meek and simple are usually not interconnected with that. I think that you could easily just say that he's easy-going and treats everyone like a close friend, rather than passionate (as passionate people tend to be loud, extroverted, and overly energetic), and that would be a quick fix to the problem. That's all I have to say on that, really.

[Arcaii]

Name: Nightwatcher
Description: Sleek, black tom with deep blue, almost purplish eyes. Has a white muzzle and white paws.
Important Notes: Is a insomniac- has trouble sleeping

Rate: 8/10
Type: Lyrical
Reasoning: Night- fits him just fine, but just because he's an insomniac doesn't mean he should get a name for it. It doesn't really say anything positive, just that he can't sleep, and what good does that do for him? He could be a night sentry, sure, but there isn't a suffix for that. As I'm not sure to what skills he has, I'll be going with the defaults - go ahead and let me know if there's anything he's got a particular talent in.
Alternative Name: Nightpelt/Nightfur. -pelt, I suggest more, since it connotes a short-haired cat.
Additional Notes: Purplish eyes don't really happen on cats, except albinos, and even then it's a faint pink-and-blue that would be hard to notice. Blue eyes also don't happen on black cats, so I would say deep green eyes or light yellow eyes depending on the effect you want- faint green eyes look very pretty, actually, so you could go for that.