white season discussion; officially closed, please lock

[selasphorys]

Manzanitaroot and Shiverpaw are done! Please let me know if they're accepted or if I need to fix something.

@brunchman2000
Can you please tell me if Shiverpaw's history is okay, since it involves Mousepaw and Frostfang? If not, I'll change it asap. Maybe the two apprentices could become friends. Two quiet kids struggling with their warrior training. Shiverpaw could really benefit from her sweet nature, and eventually he could learn to be brave for his younger cousin.

@SilentMelody
Could you let me know if Manzanitaroot's history with Mapleseed is okay? While she is more traditional than her former apprentice, they could still have had a good mentor-apprentice relationship. They're both selfless cats who speak for what they believe in. She could learn from him to be more open-minded over time. What are your thoughts?

[brunchman2000]

everything looks good to me! they are both accepted. rookstar will be shiverpaw's mentor (which should be an interesting dynamic...)

and I would love for shiverpaw and mousepaw to be friends! mousepaw has a very nurturing nature so I can see her comforting shiverpaw a lot, yet pushing him to be better

[NightWolf950]

Everyone as so many cute babes. I'm very excited for this rp to take off. :>

[brunchman2000]

me too! hopefully we can start soon :)

[SilentMelody]

@brunchman You're welcome to play Flowerstreak, if you'd like! I think the pairings between the mentors and the apprentices look great, I can't wait to see their interactions c:

@selasphorys I think Manzanitaroot's history is perfect! I like how you left it open to interpretation whether or not he actually followed her traditions or still uses them, but despite being rebellious he might do so from time to time out of sentiment c: He'd love to still visit her often and maybe even ask for her opinion on some injuries/diseases/herbs lol

Edit:
Oops, I just realized I have Palepaw and there's already a Paleflight,,, should I change his prefix??

[brunchman2000]

oh, paleflight and palepaw are in different clans so it should be alright. just didn't want them in the same clan cause it would be confusing!

edit: posted flowerstreak's form down below. please let me know if I got any info wrong @SilentMelody!

[brunchman2000]

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▓▓▓「 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 」❂
flowerstreak is a medium sized she-cat with burnt orange short fur and olive green eyes. she is quite an intimidating cat and apprentices often disperse whenever she's around. other warriors are a bit less skittish, but that doesn't mean they get along with her. her tongue is sharp and she can be rather arrogant. when she sets her mind on something, she will stop at nothing to get it. she longs to be the leader of rockclan and she constantly goes above and beyond to prove she is worthy. the only cat she shows any sort of warmth to is her sister, littleleaf, who she is very close with. while the two are essentially polar opposites, they get along very well and have clung together ever since their mother, vineleaf, perished in a forest fire. flowerstreak is fiercely loyal to her sister and would do anything for her.

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▓ name: flowerstreak
▓ gender: she-cat
▓ age: twenty-six moons
▓ rank: warrior
▓ clan: rockclan
▓ sexuality: bisexual/rom
▓ scent: honey

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▓▓▓「 𝐡𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 」❂
born into rockclan to a queen named vineleaf and a tom named eaglescar, flowerkit was the biggest of the litter of two. while she was a loud and eager kit, she showed no malice or ill will. she was a promising young cat and she spent her days with her mother and sister, growing closer to them both. it was only when a forest fire spread to camp and took the life of her mother that something changed in flowerpaw. she became bitter and hostile to her clanmates, clinging to her sister, littlepaw. the two became warriors together a few moons later and both serve their clan in vastly different ways today.




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❂ sister is littleleaf

[SilentMelody]

Flowerstreak looks perfect!! I think she and Littleleaf will get along well c:

[brunchman2000]

fallenstar is accepted and has been added to the front page!

[brunchman2000]

all are accepted. lynxbane will be tinypaw's mentor. we are just waiting on one more form and then we can start!