Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Short-furred, pure white she-cat with green eyes.
Name: Swiftheart.
Gender: Female.
Clan: Depends on RP.
Rank: Warrior.
Personality/Skills: Skilled at hunting, tracking, climbing trees, etc. She isn't good at fighting as she often forms friendships with cats from other clans, and is quick to flee from confrontation- hence the name 'Swiftheart'.
Important Notes: Not really important, but she's my first official RP character.

Sorry for the wait!

Name Rating: 3/10
Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: Swift- is actually a traditional name, but it's not for a white cat nor does it denote a speedy one or a coward. It references the bird, not the adjective.
This name tries to insult the cat, rather than acknowledge her skills - to me, Swiftheart means a flighty feline afraid of commitment. She's got white fur and she's good at tracking, and that's worth something.
Alternative Name: Cloudnose/Clovernose. Both indicate a white cat, and I decided to focus on her tracking abilities moreso than her other traits.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: I think that you should narrow down her skills - she could be good at hunting because she's a great tracker, and I don't think she'd need to be particularly agile for that. Otherwise, she sounds fine, especially for a first time RP character!

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: white cat with grey splotches
Name: moss-???
Gender: male
Clan: thunde
Rank: warrior
Personality/Skills: he is a smart cat, but is very jealous of his older siblings because he is the youngest and the weakest. He is brave and loyal and would never ever challenge the warrior code

Important Notes: He is not very good at fighting, but is an amazing hunter. When he was doing his warrior test, he caught 15 Pieces of prey! He had a mate, but she died giving birth, and only one kit survived, the kit was called echokit, and became the leader of shadowclan. (Thats another story for another time)

Name Rating: 4/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: Moss- doesn't count as a traditional name, since moss is mostly green. Any different colored moss isn't really found in the UK where the cats would be.
As for his suffix, he's a very good hunter, so that's certainly worth a name.
Alternative Name: Knotwhisker/Ternwhisker. Both indicate a white-and-grey cat, and the -whisker is for his skills in hunting.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: Loyalty is finally up on a common traits list, and basically, it states that loyalty is a required thing. You don't need to mention it in a Clan cat. Sticking to the rules like tape is just fine, though, since there are varying degrees of loyalty. I'm a little concerned about the name of the kit, but otherwise I don't think that there's much to complain about, other than a suggestion to add some more to his personality.

[Arcaii]

Thank you! I was just wondering since I find making warrior cat out of those kind of breeds interesting. c: I have a few you might see.

Description: A short tom with brown tabby fur and no tail.
Name: Larkcloud or maybe Larkheart?
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: -Undecided-
Rank: Medicine Cat

Personality: A tom that is considerate and patient. He does try to have a logical approach to everything, and sometimes doubts others for their actions. He is often seen silent, but does speak his opinion if he feels is won't offend anyone. Larkcloud is also quite interested in others, which may make him seem nosy. This short cat also occasionally takes things the wrong way and insults to heart.
Skills: Debating, [If that's a skill. |D] Interpertating and Memorizing things.

Important Notes: I was trying to find a more brownish tabby, but I think the one on the right fights the prefix Lark.

Have you been looking through the list on the front page of this thread for traditional names to see if a name fits?! Has someone actually done that?!?!
(faint squealing)

Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: His prefix is just fine for him, if you're still looking for a picture (might I suggest one?). He's a little grey, but I think that you could easily fix that with a browner cat.
I'm not sure whether to put him on -cloud or -heart, mostly because the two personalities will often conflict, but I would suggest going with a -heartier cat (haha, im clever).
Alternative Name: Larkheart.

Character Rating: 6/10
Character Reasoning: Like I said above, his personality does contradict a little. I think you've got more going for him as a -heart cat, though. He could still be patient, in a stubborn sort of way, but nosy and considerate are a little mishmashy. Put emphasis on speaking his opinion, but in a persuasive way. He could easily be good with words (he is, indeed, a debater) and while a cat who's good at interpretation could be a -nose, I think that he'd be great as a convicted, strong-willed cat who charms others with well-chosen words and a clear view on the world's injustices.

[Pokechu12]

Thank you! I was just wondering since I find making warrior cat out of those kind of breeds interesting. c: I have a few you might see.

Description: A short tom with brown tabby fur and no tail.
Name: Larkcloud or maybe Larkheart?
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: -Undecided-
Rank: Medicine Cat

Personality: A tom that is considerate and patient. He does try to have a logical approach to everything, and sometimes doubts others for their actions. He is often seen silent, but does speak his opinion if he feels is won't offend anyone. Larkcloud is also quite interested in others, which may make him seem nosy. This short cat also occasionally takes things the wrong way and insults to heart.
Skills: Debating, [If that's a skill. |D] Interpertating and Memorizing things.

Important Notes: I was trying to find a more brownish tabby, but I think the one on the right fights the prefix Lark.

Have you been looking through the list on the front page of this thread for traditional names to see if a name fits?! Has someone actually done that?!?!
(faint squealing)

Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: His prefix is just fine for him, if you're still looking for a picture (might I suggest one?). He's a little grey, but I think that you could easily fix that with a browner cat.
I'm not sure whether to put him on -cloud or -heart, mostly because the two personalities will often conflict, but I would suggest going with a -heartier cat (haha, im clever).
Alternative Name: Larkheart.

Character Rating: 6/10
Character Reasoning: Like I said above, his personality does contradict a little. I think you've got more going for him as a -heart cat, though. He could still be patient, in a stubborn sort of way, but nosy and considerate are a little mishmashy. Put emphasis on speaking his opinion, but in a persuasive way. He could easily be good with words (he is, indeed, a debater) and while a cat who's good at interpretation could be a -nose, I think that he'd be great as a convicted, strong-willed cat who charms others with well-chosen words and a clear view on the world's injustices.

Haha, yeah. I read the other reviews, and check the front before officially naming my cat. I like the naming scheme so I try to stick with it now. Taking into account the review, I've changed him up now~

[Arcaii]

Haha, yeah. I read the other reviews, and check the front before officially naming my cat. I like the naming scheme so I try to stick with it now. Taking into account the review, I've changed him up now~

YOU READ THE REVIEWS AND CHECKED THE FRONT AAAAAA

I'm really happy I could help you! Please let me know if you need any more help.

[wolfsong-mapleflame]

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Name: can you please make a poetic name for her?
Gender: female
Clan: shadowclan
Rank: deputy
Personality/Skills: she known to the other clans as a fierce warrior, but inside her clan she is mysterious and dark. No-one seems to know anything about her, not even her history. One day, she just appeared and everyone accepted her. One thing everyone knows, though, is that she is loyal. But unknowing to them all, is that she has a mate in stream clan, shadowstream. He is also known as being loyal and understanding, but no-one knows about them, yet...
Looking for a name in the category poetic, and a rating on her personality.

[corrosive_limes]

Its my opinion that Shadowclan is the wrong clan for her. Why? Because Shadowclan is known for being openly hostile toward kittypets and loners, and would be the last clan to accept a mysterious cat like her. I'd suggest Thunderclan for her instead, because they'd be more likely to accept her.

[Arcaii]

Its my opinion that Shadowclan is the wrong clan for her. Why? Because Shadowclan is known for being openly hostile toward kittypets and loners, and would be the last clan to accept a mysterious cat like her. I'd suggest Thunderclan for her instead, because they'd be more likely to accept her.

ShadowClan's interpretation in general is very iffy in the books; they could easily have changed in the timeline this cat would be at. Besides that, she did ask me to review her cat, so let me handle it, if you'd please.

[wolfsong-mapleflame]

Actually, shadowclan was autocorrect. I meant shadeclan,

[Arcaii]

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Name: can you please make a poetic name for her?
Gender: female
Clan: shadowclan
Rank: deputy
Personality/Skills: she known to the other clans as a fierce warrior, but inside her clan she is mysterious and dark. No-one seems to know anything about her, not even her history. One day, she just appeared and everyone accepted her. One thing everyone knows, though, is that she is loyal. But unknowing to them all, is that she has a mate in stream clan, shadowstream. He is also known as being loyal and understanding, but no-one knows about them, yet...
Looking for a name in the category poetic, and a rating on her personality.

Miss, I think you missed the entire point of the thread. This isn't a station for gorram poetry. We focus on practicality here. If the name happens to sound nice, then it sounds nice, but that is not the point of traditionalism. I will give you a name that fits her, and that's all I'll be able to do.

Name Rating: None
Name Type: None
Name Reasoning: It's hard to make a deliberation on a suffix when she's apparently so mysterious that absolutely no one, not even the people that live with her on a regular basis, know what she's like. She'll have to go with default descriptors.
She's a brown tabby, so she ought to get a name from that area!
Alternative Name: Adderpelt/Bramblepelt. You can use -fur instead, or -stripe, though it'd be a little redundant with brown tabby implying prefixes.

Character Rating: 5/10
Character Reasoning: A cat cannot be mysterious living in a Clan. That's just not a thing. You are literally living with these cats for your entire life. They're going to know you, one way or the other. And she wouldn't be able to make it into a Clan known for being rather hostile towards any outsiders with no history or openness around her unless she had been picked up as a kitten. As much as I don't appreciate someone butting in on my reviews, Zenstar does have a point.
I would do this: get rid of the mysterious factor. There's no point in having it on a Clan cat. Have her be picked up as a kit, and earn her way to deputyhood. Have there be more to her than "mysteriousness". Go into her personality, how she interacts with others, who she sees as kin and who she'd rather not talk to, and why. She needs some personality if she wants to be a deputy.