Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[noisecollective]

Thank you! I have a few more coming up soon. I like to improve my cat using your suggestions

[Arcaii]

I'm always happy to help with characters! Let me know if you need any more assistance.

[noisecollective]

Image/Description:
Name: Grayfur
Gender: Male
Clan: Unknown for the moment
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Grayfur was born gray and gained his stripes later. He was always insignificant in his Clan and felt useless. He wasn't fast or strong, though he was very clever. This may partially be because he was born blind. He could not become a medicine cat because she already had an apprentice. He felt like Starclan was ignoring him and lost belief. He helps his Clan how he can, no matter how that may be.
Important Notes: No belief in Starclan.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:
Name: Grayfur
Gender: Male
Clan: Unknown for the moment
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Grayfur was born gray and gained his stripes later. He was always insignificant in his Clan and felt useless. He wasn't fast or strong, though he was very clever. This may partially be because he was born blind. He could not become a medicine cat because she already had an apprentice. He felt like Starclan was ignoring him and lost belief. He helps his Clan how he can, no matter how that may be.
Important Notes: No belief in Starclan.

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: He's a bit more grey-brown rather than straight grey (and all tabby kittens are born with their stripes, but it would still be an acceptable name for him), but otherwise the name's just fine.
Alternative Name: Mothfur/Pinefur. Both indicate a grey-brown cat, and -fur can be interchanged with -pelt or even -stripe if you wanted!
I almost suggested Fir- then proceeded to laugh about Firfur.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: Feeling self-conscious and losing faith in your gods is just fine, but even blind cats aren't insignificant in a Clan. The Clan finds a way to bring out the best in every cat. Maybe his cleverness extends to communication between Clans and rival groups, maybe he's very observant with sound and touch alone. He could be known for detecting changes in temper and emotion in seconds, and thus be very good at talking with others and dissipating tense airs. He's a smart cat - that gift should go somewhere, otherwise it means nothing.

[Arcaii]

Bropa broop

[ravennn]

Name: Ashfoot
Gender: Tom
Clan: Depends on the rp.
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Ashfoot is a very swift and fast tom who is very good at climbing. He has strong back legs and broad shoulder muscles.
Important Notes: None

[Arcaii]

Name: Ashfoot
Gender: Tom
Clan: Depends on the rp.
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Ashfoot is a very swift and fast tom who is very good at climbing. He has strong back legs and broad shoulder muscles.
Important Notes: None

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: The only problem with this cat is that he's plain grey, instead of a grey tabby. Other than that, his suffix is fine, though it depends on whether he's at equal levels of skill in terms of climbing and running or if he's better at one or the other (-tail and -foot in their respective cases).
Alternative Name: Nettlefoot/Pinefoot. The prefixes are for plain grey cats, instead of tabbies!

Character Rating: ?/10
Character Reasoning: I won't give him a rating, mostly because I only have his name and skillset to work with. So my suggestion is to grab up a personality for him, and you're free to send him in once more or just tell me his personality and I can give you an unofficial rating.

[Arcaii]

Brapity broop bop

[Arcaii]

Friendly reminder that the RP is up an active, and it's still open!

[Arcaii]

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