FirClan {Closed} and MoorClan {Open} {Discussion + Forms}

[detective who.]

Hello, Sousuke. Thank you for applying. I have a few notes on your character, though.

Wolf- isn't a traditional prefix. There are no wolves in England, outside of zoos and that sort of thing, so the Clan probably hasn't even heard of wolves.
-gaze isn't a traditional suffix, either, because unless good sight is put to use, there's no reason for it to have its own suffix. -claw would work much better when she becomes a warrior.
Also, I'm not sure how a pure-bred Maine Coon could have ended up in FirClan. Maine Coon are also susceptible to several health problems, including hip dysplasia and feline hypertrophic cardiomyopathy (a disease where a certain muscle of the heart thickens), which is very common in this breed and can lead to sudden cardiac death.

I'd be happy to have you as a part of our role play, but I'd really rather you look your molly over again first. Thank you.

Sherlock.

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Hello, Sousuke. Thank you for applying. I have a few notes on your character, though.

Wolf- isn't a traditional prefix. There are no wolves in England, outside of zoos and that sort of thing, so the Clan probably hasn't even heard of wolves.
-gaze isn't a traditional suffix, either, because unless good sight is put to use, there's no reason for it to have its own suffix. -claw would work much better when she becomes a warrior.
Also, I'm not sure how a pure-bred Maine Coon could have ended up in FirClan. Maine Coon are also susceptible to several health problems, including hip dysplasia and feline hypertrophic cardiomyopathy (a disease where a certain muscle of the heart thickens), which is very common in this breed and can lead to sudden cardiac death.

I'd be happy to have you as a part of our role play, but I'd really rather you look your molly over again first. Thank you.

Sherlock.

I went ahead and fixed everything. Please tell me if anything else is wrong. Thank you for allowing me another chance. "^^

[CoolComrade]

How many cats are going to be in the prophecy?

(Btw I like your cat Sousuke)

[Dezembro]

Just a heads up, I've changed my username from Silverheart777 to Dezembro. Y'all can just call me Dez

[detective who.]

Description - Gray British Longhair. Bright amber eyes.
Name - Graykit Graypaw Grayclaw
Gender - Molly
Rank - Apprentice
Age - 12 Moons
Personality - Calm and quiet. Quite shy around others.
Family - Not being rped.
Notable history - x
Skills/Weaknesses - Her hunting skills could be worked on, but she is a worthy opponent in battle.

Accepted! And you're welcome. Thank you for being flexible.

Catbug, one for each player. Note that it won't necessarily be a prophecy, though. I think I'm going to close this soon.

Dez, thanks for informing us. I'll go change that.

One more note for everyone: I'm going to put up an NPC list on the role play thread. If you have any NPCs you'd like on there, post them here or PM them to me. Thanks!

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(Btw I like your cat Sousuke)

Thank you! c:

[CoolComrade]

Do you want a picture for the NPCs?

[detective who.]

If you like. A written description would be nice too.

[CoolComrade]

Who: Mudpaw's mother
Name: Nightingalewhisker

Who: Mudpaw's father
Name: Hailstorm (Desceased)

Siblings:

Rainpaw (Molly)



Who: Battail's brother
Name: Cootface
(Except, y'know he doesn't sit on cars)

[Dezembro]

Figured I'd post my MoorClan cats while I have the time...I do not recall, if a leader retires, do they take on their old warrior name? I was planning to have Sagestar retire at one life left and have Rookfang become leader, so that I can see through roleplay who would be the best deputy for the Clan.

Description - Pale gray-and-white molly with long, feathery fur and green eyes
Name - Sagewhisker Sagestar
Gender - Molly
Rank - Leader Elder
Age - 96 moons {8 years}
Personality - A strict leader with a "my way or the high way" attitude. She is tough on her Clan, not because she enjoys being cruel, but because she believes that it is the best way to be a successful leader. She tries her best to be forgiving, but she believes in justice and "an eye for an eye" above all else.
Family - Her sister, Sedgeflower, and her nephew, Rookfang
Notable history - x
Skills/Weaknesses - A strong leader, a good hunter and leader; often close-minded when it comes to taking advice
Important notes - Always wanted kits, but was so focused on her ambition to be leader that she put it on the back burner, and ended up never starting a family of her own. 2 lives left

Description - Skinny black tom with white tuxedo markings and vibrant orange eyes.
Name - Rookfang Rookstar
Gender - Tom
Rank - Deputy
Age - 60 moons {5 years}
Personality - Although tender at heart, Rookfang often acts more courageous than he really is because he wants to impress his aunt, Sagestar. She took a chance on him when she made him deputy, and he refuses to disappoint her. Knowing how uptight she is, Rookfang has gotten over his timid nature and learned to take control and give order, proving to Sagestar that he was the right choice for deputy. Through a lifetime of his aunt teaching him how to be bolder, Rookfang has grown into a fine warrior and leader.
Family - Mother, Sedgeflower, and aunt, Sagestar
Notable history - x
Skills/Weaknesses - Well-balanced individual, good at fighting and hunting; tries to overcompensate for his naturally diffident personality by acting overly cocky and aggressive.
Important notes - Will be leader soon

Description - Molly with green eyes and long black fur, an unusual pelt color for MoorClan cats
Name - Sedgeflower
Gender - Molly
Rank - Elder
Age - 96 moons {8 years}
Personality - Sedgeflower is very motherly and family-oriented. Unlike her sister, Sagestar, Sedgewhisker did not care for climbing her way to the top. She was content with settling down early in her life. She has had four separate litters through her life, but most of her kits died very early due to complications during birth and genetic health problems. Sedgeflower often feels as though she 'failed' at being a mother because of her inability to have kits, so she can be overprotective of her only living son, Rookfang, to compensate.
Family - Her sister, Sagestar, and her son, Rookfang
Notable history - x
Skills/Weaknesses - Sweet and motherly, acts as the peacemaker during arguments and can get pushy if others don't agree to stop fighting; a pushover
Important notes - Retired early for her age