⇉ {heavy is the cost} • {discussion and forms} ⇉

[! october]

@Jinxed; You really need more development in your forms. If you go back a page, you can see what accepted forms look like. As for genders; perhaps you should consider keeping Dogtail rather than making new females.

[WildlingQueen]

Featherwhisker

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Personality
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Since she was born, Featherwhisker has had
the courage of a badger. She would fight
things head on and try to solve her problems
with logical solutions rather than using her
claws and teeth. Many consider her a pacifist,
as she does all she can to avoid fighting, but
will defend her kit, herself and her clan. She
has a natural maternal instinct, which is shown
in her care of Stripekit, and that instinct has
been their since she was apprenticed. She
is intelligent, but can be a bit naïve from time
to time. Her loyalty knows no bounds, and she
will fight to defend her clans honor, even if
that means dying in the process.

The Basics
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Name: Featherkit; Featherpaw; Featherwhisker
Gender: Molly
Age: 36 Moons
Voice: Willow Rosenberg
Rank: Queen/Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Family: Whitewing (mother); Darkear (father)
Relationships: Littleclaw (mate)
Kits: Stripekit
Apprentice: None
Eye Color: Pale gold
Fur Color: Silver w/ black tabby
Loyalties: Scorchstar
Enemies: None currently,
assumed Hawkcry
Other: None.

History
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Featherkit was the strongest of her litter when she was born, and she continued to grow the strongest. At three moons old, travesty his her small little family when her two siblings passed away from greencough. Featherkit was lost without her siblings, being the only one left in the nursery was lonely for her but her mother Darkear spent as much time as she possibly could playing with her kit and teaching her all that she needed to know. When she was finally apprenticed, she vowed to be the best she could to make up for her siblings. She wanted to train as hard as three 'paws combined so that she could make her siblings proud. During her apprenticeship she lost her father in a border skirmish. Her mother fell into a deep depression and no matter what she tried to do she couldn't help fix it. Her mother passed away a moon later from starvation after she had constantly refused to eat. Featherpaw was suddenly left without any family. After her warriors ceremony, Featherwhisker decided she wanted to be a queen. She fell in love with Littleclaw, a beautiful tan and brown tom with incredibly blue eyes. Moons later she discovered she was having kits. she took every precaution she could in order to be the best mother she could. Little did she know that her mate would be killed by a passing rogue. She has since vowed to keep her kits safe from the dangers outside the territory.
(WILL BE CHANGING A BIT)

[deftonesly]

Your cats are not accepted, Jinxed.
Go back and look at the other forms for example. Once you add more on your cats' histories and personalities and basically everything, then your cats will be accepted. Until then, I'll be turning you down, for you did not read DesertClan's new and improvised rules.

Your cats are not accepted and they will not be until their forms are more detailed. Is this not clear to you?

@Rukia,
A kit's form doesn't have to be very detailed, but be sure to go in depth as to what their personality and traits will be as an adult.. You need to have a tiny history, but nothing more than three sentences at most.. (except if they are a rogue/loner kit).

Featherwhisker is accepted!

[WildlingQueen]

Wonderful

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BIG W.I.P.


name ;; cherrytail [name is inaccurate due to her not being from the desert]
age ;; 28 moons
gender ;; molly
rank ;; queen
appearance ;; a large, lean molly with a shiny striped tabby coat and wide jade eyes.

personality ;; Cherrytail is annoying, persistent, persuasive, loyal, fiercely protective and sarcastic. This girl doesn't take no for an answer - she will get what she wants, no matter the cost. Most of the time her persistence wins over, but if the time calls for it, she can be rather persuasive, although it seems she thoroughly enjoys torturing her selected target before even allowing them to answer. That is owed to her sarcasm - it seems she doesn't have a sentence without it, and she knows some rather innovative insults. But, most of the time, she over-sweets her enemy, wrapping each insult in what appears to be a compliment. She is also rather flamboyant and not afraid to but in or stick up for what she believes in, fighting to the stubborn, bitter end over the most trivial things. Due to this, many cats cannot stand her. But, if one can win over her respect, Cherrytail is rather loyal and fierce. She cares for those that care for her, and she doesn't mind throwing herself in front a coyote to save your tail - there's no one else you'd rather have in a bind. That is, if you know she cares.
history ;; tba [I'm sooo lazy]

strengths ;; Cherrytail is a phenomenal hunter - by far one of the best in the clan. Her body is a perfect balance between strong and fast, allowing her to run down hares but also face hawks. Like her name suggests, she also has excellent balance, allowing her to be an adept climber and swimmer.
weaknesses ;; Cherrytail hates fighting. She hates getting dirty, and because of that, her skills are a bit rusty. She's decent, but not the best. She also hates being ignored, and can be a bit stubborn at times.

love life ;; mate deceased, no crush, expecting four kits [one male reserved for myself, one male for oliversarus, one female for dino1, one female for flowers 'n skulls]
family ;; unknown/deceased
other ;; xxxxxxx

[yeeee.]

BIG W.I.P.



name ;; mistcloud
age ;; 37 moons
gender ;; tom
rank ;; warrior
sexuality ;; tba

appearance ;; A large, lithe tom with a very thick, very curly grey-brown coat. Bright jade eyes, long whiskers. Walks with a slight limp.

personality ;; True to his name, Mistcloud is a rather peculiar tom. Most of the time, he is like his suffix Cloud - he is intelligent, dignified, calm, fair and kind. He enjoys mingling with other cats, but definitely enjoys his space. Regardless, he is very calm and rarely has outbursts. Mistcloud prefers to settle situations with words than to claws, and is quite good with manipulating his words to disarm a situation - but never goes beyond that. Kind, even it rogues, to some it seems he has no loyalty sometimes. But, that becomes obviously wrong when he reverts to his prefix, Mist. When himself or his clan is threatened, he comes out with the claws, and is a rather adept fighter - one of the best in the clan. Although it takes a lot for him to get angry, when he does, his words can become stinging, his actions even his loyalty, although seemingly questionable sometimes, is his best trait - when under pressure, it shows.
history ;; tba

strengths ;; Mistcloud is very intelligent and controlled. He can disarm almost any situation and is kind to other cats, regardless of their rank. He is also an adept fighter - in spite of his limp, he is very strong with a fair amount of speed to back it up, and has experience that far exceeds his moons. He is also a very good fisher.

weaknesses ;; Mistcloud is sometimes too friendly with rogues and other cats of the sort. He isn't the best hunter, due to his limp betraying his position, and not having the best stamina. Also, when angered, it is very hard to disarm him - he tends to get worked up and explode completely before even showing hints of settling down.

family ;; unknown/tba
love life ;; no mate, no crush, no kits. looking.

[yeeee.]

Name ;; Spottedpaw [fire] {thank you slapstick}
Age ;; 15 Moons
Gender ;; Molly
Rank ;; Apprentice

Appearance ;; An extremely tall, leggy molly, weighing 8.7 pounds and standing 9.4 inches at the shoulder.

Personality ;; Energetic, passionate, fiery, loyal and a tad bit mischievous Spottedpaw is a very fiery molly with a very passionate disposition. She's always striving to be better yet is a bit too passionate sometimes, snapping at those that help her and being a tad stubborn. If angered, she usually handles her anger by going out- forbidden- and doing whatever she pleases. She is very fiery, and has a fiery tongue to back it up- was she lacks in wittiness she makes up for in volume. Those she respects comes before all, although that could be a bad thing at times....

History ;; TBA

Strengths ;; Good fighter, decent hunter, fast, intelligent.
Weaknesses ;; Bad fisher, stubborn, vengeful, not very strong.

Love Life ;; She has a huge crush on Tinypaw, no mate, no kits.
Relatives ;; TBA

Other ;; xxx

[yeeee.]

w.i.p.

Name ;; Snow
Age ;; 59 Moons
Gender ;; Tom
Rank ;; Rogue


Appearance ;; Snow as an extremely small, petite tom, looking more like an apprentice than a near elder. This older tom weighs a mere 6 pounds and standing 8.3 inches at the shoulder. In spite of being runt size, he appears very healthy, with no ribs nor particularly hideous scars. Snow, like his name hences, sports a pure white fur that is extremely silky and smooth to the touch. Snow sports almond shaped pure baby blue eyes that add onto his flawless looks and aura of innocence. He appears to have no scars, however, on his underbelly are a bunch of hideous, deformed pink lumps that appear to be bite marks from a large animal. Snow smells of fresh brush and honey, and his voice is deceptively soft.

Personality ;; Very intelligent, manipulative, ambitious, fierce, moody, loving and loyal, Snow has the body of a cat and the mind of a badger. Or, that's what some say. Snow is known for his very witty tongue and disturbing plans. He knows your weakness. There is no escaping his wrath. But this wrath stems from his ambitions. He doesn't just want to do better. He wants everyone around him and himself to do better. And they are going to do better, whether they like it or not... because they are his family. That strange fuel will establish Snow to be a menace to this clan. With his fierce disposition, sly tongue, quick mind and and horrifying moodswings, this tom is quite the survivor, and quite the monster. But truth be told, he is quite fatherly; put it this way... he just pushes his young'uns out of the nest rather than sheltering them... but he will catch you before you break your neck. Oh yeah, there is another thing. He won't surrender. Ever. Failing is worse than death. He has Alexithymia



History ;; Fire was born a preemie; two weeks early. Born December 25th, the middle of winter. All of his siblings were premature also; they died shortly after birth. His dad was a stray and had been killed by a car, and his mom as a callous cat the believed that having a preemie was a curse. She refused to raise him. The two of them lived out in a wild alleyway; no hope of human compassion. His mother left without allowing him to nurse; as he was slowly dying, freezing to death, Starclan smiled upon him. A kind old, lone male rogue came across him. Realizing the scenario the nearly frozen and dead kit was in, the rogue took him to a mother cat named Eliza, whom was travelling to the woods to become a warrior. She had recently lost her kits to a dog and was still carrying milk. Eliza saved his life by nursing him and went on to raise him, naming him Fire due to surviving against nearly impossible odds. When he was old enough, the two of them headed towards a clan known as Whisperclan; renowned for their cunning, and disguises. The journey was long and hard, lasting about 30 moons; yet they never quit. Unfortunately, Eliza died two days before they arrived due to a horrifying dog attack. Fire had been out hunting, and had been attacked. Eliza had thrown herself upon the dogs to save him, and he was forced to run. Fire had to make the last leg of the journey with no one. Upon arriving, he struggled in spite of his fire to survive. He was physically weaker than an apprentice due to being a preemie. His family was either dead or had left him, he'd lost the only creature he knew and loved; and was therefore antisocial and cruel to everyone else. Silentclan lived in woods blacker than night; his pelt was pure white. Due to all of this, they banished him and named him Snow; an insult among their culture. Snowfire was 31 moons old at that time; as he wandered, he'd decided change was to come.
Snowfire found a pocket of civilization, and wandered the streets as a rogue. After a few moons, he was taken to a shelter, where a kind couple then adopted him and named him Snowy due to the fact that his pelt was white, and that it had been snowing when they found him. All was well until Snowy was 35 moons old; the couple adopted a child. A child that didn't now how to treat animals. After two days at the new house, the young twoleg grabbed Snowy's tail and lifted him up; in return, the once warrior/rogue bit the young creature on the arm. The couple believed Snowy had viciously attacked the young twoleg, whom needed 5 stitches in the arm; seized by anger and hatred that the creature they had cared for would do such a thing, they dropped 'Snowy' off in the desert.

Snowy was physically weaker than most, but he was determined to survive and make Eliza's sacrifice worth it. He learned how to use his head and survive in the desert, alone, for 20 moons. It was when he was 55 1/2 moons old he then remembered his mother's final words. To join a clan, start a legacy and be remembered. When he was young, Snow dreamed of being deputy. It's time to shoot for the stars now. So, he here he is. Now Snow- he has to earn his Fire again- traveling south, ready to join Desertclan.

strengths ;; Exemplary fighter. Strangely enough, his ailment works in his favor- he is very offensive, and has adapted to using a strange technique that usually takes his opponents by surprise. He is also very fast and agile. This cat is also very strategic and tactical; if he finds your weakness, physical or mental, he will exploit it in his favor. He is also a very good fisher, using his speed and paw-eye [xD] coordination to snatch fish easily. He is also very witty, loyal and fearless.

weaknesses ;; He's a decent hunter, but it's not his best suit; strength is lacking in this tom, so large quarry is a bit of a challenge for him. He also hates heights, and would rather run across a thunderpath than climb a tree. He's also very stubborn and can be terrifying if angered- he is very good a pointing out the flaws in others, and can be a monster to work with. You had better establish yourself, or you will look worse than an apprentice. Also, he is a premature, meaning his skin is much softer than average. fun to cuddle

love life;; No mate, no crush, no kits.
Relatives ;; Eliza [adopted mother, dead], Unknown mother [dead], Unknown father [dead], Siblings [dead at birth]
Other ;; He wants to become deputy.

[yeeee.]

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