Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer (ENDED)

[.kestral]

Just wondering, would you be willing to rate a more ruthless, clan like idea?

[Arcaii]

It would really depend on the Clan itself, but yes, I could rate it.

[.kestral]

They go by family rather than clan. There are four of them.

Clan Name:
Uisce, Teine, Aer and Domhan are the main four families, small families swear loyalty to them.
Territory:
These four groups of cats live in the city, it is a harsh place and prey is scarce. The oldest male of each family usually leads and cats desiring to live in his territory bring food as a tribute. There main camps are in abandoned two leg buildings. Everything is harder for these cats due to the harsh roads and paths, the lack of grass.
Notable History:
The city cats grew rapidly many years ago. Recently an alliance between Teine and Domhan has led to the destruction of Uisce who were the ruling group. Now the city is full of war.
Unique Skills:
These cats are used to a harsh life, it allows them to live on small amounts of food, lack of rest, and lack of water. They are a sturdy type of feline. They learn fighting skills from the moment they can keep there balance. They are taught to hunt at the same time.
Reputation/Personality:
Uisce generally left the woods alone and the others followed there lead. Now Teine have proved they are as dark as they seemed. They are a huge threat to the clans as they are converting more and more of the smaller families to there cause.
Average Clan Member:
A higher up cat, a member of a family or there inner circle are all generally quite well off. They have firm pawpads, and are often well built. A few go against this but generally they all fit the idea.
The normal cats, the pawns are often very skinny and underfed, they have the same firm pawpads but are often battle worn and well scarred.
Cats from Uisce and there territory's are usually pale colours, silver, white, grey, cream.
Teine cats contain the whole red spectrum from gold to ginger.
Domhan cats are often the darker ones, browns, blacks, tabbies.
Aer take in a larger mix, often containing the cats no one else wants.

Of course there are always exceptions, depending on what they think a cat is worth.
Important Notes:
These are the threat to the three clans I gave you.

[Arcaii]

They go by family rather than clan. There are four of them.

Clan Name:
Uisce, Teine, Aer and Domhan are the main four families, small families swear loyalty to them.
Territory:
These four groups of cats live in the city, it is a harsh place and prey is scarce. The oldest male of each family usually leads and cats desiring to live in his territory bring food as a tribute. There main camps are in abandoned two leg buildings. Everything is harder for these cats due to the harsh roads and paths, the lack of grass.
Notable History:
The city cats grew rapidly many years ago. Recently an alliance between Teine and Domhan has led to the destruction of Uisce who were the ruling group. Now the city is full of war.
Unique Skills:
These cats are used to a harsh life, it allows them to live on small amounts of food, lack of rest, and lack of water. They are a sturdy type of feline. They learn fighting skills from the moment they can keep there balance. They are taught to hunt at the same time.
Reputation/Personality:
Uisce generally left the woods alone and the others followed there lead. Now Teine have proved they are as dark as they seemed. They are a huge threat to the clans as they are converting more and more of the smaller families to there cause.
Average Clan Member:
A higher up cat, a member of a family or there inner circle are all generally quite well off. They have firm pawpads, and are often well built. A few go against this but generally they all fit the idea.
The normal cats, the pawns are often very skinny and underfed, they have the same firm pawpads but are often battle worn and well scarred.
Cats from Uisce and there territory's are usually pale colours, silver, white, grey, cream.
Teine cats contain the whole red spectrum from gold to ginger.
Domhan cats are often the darker ones, browns, blacks, tabbies.
Aer take in a larger mix, often containing the cats no one else wants.

Of course there are always exceptions, depending on what they think a cat is worth.
Important Notes:
These are the threat to the three clans I gave you.

Name Ratings: ?/10
Name Reasonings: I'm not really sure how to rate them, because their names could have come from anywhere. They could be a language-based naming (wherein the cats have their own languages and so the names do mean something; sometime I'll ramble about that theory in the Warrior's thread because it interests me greatly). They could be words that originally described their section of the territory or the original leaders, and eventually got melded down over time (Dominic eventually becoming Domhan, for example). They could just be made up words meant to sound cool. So I really don't know.

Family Ratings: 8/10
Family Reasonings: Overall, there isn't much...wrong with them. They sound like the feline mafia of sorts, and hey, you'll win my vote with that stuff. I think the only problem is the pawns being underfed. Any group would want to keep their numbers around, so they'd have to offer something, like protection, a safe meal, etc.
Suggestions: Figure out what keeps these pawns from usurping the heads of the families; what benefits do they have?

[.kestral]

The families have an inner circle made up of powerful cats, quite a few. They keep the pawns in line and defend he family. They also make up the main battle force if that helps. Pawns get a home, somewhere to hunt, there kits are given a haven until a certain age. But the family won't hunt for them, and won't let them live there for free, if that's helps?

Oh and sorry, I thought I put. The names translate into the four elements,

[Arcaii]

The families have an inner circle made up of powerful cats, quite a few. They keep the pawns in line and defend he family. They also make up the main battle force if that helps. Pawns get a home, somewhere to hunt, there kits are given a haven until a certain age. But the family won't hunt for them, and won't let them live there for free, if that's helps?

Oh and sorry, I thought I put. The names translate into the four elements,

Ahh. In the case of the names, I'd find something that more accurately describes them. It could be the name of the family (the toms carrying a surname of sorts - "Rook-son-Bin", with Rook- being the founder's name, or something). It could be the part of the city they own ("North-Alley", "Park-Street"). Things like that!

And, alright to the pawns thing. Just make sure they're satisfied, because it only takes a little for a group to revolt.

[.kestral]

Oh I know, and that idea becomes very important :p

[Arcaii]

Revolts are the ILLEST in fiction, I swear.

[.kestral]

Revolts are the ILLEST in fiction, I swear.

Illest?

[Arcaii]

Like sickest, coolest, raddest, etc. It's a little outdated, I think, but I feel like my goal in life is to gather up outdated slang and use it like there's no tomorrow!