Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

Here is one, not sure what your going to think. She's an odd one.

Image/Description:
Golden spotted tabby she cat. Has white front and back paws and a small patch of white on her chest. She is tall, with a lean build and long legs. She has yellow eyes.
Name:
Leopardstar - Leopardfoot
Gender:
She cat
Clan:
Stoneclan
Rank:
Leader
Personality/Skills:
She is a very swift she cat, her tall, lean build allows her to race, low to the ground. She is a good hunter and fighter, but her speed is what makes her stand out. She can appear quite intimidating and mean, she is also rather cold, but her clan knows every decision she makes is something she feels is best for them. They would follow her into everything. She has a way with words that makes everything she says seem like truth, seem honest. Cats follow her as she gives them hope and they would do anything to gain the territory.
Important Notes:
She has been driven to desperation by The dark forest, she believes they are Starclan and they will lead her clan to greatness, but they are leading her into more and more darkness, blocking Starclan from talking to her and pushing her further into evil. She kidnaps a young she cat (Rainpaw) hoping the she cat will become her tool, her heir and the saviour of her clan due to a false prophecy. There are two clans, and the best part of the territory is the city which they fight for.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Both names are perfect for her. She's a golden, dappled tabby, and she's very fast on her feet, so it works wonderfully, plus it sounds pretty cool. Well done to you!
Alternative Name: None.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: You are correct, this is an unusual cat. However, I kept from judging the story itself (a bad habit of mine), and overall I think she's fine! My only issue is that she doesn't seem like someone who could be manipulated or fooled easily. Of course, in desperate times she'd do anything for her Clan, so there is that.

[Pokechu12]

Ok, thanks! I'll probably post review for the three here soon~

[Arcaii]

Please do, I'd love to help if I can!

[Pokechu12]

description;; A handsome white and grey tom with orange eyes.
name;; Heronpaw [Heronclaw/heart]
gender;; Tom
clan;; Thunderclan or Shadowclan, most likely.
rank;; Apprentice
skills;; Fighting and being sarcastic. x3
personality;; A arrogant and rash cat that thinks lowly of others. He is quite a player, and is often sneaking around and trying to achieve power. While he doesn't really have anyone to stand by him into becoming leader or anything, he believes in himself and wants for the better of the forest. Heronpaw believes strongly in his own opinions and is hard-headed.
other;; He has two sister, Lichenpaw and Knotpaw. They're both wip right now.

[Arcaii]

description;; A handsome white and grey tom with orange eyes.
name;; Heronpaw [Heronclaw/heart]
gender;; Tom
clan;; Thunderclan or Shadowclan, most likely.
rank;; Apprentice
skills;; Fighting and being sarcastic. x3
personality;; A arrogant and rash cat that thinks lowly of others. He is quite a player, and is often sneaking around and trying to achieve power. While he doesn't really have anyone to stand by him into becoming leader or anything, he believes in himself and wants for the better of the forest. Heronpaw believes strongly in his own opinions and is hard-headed.
other;; He has two sister, Lichenpaw and Knotpaw. They're both wip right now.

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Heron- fits him perfectly, but I'm not so sure he'd be a -heart cat. He is a skilled fighter (I assume he's very skilled for you to have mentioned it), and skill goes above personality, at least in my book.
Alternative Name: Heronclaw. If he's only pretty good at fighting, or slightly above average, then -heart would be fine.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: He's just fine! He sounds like someone who would be a good -heart, though his morals may or may not be a little skewed. (Friendly reminder to all that not all good cats are -hearts. Some may believe that their Clan must become the strongest, and to do so they would be willing to kill off the weak kits and elders that were "holding them back".)

[.kestral]

This is Leopardstars opponent

Image/Description:
Bright ginger tom cat, has a large scar on his front left shoulder but it's surface wound, not muscle so doesn't affect his movement. He has dark eyes, they seem to be yellow-amber.
Name:
Blazestar
* I want something fire related. That isn't fire. His warrior name was Blazeheart
Gender:
Tom
Clan:
Rockclan
Rank:
Leader
Personality/Skills:
Cool, calm and kind. As a warrior he was always there for the younger cats, as a leader his clan knows they can always come to him, can always ask, or talk about what needed. The leader will never refuse to help, never push them away. As a warrior he was a decent, skilled warrior, but didn't excellent at anything. His courage and kindness were what he was named for.
Important Notes:
None?

[Pokechu12]

description;; A white and grey she-cat with light dapples and green eyes.
name;; Lichenpaw [Lichenleaf]
gender;; She-cat
clan;; Thunderclan, most likely.
rank;; Medicine Cat Apprentice
skills;; Applying herbs, collecting them exc.
personality;; Lichenpaw is considered lazy and laid back, and often sleeps in. She is sweet and kind, and has a great memory. Her claws aren't that sharp and her fang are blunt, which she uses to tug roots of herbs rather than clawing the enemies ears off. When pushed to her limit, she can work hard, but when bothered for no good reason will often ignore you.
other;; She's often compared to her hard working brother or her smart sister, even if she showed promise from a young age.

[Arcaii]

This is Leopardstars opponent

Image/Description:
Bright ginger tom cat, has a large scar on his front left shoulder but it's surface wound, not muscle so doesn't affect his movement. He has dark eyes, they seem to be yellow-amber.
Name:
Blazestar
* I want something fire related. That isn't fire. His warrior name was Blazeheart
Gender:
Tom
Clan:
Rockclan
Rank:
Leader
Personality/Skills:
Cool, calm and kind. As a warrior he was always there for the younger cats, as a leader his clan knows they can always come to him, can always ask, or talk about what needed. The leader will never refuse to help, never push them away. As a warrior he was a decent, skilled warrior, but didn't excellent at anything. His courage and kindness were what he was named for.
Important Notes:
None?

Name Rating: 7/10
Name Type: Semi-traitional
Name Reasoning: I can see where he might fit the -heart suffix, but he doesn't really have an extremely strong belief system that permeates his every action. He's a very calm and reliable cat, though, so I'd say -cloud, if anything.
As for his prefix, I can't really give you anything fire related other than Fire-, because Fire- is the only traditional one. I did take a look around to see if we could get the same effect somewhere else, but it's not looking bright (ha).
If you're worried about him having a name similar to a canon cat, don't. There are hundreds of names that could fit any fan-cat, so it really doesn't matter. If people try to give you flack on it, remind them that there are a lot of people that share the same name as Queen Elizabeth the First or Martin Luther King Jr., and they're not "stealing the name". That's because it's just a name, and anyone can use it (I have a few headcanons/theories about name usage in conjunction with famous/mythical cats myself, but that's a story for another time - one I am happy to divulge in if asked).
Alternative Name: Firecloud/Burnetcloud. Burnets are a particular herb, but it looks similar to Burn, so there you go. As a leader, he of course gets the -star suffix.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: This character is a fantastic candidate for a leadership role. He's got a good personality, and I can't see any glaring issues whatsoever.

[Arcaii]

description;; A white and grey she-cat with light dapples and green eyes.
name;; Lichenpaw [Lichenleaf]
gender;; She-cat
clan;; Thunderclan, most likely.
rank;; Medicine Cat Apprentice
skills;; Applying herbs, collecting them exc.
personality;; Lichenpaw is considered lazy and laid back, and often sleeps in. She is sweet and kind, and has a great memory. Her claws aren't that sharp and her fang are blunt, which she uses to tug roots of herbs rather than clawing the enemies ears off. When pushed to her limit, she can work hard, but when bothered for no good reason will often ignore you.
other;; She's often compared to her hard working brother or her smart sister, even if she showed promise from a young age.

Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Her prefix is absolutely fine (and I'm very glad she doesn't look like her brother completely). I don't think she'd be a -leaf cat, though. Cats that have the -leaf in their name are extraordinarily skilled, and are considered prodigies. She doesn't seem like much of a prodigy (she can handle applying and collecting herbs, but that's pretty much it, unless the wording's just weird). I would advocate her as a -cloud cat.
Alternative Name: Lichencloud, for her calm, relaxed-to-the-point-of-laziness demeanor.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: The problem here is that you and the cats are comparing her to her siblings who have a life entirely different from hers. It'd be like comparing apples and grenades - two very different things, with very different purposes.
Medicine cats are absolutely invaluable. Warriors are a necessity, but there are much more of them than medicine cats. In the aftermath of a battle, it's the medicine cat who helps save lives and mend injuries, and without them, the Clan cats are certain to die a lot easier and a lot quicker.
It wouldn't matter if she had dull claws and fangs because she doesn't need them. She's sworn to a life of celibacy and peace, and in exchange she is one of the most important members of the Clan. Her parents should be honored that their little one has dedicated her life to saving others, and sure, they can be annoyed with her laziness - even though she probably wouldn't have too much to do on a quiet day. But she should never be appraised by something that doesn't really affect her life.

[Pokechu12]

I apologize for the wording. x3 I've also taken into account the other two's reviews! c:

description;; A white cat with various grey patches and green eyes.
name;; Knotpaw [Knotwhisker]
gender;; She-cat
clan;; Thunderclan, most likely.
rank;; Apprentice
skills;; Hunting.
personality;; Quite and intelligent and curious cat. She tends to be observant and quite well liked, always thinking before she jumps. While her body is lean, she isn't much of a runner, and prefers the low energy stalking before pushing the energy into pouncing. Knotpaw is quite good when it comes to helping others, and sticks by her friends.
other;; Again, part of the trio. I believe the picture is that of a bobtail, but Knotpaw doesn't have one.