Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

oh wow thanks ! !yes silverheart is like a perfect mix of sandstorm,squirrelflight,and firestar all rolled into one cat her confidant tends to be grayfang she also confides in her future mate acornnose a lot too and what scares her? well squirrels she doesn't like squirrels and everyone makes fun of her for it. she did at one point have a close friendship with a male in another clan but she never actually crossed that line the code means to much to her for that

and grayfang is actually a good hunter in fact after he falls in love he refused to fight at all he wouldn't do border patrols or anything so yeah and he meets her in battle she was healing a fallen clanmate and he got shoved into the river and she saved him from drowning after that you know their story.

thank so much for doing this! its really cool and when im naming new warriors I will know to come you for advice!

p.s. and hitting the friend button!

I'm thrilled you liked my review! I'm also very glad there is some more to your characters that I didn't see. Come again, and thank you!

[Arcaii]

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[{Jayfeather}]

Image/Description: a grey cat with very soft, thick fur that has black and white speckles in it and a jet black tail tip and ear.
Name: Specklestar
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Senior Warrior
Important Notes: Leader of Thunderclan, has a feisty personality (much like that of Cinderpaw) she fell in love with a tom as a young warrior but couldn't have kits because of clan ways.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: a grey cat with very soft, thick fur that has black and white speckles in it and a jet black tail tip and ear.
Name: Specklestar
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Senior Warrior
Important Notes: Leader of Thunderclan, has a feisty personality (much like that of Cinderpaw) she fell in love with a tom as a young warrior but couldn't have kits because of clan ways.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Speckle- fits her just fine, and she's a leader, so of course she's going to have -star at the end.
Alternative Name: None.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: "Feisty" doesn't count for much, because it could mean a lot of things for a lot of people (I never did see Cinderpaw as feisty). Briefly describing them with one word doesn't give them any credit. I'd go into further detail if I were you.

Sorry this is so shot, I've got to head to school.

[Arcaii]

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[Arcaii]

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[Emmancipation]

Image/Description: Jaystar is 55 moons old, and a senior leader of Moonclan. Grey, blue, and white take up most of his coloring. Jay can be aggressive at times if his clan or himself are being improperly treated.

Name: Jaystar
Gender: Male
Clan: Moonclan
Rank: Leader
Important Notes: I actually use him to roleplay with. I've used him for 2-3 years now.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Jaystar is 55 moons old, and a senior leader of Moonclan. Grey, blue, and white take up most of his coloring. Jay can be aggressive at times if his clan or himself are being improperly treated.

Name: Jaystar
Gender: Male
Clan: Moonclan
Rank: Leader
Important Notes: I actually use him to roleplay with. I've used him for 2-3 years now.

As a fore-note, personalities and skills go in the "Important Notes" section. It doesn't really matter much how long you've been using a character, the character themselves is what's being addressed.

Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: Jay's defined traditional use is very close to his color - it's used for a grey-brown cat. This tom is very clearly a dark grey tabby, so the rating goes down a little. Since he's a leader, he will obviously have -star on the end of his name, so that's all well and good.
Alternative Name: Falconstar/Sycamorestar. Both are for a vaguely bluish or grey tabby cat, like yours.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: Any leader can - and should - be aggressive and upset if their Clan is being snubbed or cruelly treated. That's a given. I would elaborate on the aggressive part more. Maybe he's just naturally cranky, but he's very good at what he does, so the Clan respects him. Maybe he has this prideful, angry persona up in front of the other Clans, but in private he's more melancholy or calm. Did the original leader pick him for this exact reason, or did this aggressiveness show up as he got more into his role? Think about that.

[Emmancipation]

Thank you! This really actually helped a lot. What you said about him -- he has a angry/prideful front when faced against antagonisers, but more mellow/calm/relaxed when he is with his clan -- is correct. He is more of a red/grey. By blue, I had meant his eyes, actually. But thank you for your insight. I will try to improve his personality. ^^